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Reviews for Fragments of Broken Pride

By : Areitus
  • From ANON - Avid Reader on May 02, 2004
    you have 16 reviews now so yes people do like your fic I on the other hand LOVE your fic I just found it today and will maybe if I have time leave a review each time you up-date
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  • From ANON - ladykaa28 on May 02, 2004
    I't 't know about the other people, but I like it. I want to see just how you make it into a triangle between the three. So far I see it with Inuyasha and Kagome, then Inuyasha and just a little bit of Sesshoumaru, but how will it be for Kagome and Sess? I see that she cares for him because he is Inu's brother, but what else?
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2004
    Great story...not something i've seen to often. kee kee up, up, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - beth on May 02, 2004
    great story i love it please continue.
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  • From ANON - Jade on May 02, 2004
    Write More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Write More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Need more story ^.^
    WANT, NEED, HAVE, TO HAVE, SESSHOUMARU NAKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - AlesserBeing on May 02, 2004
    wtf, all these hits and hardly any reviews? *looks bewildered*
    S'alright, i'll tickle 'em to death for ya ^.~
    I, for one, liked this story. Can't wait to see more! lol

    *huggles*
    ~Alesser*Being~

    p.s..just make sure there's lotsa lemony yaoi-goodness, K? lmao..Thanx;D
    A;D
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 27, 2004
    You know I had to read that 'I want a brother' part...ahem...TWICE before the meaning sunk in. :-)

    But I do like your continuity and how it flows....uh can I go on a limb and say you won't be pairing up Lord S' in this, will you? Because I'm all about Kagome & the cutie with the puppy dog ears. o___o

    Also, I feel Sesshoumaru should have part of his arm back, too, after a long period of time. I mean what's the point of being FULL youkai if you can't heal a missing arm a little faster than usual?
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  • From ANON - Gaby on April 26, 2004
    Very nice! I k yok you stick to their characters very well. I also like the fact that you have Seshy and Inuyasha treating each other with an ounce of respect (for once). I have not seen many fics do that and make it convincing. I think this fic has a lot of potential and I hope you continue it. Hope this review helps!
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  • From ANON - kaora on April 25, 2004
    Yeah i like this fic, just don't bring seshoumaru's trust too quickly, not too OOC if ya get me. and i lopve sesh/kag fics, so make it into a kag/sesh fic! lol. poor inu but yeah,hey. bye!
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  • From ANON - Shinna on April 24, 2004
    This was a really interesting fanfic. Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
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  • From ANON - Maxwell-chan on April 24, 2004
    Hey! i really like your story! ^^ I like how you managed to keep sesshy still in character, despite the circumstances. Just a couple of things I noticed though.. in the first chapter you said he was on his hands and knees and that he lifted one arm to hold his stomach and I thought I should mention that sesshoumaru only has one arm, since inu cut the other one off. Also, in the second chapter you had Inuyasha retrieve Toukajin for Sesshy and I thought you should mention what happened to Tenseiga. But maybe that's part of your explanation of where Rin and Jaken are, i don't really know ^__~ well, anyway, sorry to sound kind of nitpicky ^^;;...great story!
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  • From ANON - Lady Tennyou on April 24, 2004
    I like I like!! aww... Sesshy granted Inu's request!! yay! I hope they still argue though.. it would be weird if Sesshy started making dinner.. or.. washing clothes.. o.0 lol update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Levii on April 20, 2004
    I like this a lot! I can't wait to read more! Really good plot idea! Wish I'd thought of it... (grumbles)... An-nyways, I hope you update soon! I eagarly anticipate the next chapter!

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mischief on April 20, 2004
    I really like it so far. Keep up the good writing
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  • From ANON - snowfall on April 19, 2004
    I like this story verrrry much. Keep writing, and if you would, separate the the speaking parts from the paragraphs. It would make it a lot easier to read. Thanks
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