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Don't Die Again
By : Dragoneater
Category: InuYasha > General
Views: 2924 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0Disclaimer: I do not own InuYasha, nor make money from this story. - Chapter List
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Disclaimer : I don’t own InuYasha…
O.K I have changed a few things corrected some errors, put in some things taken out some things. Read it tell if I fixed things. It is not much of a difference from the first one, just little words that are different. You will have to wait for new chapters through I have to fix the other one too.
Don’t Die Again
Prologue
In the middle of the night two figures crept across the Higurashi Shrine yard, making their way toward the house. Not bothering to stealthy break in, but simply kicking the door opened with a loud bang, waking the sleeping residents inside. After a brief moment of silence, came short screams and thumps coming from with in.
"Stop! Don’t hurt daddy," a seven-year-old girl yelled. She clutched in her pregnant mother arms. An elderly man laid unconscious a few feet away.
"Don’t be foolish now. All we want is the girl. I told you, we could do this the easy way or the hard way. You chose the hard way it’s not our fault," said a large man who’s face was unseen by the shadow of night.
He had his foot press into Mr. Higurashi chest, who was struggling to take in air.
"Come to us little Kagome, you don’t want to see your daddy hurt more, do you?" said the second man leaning against a wall.
"Kagome no," came a rash whisper.
"Shut up!" said the first man as he ped ped Mr. higurashi chest. Mr. Higurashi let out groan, as he felt is chest sinking in.
"Stop it!" Kagome screamed. More tears running down her face. She pushed out of mother arms crawling on her hands and knees towards her father. She heard her mother whisper her name. "Daddy" She shook her father’s shoulder.
"Come on" the first man said, as pick up Kagome by the collar of her pajama shirt.
"No" she screamed, struggling to reach her father.
"Kagome!" said Mrs. Higurashi, as she was up running toward the man, who had her daughter. She started beat her fists against the man. He did not seem affected by it. The second man leaning against the wall came behind her and grabbed her around the throat. He closed his arm around her throat cutting off her air supply. After a moment, her struggling ease she she fall limp against his chest.
"Mommy!" said Kagome, as she struggled harder.
"Mommy is not dead, she’s will be sleeping for a while through," the man said setting her mother on the floor.
"Be a good little girl and your daddy can with us, so you won’t be alone. Be an extra good little girl and you be able to see your mommy again," said the man holding Kagome.
"I will see mommy again," Kagome squeaked out.
"If you be a good girl. Let go!" said the man walking out the door. The second man grabbed Mr. Higurashi and put him on his shoulder, then followed the first man out the house.
Mrs. Higurashi, sat at the table feeding her two-year old son, Souta. He had a big smile on his face waving his hands up and down, giving a big baby laugh. She wished she could be happy and carefree with him, but her husband and daughter were gone. She had called the police as soon as she woke up. She made missing person posters; put out rewards for any information to find them, Grandpa was trying to a finding spell, but it did not work everything she tried did not work. Nevertheless, she would not stop; she would not stop until she found them.
She spooned more of the baby food from the bowl. "Open wide," said as she fed Souta.
She laid her down on the table, she silently cried. Then, the doorbell rang. She got up and walked to the door. It was properly someone telling her they found no leads to her family.
She opened the door to find a little girl. Kagome!
Mrs. Higurashi kneed down and hugged her daughter, now she was crying audio into Kagome’s shoulder. After a moment Mrs. Higurashi pull away, but keeping her hands on her shoulders. Kagome stared back her mother with a blank face.
What have they done to her?
"Kagome are you alrig Whe Where is your father?"
Kagome reached to her neck pulling out a necklace beneath her shirt, holding it to her mother to see. It had a jewel shaped like a teardrop.
The teardrop color was red as red as blood.
"Daddy."
O.K How was that? This is my 1st fic.
I have rewritten it fix the mistakes. I hope all of them. If anybody wants to help me fix my grammar mistakes, Review or email me. I will finish the rewriting nex next chapter in a few days.
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