Click Here!

Reviews for The Journey to the City of Endless Night

By : FarAwayEyes
  • From ANON - Judo Creature on February 04, 2006
    Holy crap! Sesshomaru's lost it! *sirens blare* BRING OUT THE BIG GUNS!!! And what's with the 'mine' thing? A little possessive aren't we Sesshy-kun? *shrugs* Oh well, I guess I'll find out sooner or later! Gah! When will Rin-chan's birthday come up? *bounces around excitedly* And that Kelleth guy, one minute he's really nice the next he looks like he's trying to rape her! Talk about mood swings... And give this message to Sesshomaru: CHILL OUT! --Judo
    Report Review

  • From ANON - DPM on February 04, 2006
    So sweet!! I love this chapter.

    Hot diggity darn!!! It was high time to see the new chapter AND it was doubly wonderful since it especially centered around S/R. I miss them. It's fairly far and few in between in this fanfic with S/R focus. But when you do write about them, they progress along and are developing their characters quite well.

    I see that you've given us a glimpse of another facet of Sess here. He was interested in not only protecting her from physical harm. Now, his feelings seemed to be evolving into something more textured, something deeper than mere protection. Thought, deed and voice culminating into action. (I don't think he's ever admitted aloud before that he considers her his possession).

    Very delicately phrased, so vividly written and beautifully subtle. I could see those images of him hovering over that poor fella chatting up to the girl and scaring the boy to death. Classic jealousy (Psychology 101...LOL) !!!!





    Report Review

  • From ANON - hunter on February 03, 2006
    continue with the storie i want gto see rin ask shessomaru why he said mine to her.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Obaasan on February 03, 2006
    I know that real life comes first but *ahem* I can't wait until you update again. I can't wait to see how Garion and Inuyasha talk about their mutual 'friend'. BTW, I am a huge Eddings fan and I love how you are marriaging the two cultures together. I really don't think you could've done this with the Elenium series. Couldn't you just see Sparhaek and Sesshomaru getting along?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Mellissa on February 03, 2006
    Its a creative story (really diverse). Rin and Sessy seem to have a weird sexual tension to their relationship, which is strange cause she's 12. Maybe I'm reading to much into it ~shrugs~, good work:)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - fluffysgirl802005 on February 03, 2006
    same post twice.... I HATE TECHNOLOGY!!!!!!! stupid laptop ARGH!!!!
    better now.. sorry bout that lol
    Report Review

  • From ANON - fluffysgirl802005 on February 03, 2006
    i wrote a nice review, and then when i submitted, it couldn't connect! Blast technology!!!

    anywho, hopefully i can remember all i wrote.

    i love the developing relationship between sesshy and rin. he has become much more affectionate with her,
    and i love it. Whether he realizes it or not, he has already chosen her as his mate. i think finding out that she will
    live a long life like him helped alot.
    i know she is only 12 and has led a rather sheltered life, and i know that kagome talked to her a little, but i think that maybe
    kags should have the birds and bees chat with her. i can't remember if she did or not in a previous chpt, but i remember how i was when i was 12..
    crushes on boys, on pro hockey players lol.. seriously though.. raging hormones..

    but, it's your story, and a wonderful one at that!!!

    thank you so much for writing this crossover... it is the first one i've read that i absolutely love!!
    the characters work so well together...

    good luck with your last semester, i know how hard it can be... been there, done that...
    anyways.. thankyou so much
    i anxiously await the next chapter!!

    oh, an if this fic was 1000 chapters, i would read them all!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Bookreader9999 on February 03, 2006
    Yay!!! A Sesshomaru/Rin chapter!!! It's nice to see the interaction between the two of them. I can't wait to see if Rin asks him what he meant by 'mine', or if he'll even try (or be able to) explain it.

    Can't wait for the next update!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - a lil wip ass retard on January 22, 2006
    **** meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    Report Review

  • From ANON - fluffysgirl802005 on January 18, 2006
    love it. i love sesshomaru in this story! i wish rin was older somehow though! i understand not wanting to do the whole soap opera thing that they do with kids though. i just wish there was someway to make her older, even like 16 or 17. maybe she was put under some kind of spell to keep her young or something. anyways... i am definately getting the first book of the belgarian series. i really like the characters, especially silk. so i'm gonna check those out. i think you are doing an awesome job keeping them in character and i love that fact that inu and sesshy have formed a pack. i think it's really cool how you made rin a sorcress and how she will have a long life with our sesshy *wink wink* anyhow. i love it, and i have finaly read all the chapres you have up so i am finally caught up, although it about a week lol.

    anyways, i love it and i look forward to more!!!

    fluffysgirl802005
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kj on January 15, 2006
    Glad to see another chapter of my favorite fanfic up. Sorry to not have reviewed in a while, but, still loving the series, please don't stop!
    As for your story being nominated, you can be sure you'll always have at least one vote ^.~
    Report Review

  • From ANON - fluffysgirl802005 on January 15, 2006
    i love it. of course, i haven't read it all yet, but i do love it.
    the lemon was awesome. i love sesshomaru, but i love inu too, ah, decisions decisions lol
    anyways. it is now 10 am and i have been reading since about...1am, i think i need to sleep lol
    but i probably wont cuz the steeler game will be on in 3 hours and there is noway i will wake up for it if i go to bed now...
    guess i'll just hafta keep reading lol


    Report Review

  • From ANON - Miroku2235 on January 14, 2006
    Good chapter. I liked Silk's explanation of why he's helping Miroku. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see where you take this.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SP777 on January 13, 2006
    As I was reading #62 or chap. 57, as laid-back as the chapter was this old beer song popped up in my head..'When it's time to relax, one beer stands clear, Miller beer.' Don't ask why, but it just fit.

    I wouldn't be surprised if you NEVER heard of the song, it came out in the EARLY 80's.

    As for the last chapter, I wanted to review on the Shippou situation but didn't. I just wanted to say I was HAPPY Inuyasha stepped up to the plate and put him in his rightful place & let him KNOW just where he stands and PERSONALLY should have been standing, that is if Kagome was being such a...spoiled teenager and catering to Shippou EVERYtime something happens. No offense but he gets annoying to me sometimes.

    In other words, sometimes I think Kagome over-reacts to certain situations in the Inu group when I think SHE should try counting to 10 for once, I'm talking about the anime.

    One last thing, isn't it time or possible that, Inuyasha AND Sesshoumaru teach Shippou what it means to survive as a demon because he won't stay young forever.

    I got some personal rants about the anime but I'll save it for later.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2006
    continue
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!