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Reviews for Fragments of Broken Pride

By : Areitus
  • From ANON - misticrose1 on November 30, 2004
    i really like this story i hope you update real soon.
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  • From ANON - Stefanie on November 23, 2004
    It has been hard to find really good Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha stories and am glad that I found yours. ^_^

    I do have one problem with it though and that's Kagome. -_- In your summary you've writen M/F which I take to mean Inuyasha/Kagome, and then F/M/M which I think means Kagome/Inuyasha/Sesshoumaru. -_- Do you really have to involve her like that? Can't she be shoved into the background and forgotten? ^_^ Sess/Inu FOREVER!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! *cough*

    Okay I'll stop now...
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2004
    So awesome!!!!! But I want to see an Uke Sesshoumaru!!!!! Look that face!!!!! The man was build to be an Uke ^_____^.
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  • From ANON - Bgatorgirl86 on November 21, 2004
    I LOVE your story....seriously. It's definatly one of the best I've read in a looooong time!

    Keep up the good work!

    ~A beloved fan~
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  • From ANON - Stefanie on November 18, 2004
    I love your story, please keep writing. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ladykaa28 on November 06, 2004
    I do apologize for not reviewing like I should. I have been very busy lately at work. But in the last two chapters I would have to say that they were amazing. To see Sesshoumaru have so many emotions and not fight against them was wonderful. To me it made him a bit more touchable with out losing the regal effect. I also liked how you made Inuyasha turn human during this, because it just helped in my opinion with Sesshoumaru allowing his brother to see him smile and laugh. If you don't hear from me as often, please don't think that I have forgotten about you. It's Christmas time at work and I run the Christmas shop. Until things slow down just a bit I'll be just a little late with the reviews. Aand most likely review more than one at a time.
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  • From ANON - Calix of Heaven on November 06, 2004
    I like the story...I read it before. Please continue writing that was the best slash I read in awhile....I don't normally read slash but ohwell. To be honest I'm more a henteadeeader that reads M/F/M threesomes. Wow I realy am a pervert...keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - snowfall on November 05, 2004
    I love this story and cry for Sess. He is so heartbroken. I hope this isn't the end. I want to see a full recovery for the Lord of the Western Lands. I want my hanyou marked, dammit! And, I want to see Kagome's reaction. You have more writing to do, uh huh. Lovely story, and such insight into the emotions of each character. Keep up the good work. If this isn't posted in the yoai section, it needs to be.

    Snowfall aka hanyou slave
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  • From ANON - beth on November 05, 2004
    OMG!!!!! Don't leave it at that cliffy!!!! You have a great story here and it definitely deserves more reviews than it has. So, igomegome gonna walk in on Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru?? Hehe. Can't wait for the next update!

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2004
    I wonder what Kagome would say if she saw this Maybe she'd think it was getting very hot in there ^__^
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  • From ANON - me on November 05, 2004
    Ack!!! You're ending there?!?!?!?! Ugh! It was getting sooooo good then too! Oh well, I guess I shall wait patiently for you to update. It better be soon though! Cots ots on such a well written story!
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  • From ANON - richonyx on November 04, 2004
    What the f--? Nothing to say? THS A S A FRIGGIN GREAT STORY! I will beat you with a bloody stump if you discontinue! I'm happy the brothers finally got together (great lemon, by the way), and I'm interested in seeing how lil' Miss Kagome fits into all of this. Oh, and I thought you were masterful with the beginning--Naraku, Rin, the heartbreak (OK, I was really crying with that one). The plot is great! The smut is better! Please don't make me hurt you to get my point across! Continue, continue, continue!
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  • From ANON - sutlesarcasm on November 04, 2004
    Well, now. I have read a few Inu/Sess/Kag fics, but none that have kept me this interested. What are you planning on having this go. At this point, Inu seems to care for Kagome, but is more enthralled with Sess, who at this point seems to be restrested only in Inu Yasha. You are doing a very good job with this fand and I hope to see you continue to update. The story line is consistant, the dialog is smooth, and very well put together. By the way, thanks for giving Sess back his pride, I just couldn't stand having him so lost and down trodden. Hopfully you will make this a true Inu/Kag/Sess fic. I don't review often, but I really wanted to encourage you to continue. You have talant.
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  • From ANON - wheezambu on November 04, 2004
    Yeeehaa! That last chapter was hot, I damn near fell off me chair! Felt so bad for Sessh, never seen him so beaten down....it was awful. Not your writing, that was good. But I stuck thh ith it because I knew there had to be some yaoi coming up (pun intended). And it was worth it! I'm just a crazed yaoi fangirl....cool story, write more like it!!
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  • From ANON - KogasHentaiLuver on November 02, 2004
    That was a great lemon. Nicely done. Really hot and sensual. I just loved the banter they shared at the end. How funny. Inu was so in character with the playful banter. I really enjoyed it and can't wait for more.
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