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Reviews for Fragments of Broken Pride

By : Areitus
  • From ANON - Shinna on June 19, 2004
    That was an excellent chapter. Towards the end I was in tears. I wonder what could of killed Rin? Can't Sesshoumaru bring her back with his sword? Keep up the good work. update soon
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  • From ANON - Jade28 on June 18, 2004
    Tell me where is Tenseaga? Why could Lord Fluffy not save Rin's eye sight with it? AND WHY, WHY KILL OF HIS RIN!? She was the only thing keeping him sane. I liked this story up until you killed the girl. Hasn't she been through enough?
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  • From ANON - Kimeko on June 18, 2004
    JUST "WOW!!!!!" CHP.8 ALMOST CRYED.
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  • From ANON - Lady Hoshi on June 16, 2004
    thank you so much for updating. i love your writing. please keep up all your good work.
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  • From ANON - Shinn½ on March 02, 0000
    I hope Inuyasha gets there in time to help Sesshoumaru. update soon
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 13, 2004
    After reading this, I'm definitely feeling the pain of Sesshoumaru and longing of Inuyasha for family, but I must say 'does Sesshoumaru HAVE to be put in a relationship?'

    I think the story is doing fine w/o such a thing with the focus on angst and revenge. I just want to see how the characters will develop in this, I guess.
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  • From ANON - lady hoshi on June 11, 2004
    omg, that last scene was beautiful. i started crying at once. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Blue Saiyan Angel on June 10, 2004
    Very restresting story you have here. There is one error that I would like to point out if no one else has already. In chapter 5, you make a statement about Sesshoumaru reviving with the sword Toukajin. That is his evil sword. It is actually the sword Tenseiga(not sure about spelling) that is the healing sword. This seems to be a very long story. Especially since there has not been very much touchy feely interaction between any of the characters. Poor Rin. I would have liked to have had a little warning that that kind of angst was coming. Well, enough rambling. Update soon. Can't wait to see how this progresses. TTFN
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  • From ANON - starbunnie on June 05, 2004
    Ow! Tw! This is a really great story! Please keep writing soon! I really want to know what happens next to poor little Rin! Noone ever writes for her and it's so sweet!
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  • From ANON - pianita on May 22, 2004
    I have followed your story and i am very intriged of what you are leading your characters into. will thee be a Sesshoumaru kamoge romance? will Rin survived???
    Well, keep on writing.

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  • From ANON - snowfall on May 22, 2004
    I really like this story. It delves into the character's psyche with much detail. I await the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Nina on May 21, 2004
    Tis sis such a great story. I'm really enjoying it. Poor Rin. I hope she at least gets her sight back. That was a little harsh, but then Naraku is a stone cold bastard. I like the way you have Inu and Sess slowly reconciling. Nice job. But don't forget about those lemons now.
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  • From ANON - Catchfire on May 13, 2004
    Please please don't stop writing. I just love these three together and your story is the best one I've seen yet. Look at your injured foot as an excuse to sit at the computer a really long time writing. Just make sure you take advil regularly to keep the pain level and swelling down. Hope your better soon.
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  • From ANON - Oishi on May 11, 2004
    Applause for DRAMA, keep up the the tension. Thought that maybe it was alittle too early for Seesh ouchouch IY's cheek, but that doesn't ruin it for me. Hope your next update is soon!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - krystle on May 11, 2004
    I really liked it and i ct wat wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!
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