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Reviews for Fragments of Broken Pride

By : Areitus
  • From ANON - hanyou slave on December 21, 2004
    I found the chapter with human Inu in bed with Sess sweet and at the same time amusing. I look forward to reading the other chapters you have posted.
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  • From ANON - Golden on December 21, 2004
    Yea, I think I remember reading part of this story on another sn. Wow... It just keeps getting os much better... It's so damn depressing, I just love reading this stuff... And SessxInu is always a plus. Gotta feel so bad, for ALL the charaters in this story. Mainly Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha, and Kagome. They are doing as much as they can for the youkai lord, and he seems to be getting better... I sure hope he is. Wow, and he goes from fucking his brother one night and then the very next night, he goes on to get Kagome. Wow. Can't wait to see what will happen next. Will Inuyasha stumble in on them and feel rejected to the highest degree by Sesshoumaru? Or will he be, shall we say, inticed by it? I can't wait for you to update again!!!!!!

    TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
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  • From ANON - Calix of Heaven on December 21, 2004
    I read this fic whenever I find it....even though i don't normally read yaoi....Good job. Please cointinue with this fic it is a good one and I like reading it.
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  • From ANON - Rosa on December 21, 2004
    N-No!You had to end it there?! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on December 21, 2004
    Stayed up till almost three am reading this story, and I love every chapter of it. Poor horny sesshoumaru..*Sniffles.* And I didnt even get to see the sex between kagome and sessy! Darnit, you have to write the rest, because...Well, I said so mnn!*Sticks her tongue out at writer.* Now get to writing. *Pushes in the direction of the computer.*
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  • From ANON - Catchfire on December 21, 2004
    Great you finally updated. So will it be that Sess gets both Inuyasha's and Kagome's virginity separately or will Inuyasha walk in and catch them? Embarrassing the hell out of Kagome and maybe Sess asking if he'd like to join them with a smirk on his face. Which hopefully he will do. Or perhaps they will make love fall asleep in each other's arms and then Inuyasha will walk in in the morning waking them up and then getting the invitation from Sess to join them or perhaps smirking and asking if he can join in. Which they or Sess anyway will say yes to. Also I think that Inuyasha should think things over in the woods about the differences in the way that Sess acted the night before and the way he acted in the morning and come to the realization/conclusion that Sess is just trying to push him away. So that he won't get hurt again. But whatever you do please let it have a happy ending with the three of them together. Although I hope that they all get together and then the story lasts a lot longer. Maybe with them hunting down Naraku. Along with lots of lemons in the meantime. It would be interesting to see what the others thought of the three of them being together especially Shippou. I wonder if he would ask Kagome if he now has two Daddy's? Now THAT would be interesting! So Great Story it's one of my favorites and keep up the great work!!! I just love this trio and there aren't nearly enough fics of them.
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  • From ANON - Ceres on December 20, 2004
    update soon!!!
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  • From ryukotsusei on December 20, 2004
    Awesome story, You've definitely got my attention. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Loki on December 13, 2004
    So far Ithink its very good ,and that really like it no love it if they loved Kagome as much as they love eachother. I think it would be perfect since they would all get all the love they desearve times two. Not to mention the extremly hot, cute,and sweet sex they could have. So PLZ PLZ PLZ let them love kagome as much as they love eachother. I was also wandering if and when kikyo was going to show up (Plz don't let them any of them be mached with her. I mean at least not in this fic. I think this fic is great with it being I/K/S pairing, pluse I just don't think a kikyo paring would fit this fic.) and iff she does I can't wait to see if shes put to rest, if shes just really cold, or if shes evil and trys to kill kagome or Kagome along with everyone else. Also I was wandering if and when Koga shows up and how Sess and Inu react to him cheking on His (Koga's) woman. That seen could be funny as hell. And I was wandering if Sess would go through the well with Inu and Kagome(could you imagen her grampas reaction to a full demon or better yet the full demons reaction to the demon) or if not go through the well his reaction to learning about the well and its power. Last but not least If you make Inu, Kagome, and Sess are a trio could you make it where Kagome lives as long as Inuyasha and Sesshomaru? Now that thats out of the way I would just like to say thank you for writing and sharing your wonderful story with everyone, and that even if you don't make it an Inu/Kag/Sess fic ( oh the pain at the thought it would be so perfect Plz if you haven't already just think about it.) I sure that you know what your doing, and I will continue to read this story. I'm sorry if I seem over opinionated( I know I spelt that wrong and yes I know it's sad so sorry.) but you seemed to want to know our thoughts and feelings about the story so thats what I put. I also made this long since you said you didn't get many reveiws. So thanks again for the story Plz update soon
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  • From ANON - Black Raven on December 11, 2004
    Very Cool Story, there is gonna be more, right?...RIGHT?!?
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  • From ANON - snowecat on December 11, 2004
    Why worry about how many reviews you've gotten? Finish it for the sake of the story itself and for no other reason. It's so sad about Rin. What about Kagome, will she figure into the brother's joining? I think it'd be cool if they both mated her. Will you be continuing on this any time soon?
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  • From ANON - Denisse on December 06, 2004
    Your history is ESPECTACULAR!!!!!! but you don't have a lot of reviews because you publish it together. The people who has many reviews is because they publish their histories chapter by chapter.
    So... let me tell you something.
    YOU ARE REALLY GREAT AND YOUR ART IS THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!
    You are an amazing writer.
    Please, continue soon
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  • From ANON - vashta on December 04, 2004
    When is Kagome going to get in on this? Surely you wouldn't leave her out! Are you working on a new chap? Has this been discontinued? I hate when that happens, even if it is a story I don't really care for, if I have kept up with it I want to see an end. Oh, I do like this story though, this is the first MM I ever read.
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on December 04, 2004
    .........incapable of putting thoughts into decent legible commentary. Story so damn good I'm at a loss of what exactly to say. Very creative. You stayed true to the characters' personalities. Awesome. Love it. Looking forward to an update.
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  • From ANON - richonyx on November 30, 2004
    Oh, I love this story so much! I really loved the last chapter when the two brothers finally let go of their sexual tension. Please update soon--I really would love to read more of your story!
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