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Reviews for Dirty Life

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - Alaskantiger on March 13, 2004
    Intresting chapter. Just like the rest. I can't wait to read more! Thanks for sharing! :)
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  • From ANON - Alaskantiger on March 12, 2004
    This is a great chapter! Poor Mirkou and Rin. I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - the Guardian on March 12, 2004
    Yo!! I myself am not very talkative but i must say that ......... I LOVE YOUR STORY. It's really good. So dark and angsty. PLease update soon. Ja
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  • From ANON - tigers_eye on March 12, 2004
    L the the chap. Please don't let Naraku get hold of Rin! Mostly cause that sort of thing turns my stomach (not your writing, just a young girl of that age ending up as a hooker). You already hinted at Shippo, which is one thing I praise you for: you didn't get graphic w/ him. That really would have turned me off as a reader. Anyway, I'm guessing the female client is Kikyo, just cause things seem to be setting up that way. If IY is being paid to "escort" her to a party, might be a good place for Sango & Kag to be brought in. Anyway, keep up the good work. Been loving the fic, even if, like some of your reviewers, I lean towards the more bilbically moral side of the issue.
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  • From ANON - SkatCat on March 12, 2004
    Poor Miroku! *sniff* I'm glad you didn't put in the part where he was brutalized, me eyes were getting a bit watery just thinking of what he was about to go through. And Rin listening in the bathroom! I definitely would have been bawling. Miroku seems to be getting the short end of the stick a lot. Thank god for Rin! He deserves something good to happen to him, even if it's just something small. Oh, and thanks a lot for adding in Kouga in. I love that wolf and just had to see him somewhere in your fic. =^_^= I love this fic! Looking forward to the next chap!
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  • From ANON - nina on March 12, 2004
    I really like how you handled Kagura and Inuyasha. That was a good brief first session. I'm also happy that you opted not to give us a play by play description of Miroku getting knocked around and abused. Especially with Rin in the bathroom. It wasn't necessary for the story to read well.commcommend you on knowing when to give us hot details and when not to. Can't wait for Koga to enter. He has to be with Inuyasha and be really, really gentle. Then maybe he could request Kagura and give her a rough time. That I would like to see. Also, Koga could somehow know Kag and Sango and eventually help Mir and Inu escape this life and run off with Kag and Sango. (listen to me, Blah, Blah, Blah.) Anyway, can't wait for the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2004
    COOLNESS! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Marieka on March 12, 2004
    I don't know what enticed me to read this, but once I started reading it
    I got sucked in by the freakish realism.
    You have depicted the emotional aspect very well.

    TY for sharing.
    Now I’m anxiously awaiting S’more.
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  • From ANON - KagoKitty on March 12, 2004
    wow...that wasn't bad for inuyasha's first time with a woman!!
    i hate that rin's getting mixed up in miroku's dirty life (pardon the bad pun), but...gah!! i'm probably more confused then anyone else when trying to figure this out!! you always surprise me!! i think i might need to leave the plot solely up to you before i bust somethin' too.
    update soon!!
    =^-.~^=
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  • From ANON - amyfushigiyugi on March 12, 2004
    poooor miroku awwwwwwwwwwwww
    got to love him
    and inu damn he was good even for his first time
    cant wait on sessy to come in yummmy
    waiting on next update
    love the story ^_^
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  • From Numisma on March 12, 2004
    once again, an excellent chapter. i was snorting and giggling at how Kagura basically patronized/mocked Inuyasha w/ the whole "this is where you put this" *ROFL* damn, he came quickly for his first time.
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  • From ladykagome0818 on March 12, 2004
    Wow... I must say, that when I read the first chapter of this, I HATED it. Somehow it just seemed to taint Inuyasha, but I kept reading on hoping that there might be some form of saving grace for Inuyasha. You do a good job depicting the scenes, including the emotional anguish that has to be there.

    As tormenting as this story is, it is also enlightening. You are a magnficent writer. I would also like to see some work without the mental anguish.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Hentai Master on March 12, 2004
    wow that was so sad for Miro and his sis and I wanna know whow inu is going to be umm.. you know, with.
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  • From ANON - Princess Kai on March 11, 2004
    I absolutely adore this fic. And it's definitely not because of the yaoi... because like you i have my problems with it. But, it's because of the confidence you have in your writing. You really bring across the feelings of the characters and their plight! It's such a great fic! I feel terribly for Miroku and Inuyasha, and I think even a little worse for Miroku since he has the problems with Rin and he had to go through a situation like... that... with his best friend! I just really want those two to find happiness in Kagome and Sango! But... now it's my time to whine (sorry! ^-^). i really love this story but i don't don't don't want Inuyasha to have his "first time" w/a girl be with Kagura! Ugh... i really hate her... ok, maybe i don't hate her, but it makes me cringe to think she'd be Inu's first! She's skeevy! LOL... but then again, it's your fic, so whatever you wanna do will be great! Good job on this i really love it and i hope you'll updaoon!oon!
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  • From ANON - Xenia on March 11, 2004
    Great story... I can't wait to see what happens next!

    And I hope Kouga makes an appearance somewhere... but then, I'm one of those annoying people who thinks Kouga should be in EVERY story ;) *L*
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