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Reviews for Fragments of Broken Pride

By : Areitus
  • From ANON - angeluswilliam on February 01, 2006
    please hurry up and update please I am dying to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Shojo no Hi on January 29, 2006
    Hey i just have to say how much i love your story because it is great i can not wait untill you update i will be checking every day nice job
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on December 11, 2005
    I do not know that I have reviewed this fic before. It is in my favorites list and I was wondering if you have abandoned it. It is so very well written and angsty. I just love it.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - vbollman on October 28, 2005
    Hey there.

    Just wanted to let you know that i'm loving your story. I would like to know when you are updating again

    Also, it seems you are missing chapter 7. and some of your other chapters are missing peices. thought i would let you know.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on September 05, 2005
    Are you going to be able to update your fic or have you abandoned it? I would like to know as I have it on my browswer's favorite's list.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - InuLover on August 30, 2005
    EEep the dreaded cliffy .> Update soon plzz!!!! i cant stand waiting and this is great but.....i have no ideas to give to you cause my writeing sucks -_-;; well great story update soon!! plzzzzzz
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  • From ANON - aaaaa on August 28, 2005
    oh god i hate these kagome sess pairings so unnatural and worthless
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  • From ANON - Rin-chan on August 17, 2005
    I've just read it again!! This story is great, i love it, and i'm curious about the end..please continue!!!!!
    "" PRETTY PLEASE :))) ""
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  • From ANON - Gyps on August 14, 2005
    You are a very good writer. :B The reader can get into the minds of the characters. Its amazing how Inu Yasha and Sesshie can live through quite a lot, even in the show and movies Inu Yasha is constantly stabbed or whatever through the stomach, shot with arrows, attacked by poison and what not and still manages to fight. :D Yay Takahashi! :B Sesshie defeats all with his superior hotness. It is late at night so I can't write a review worth a doody. But.. ah well, Keep up the good work and never stop updating! Good stories such as this shouldn't go unfinished >.
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  • From ANON - Shivawn on August 07, 2005
    Okay, first off...WHAT THE HELL! THAT IS SUCH A HORRIBLE CLIFF HANGER! ::cries:: I am so sad!

    Okay, secondly...::squee:: the yaoi lemon was super hot...Cute Virgin InuYasha and Sex-God SesshoMaru ... then you have Virgin Kagome and Sex-God SesshoMaru...he is definitely getting a lot of action lol This is a wonderful story! Different plot, but also very interesting. When Naraku had been in SesshoMaru's body, I thought he was going to rape InuYasha because then that would be a big scary think for Inu...lol...knowing it's Naraku but seeing the one he loves face. Man I love all the angst you have in this story. I'm thinking Naraku is going to tell SesshoMaru to kill InuYasha or that Rin is under his control and...SesshoMaru has to kill InuYasha to get his normal Rin back or something...I feel so bad for InuYasha when SesshoMaru said it was a one-time thing. Inu put up with the pain because he thought SesshoMaru loved him or something and then he gets shut down the next day after giving up his virginity! I LOVE IT! ::squee::

    I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! THIS IS SUCH A KEWL STORY! I don't see how people couldn't review/rate this story! One thing is for sure, is that you are an excellent writer. I've been trying to improve my writing but it still sux horribly lol I try to do what you do...add details, emotions, etc...but IT'S SO HARD! How do you do it? I commend you for that, that is for sure!

    Great story! Definitely 5 star rating.
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  • From ANON - Rin-chan on August 05, 2005
    Hey..that was nice!! I like your fanfiction very much.. you show Sesshoumaru's emotions perfectly!!
    I'm a bit sad that Rin had to die... i hope you'll continue soon!!
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  • From ANON - Cac on August 05, 2005
    And Dee from above; wow, you really don't seem to get this story... the chance of Sess/Rin pairing seem, well, nil to laughable...
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  • From ANON - Cac on August 05, 2005
    Oh my god you haven't updated since FEBURARY??!!! (glare). Alright, so Naraku brought Rin back to life... I noticed he brought her sight back as well, or did you slip up? Anyway, I'm glad she's not dead, it just semmed so... wrong, unusual, not right, that sess fails twice and doesn't get another chance to make things right. Anyway, you're a bitch for leaving this as it is for like half a year, i swear. Imagine all your poor readers, mooning and crooning for what happens next... Hey, why don't you update very, very soon -like in the next two days - and therefore by being nice to me, you won't go to hell? Hmm?

    This reveiw isn't exactly appreciative. Hey, give more and miracles can happen. You cannot ask for much after leaving this story like it was for HALF A YEAR! Now since I've finished all the existing chapters - and from experience I have little faith in author's updating habits - it's leaving my favorites list on the computer, so hopefully I'll catch it on Latest.
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  • From ANON - Gyps on August 01, 2005
    :B I love this story you get into the minds of the characters pretty well. ^_^ Keep up the good work and keep updating, I am in such suspense!
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  • From ANON - Dee on July 31, 2005
    Well...that's is an interesting twist at the end.

    The story certainly has picked up its appeal to me with the re-appearance of Rin.
    There is no one for Sess than Rin...Not Inu, not Kagome !!!

    Do you plan to "age" Rin ? And I noticed that you had her sight regained.

    Please continue and keep up the Sess/Rin motif. There is not a lot of stories with this pairing and it would be a shame to not include this in the whole lot.


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