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Reviews for The Journey to the City of Endless Night

By : FarAwayEyes

From ANON - SoutasSister on July 05, 2005
You know, I usually avoid crossover fanfics like the plague. I don't know why I started reading this story but I did and I'm glad.

I really like this so far and I think you've done a good job in describing the non-Inuyasha characters so that I don't feel lost. You've got me hooked and I'll keep looking for updates.

I was soooo hoping that Kagome would give Inuyasha's naked butt a good swat while she was struggling to put those shoes on his feet and then his 'punishment' would get really steamy, but I guess that scene will just have to play out in my hentai fantasies. ~_^

Keep up the great job and thanks for sharing your story with us!
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From ANON - Iamreven on July 05, 2005
That was hilarious!! I can just see them on the floor with the shoes. When will he learn who is really the "boss" in the relationship? Probably never, most men never do. I'm glad that you're bringing the Eddings' people out more. The banquet should be interesting. I'm looking forward to the court's reaction to Sessy as much as I am to Inuyasha's entrance. Plus, I can't wait to see who gets the final word in the shoe issue. Inuyasha is getting uptight again (I guess from being in the city) and being humiliated by his mate in front of not only Sessy, but all the others might give him the extra edge in fighting off the dreaded foot attire. However, Kagome knows her hanyou, so she might be able to catch him off guard and play the tear card. I can't wait to see the outcome. By the way, thank you for posting updates so frequently. I'm really involved in this journey and I check daily (at least once) for updates. Keep 'em coming!!!!
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From ANON - alize on July 05, 2005
nice!!! that was another great chapter from you. i really enjoyed it. cant wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - littleolmee on July 05, 2005
this chapter was too funny! poor inu gets conned into a hot bath then she does a 180 on him with the shoes. the scene with everyone coming in on them was to much! can't wait to see what happens at the banquet and i wonder what title you will use for inu and sessh? wonderfully written!
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From ANON - New Fan on July 05, 2005
That was a very funny chapter. I really enjoyd the pep show when Inuyasha was but naked and Kagome trying to put the shoes
on. Greatly enjoyed the Silk's comment. Update soon.
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From ANON - Miroku2235 on July 03, 2005
Lol, this reminds me of a miroku RP im doing, I had a kid and he sat on Inu's head and kept yankin his ears. I about fell over laughing. Oh well, great chapter, keep them coming, they're like an addiction.
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From ANON - Gem on July 03, 2005
Yay! literary goodies abound! So this time we get to take a ride in Inuyasha's noggin. Hmm, not as much wasted space in there as he would have us belive. Seriously nice to see the other side of the mirror so to speak. His thoughts are leading down a similar path as Sess'. They may come to the conclusion they don't hate each other after all. Is Inuyash making a friend? Garion sure is trying, and they do share some things in common.Maybe Inu will even see he doesn't need to be constantly proving his strength and ability, As Garion is certainly strong without being in your face all the time. Sigh but then he wouldn't be Inu. Oh and I loved in your notes how you described Inuyasha's human nite as "half-demon PMS" that sums it up all right! I love the anime and manga but they are what they are ( I wouldn't have it any other way)but they are not know for deep character development. The beauty of that is we can all take the basics and run with them to flesh out the characters as we see them. Any way that's my theory on why people like both the anime and fics, between the two you get the full package. Oookay way to much sugar for me today (sshh if you don't tell I'll share my godiva choc stash, or if you prefer the choc pecan chewy cookies?)I'll spare you the rest of what I was thinking -my mind is going 15 diff. directions a once! Happy to see the update (as if you couldn't tell!)
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From ANON - littleolmee on July 02, 2005
hi there, i just found your story. while i've never read the books you are using for the cross over i have to say you have done a wonderful job making the characters interesting even if you don't know the story behind them. i love how inu and sessh's relationship has changed, and the part with inu on his human night admitting how he feel about things to sessh was so well done. love how kag and inu are now mates. this last chapter was very funny with the redheaded queen having a little girl talk with kag. i hope you stay with your story and i only wish i would have started reading sooner.
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From ANON - New Fan on July 02, 2005
Have not seen much of Sango and Miroku. I hope that they would make their appearance in the next
chapter more. Good chapter. Update soon.
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From ANON - Miroku2235 on July 01, 2005
Loved the chapter, can't believe Sess actually played Rummy, LOL. And even though it would not happen because they are both good guys, a fight between Garion and Inuyasha or Garion and Sesshoumaru would be extremely wicked.
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From ANON - collegegirl on June 29, 2005
Give Sessy some sake or something. The poor guy is sooooooo confused. With Inu's mood swings, the way his brother has been treating him, the big revilation, and then the mighty powers of the sorcerers. Poor Sessy. And then he had the bad manners to go and play cards with Miroku and Silk. I wanted to bop Inu on the head for being so mean to Kagome. There mated, does he really have to bring in Koga. I loved the action between Belgarith and his brother. That was great and I loved how confused it made Sess. You caputred Inu perfectly on his human nights. Keep up the good work.
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From ANON - DPM on June 29, 2005
Just read your latest installment. Despite their gruffness with each other, the familial bonds are taking shape and form between Sess/Inu. Great transitionals.

I couldn't abide or stomach the "insta-grow" either for Rin. If you must, do it at your own pace to "grow" her or not. You control the rhythm and pattern of this lovely plot and I do respect that.

It makes me very envious of talent possessed by people such as yourself. I love how you can take words that are ordinarily dull by normal standards and transform them into some kind of wonderful. The vivid "word" pictures are so amazing !!! I am a new fan to this story and thank you..(I'd better be a fan since it's 2:30am at the time of this writing)...;-)

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From ANON - Gem on June 29, 2005
Well whatever the cause it was a very nice surprise to see another update broken up chapter or not. Must say I like how the group interaction is developing. It leads me to believe when the final showdown happens (hopefully not soon! I'm a bit selfish, I don't want this to end for a while) the "getting to know you period" will have determined how well they can funtion as a whole. That is very important, as things very rarely wrap themselves up in nice tidy packages, it takes a lot of work and time to achieve a believable result. I think that is part of the reason I always read and try to leave some comment, no matter how inane, becuse you craft your story to let it mature as it needs, not forcing it from one plot point to another. Plus it is very intersting how you are letting us take a peek into Sess' psyke. The emotional aspect is more developed than the anime original, but I think the logic is very in character. To me it just provides depth. All that and your none to shaby with the action either. Enough ramblings for now. Take care, and may your muse always be happy!
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From ANON - IamReven on June 27, 2005
I LOVE that you released Zedar. The fight with Belgarath was kick-ass awesome!!!! After they killed off all the Bad Sorcerers in the Mallorean, there was really nobody left to give Belgarath and family any real competition. The Inu brothers are just begining to see the magnitude and versatility that this family is capable of. Wait till Inu. and Sessy realize the power Garion is hiding, not to mention the Orb. Until now, Kagome is the only human to have earned any respect from Sessy. He is going to have to rethink his whole idea of "weak Humans." Great chapter, this fic just keeps getting better and better. I also like the possibilities opened with Miroku and Silk teaming up-Mallorea will never be the same! One request, though. Let's see a little more interaction between the two groups. I'd really like to see Garion and Inuyasha become friends. I think that Sessy and Zedar would hit it off as well. Keep the chappies coming!! I can't wait for 23!!!!!
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From ANON - Gem on June 27, 2005
Oooo! The promised show of power! Good battle scene, nice touch with it being brothers fighting. Wonder if seeing that may make our fav Inu brothers step back and think? .... nah. How come I get the sneaking idea that Sess may have to face the unwelcome and very distasteful thought that he is not the top of the food chain so to speak? Think that raw display of power unsettled him just the teeniest bit, even if he does not want to admit it to himself yet. Fun as always.
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