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Reviews for The Journey to the City of Endless Night

By : FarAwayEyes
  • From ANON - DPM on June 27, 2005
    This is a very good story. Although I don't really follow the non-Inuywasha cross-over, I am still able to comprehend the plot as it unfolds.
    However, my fave pairing has got to be Sess/Rin (adult of course). Very in-characters that you've made them. Are you intending to keep their relationship a paternal one ? (although you did mention that they are each other's soulmates earlier on...).

    Very strong creative merit and the grammatics are flawless. Nothing turns a reader off more than nonsensical, non-flowing, unstructured, error-riddled type of gibberish that seems to be in profusion. So when a good gem like this story comes around, it makes the reading much more enjoyable.

    Keep up the good work !!!
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  • From ANON - alicia on June 27, 2005
    i came across your fan fic today and though i am only up to chapter 15 i must say you are a very gifted writer. your fic is very well put together, detailed and well thought out. you have an enormous amount of talent and i hope you continue this fic on to completion. it is really a fantastic story :-)
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  • From ANON - New Fan on June 27, 2005
    Inuyasha saved his brother's life? How will Sessy take that. Do Sessy know what danger he really was in?
    Will Inuyasha human showing be a secret for long? Will Sess find out his secret? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Miroku2235 on June 27, 2005
    Lol, if Miroku and Silk start plotting things then the world is in for some major trouble.
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  • From ANON - CollegeGirl on June 22, 2005
    AWWWWW. A cute scene between Sess and Rin. The wolf was lucky that Rin wasn't harmed in any way. I loved that particular scene. This might help poor Rin overcome some of her fears. I loved the lemons between Inu and Kagome, it's about time they had some alone time. And really Miroku has a death wish doesn't he. What are we going to do with him. I loved this chapter and can't wait for the next onen to come out.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on June 22, 2005
    Inu and Kagome needed that time together before the worst begins. Sess is being very protective
    over his future intended Rin, but why do he and Inuyasha have familar feelings of the begins they are meeting
    along there travel. It is like they know them somehow. Are they reincarnation of past relatives or something? Let me
    know? Great chapter and update soon.
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  • From ANON - IamReven on June 22, 2005
    Great lemon!! Sessy's a real hoot, too. I love the way he's fascinated with everything from Kagome's world, but still manages to maintain his dignity. I really like the way you have him being obviously protective of Rin. Usually, he tries to hide this aspect of himself as well, but in these new situations, he has finally let it show. I didn't review the last couple of chapters, but I'll say here that I really enjoyed the fight with the hounds. Thanks for a great ride- I can't wait for the rest of the "journey".
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  • From ANON - Gem on June 21, 2005
    Wow not expecting the lemon! Very tastefully done, and they really needed some alone/bonding time. I think the way you are drawing attention to Sess' intelligence and curiosity is an interesting approach. All of his other traits are there, we just get to see more facets of his personality. He's evolving nicely! (my sense of humor can't help make the curious puppy analogy - he isn't that old for a demon. But like the fact Rin has him trained - lets say neither observation would add to my life expectancy!)You are in one heck of a creative groove of late, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - heather on June 21, 2005
    i did enjoy it! thankyou very much :-) it was a good chapter please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on June 17, 2005
    Poor Inuyasha. Scaring his mate like that. I hope that he won't change anytime soon while on
    this adventure. Poor Sess, he is so confuse about Kagome and the human race. I hope through
    this journey he will realize not hamans are the scum of the earth. Great chapter and I hope that you
    will update soon.
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  • From ANON - gem on June 16, 2005
    Wow back already! Nice after the fight interlude. You managed to play on how new Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship is and how they still have not let go of all their insecurities, shown us a glimps into the workings of Sess' mind. Plus how he starting to understand how things work for Inu and the gang. Also loved the great little detail of Rin taking his hand, how he doesn't seem to even notice what he is doing, how close they truely are. Sounds like you have some plans for the other characters to show their stuff? Can't wait, should be good. Hmm wonder if Kagome is going to be the protective one for a while after this last fight. After all she finally has him, you can bet she won't let go without a fight now! At the very least Inu will get some "quality" alone time with her! Maybe? Ah well, I just have to wait and see how you play it out, it'll be fun whatever you do!
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  • From ANON - CollegeGirl on June 16, 2005
    Whoo hoo a quick update!!!! Poor Kagome, I wanted to reach over and hug her. But then Inu Yasha might decide to kill me if I touched his mate. Poor Inu Yasha, I wanted to cuddle him throughout this chapter. I loved the question about one of them flying. heheheehe. Sess can turn into a ball of energy and fly, does that count? Rin is so cute and keeps Sessy in control. She has him wrapped around her little finger. I love it!!! I agree Inu Yasha and Kagome need some alone time, especially after what just happened. Too bad they arn't going to kill the rest of the Hounds. That would have been a nice slaughter scene. Keep up the great work, I can't wait until the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - heather on June 16, 2005
    i'm so glade you posted another chapter, witch was great by the way. :-) keep up the good work and update again soon. oh and by the way it's not so much that i want another lemon, i juat want some more alone time with inu and kag. you know a little romance. ;-) anyway luv ya

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  • From ANON - CollegeGirl on June 14, 2005
    Finally some action going on. Oh boy those demons had it coming, attacking that party. Not the smartest thing to do. And then they had to go frighten Rin, and well yeah that was a very very bad thing to do. Poor Kagome, having to calm INu down again. Jeez that guy needs to learn to hold on to that sword tighter. Bad Sessy for leaving his brother. Has to use that nose of his better. Evil, Evil cliffhangers. You must update soon. Or I will hunt you down. LOL. Loved this chapter and waiting with bated breath for the next one.
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  • From ANON - Gem on June 10, 2005
    Yep, you sure built up to the blood guts and sundry gore all right! Hey, I like the action too! Now this will give the hosts of the brothers Inu something to mull over. That is an impresive display of power made all the more frightening when you consider it is held at bay by a very, very narrow margin of will and magick. Not to mention Sango in action is quite the sight. It just keeps getting better and better. A BIG THANK YOU for the quick update ( I could hug you, but I wouldn't want to spoil my rep!) Aw waht the heck *glomps author* Ok I promise to control myself from now on! Take Care. Gem
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