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Reviews for Unlimited Determination

By : BeautifulOblivion
  • From ANON - T.T.F on January 27, 2009
    Wow I love this story. It's so well-written. I did notice a few typos here and there. For example, twice you've typed in "Kagome" when you clearly meant to type "Kouga." You might want to watch out for that in future chapters.

    Other than that I love the plot. It's very gripping and you describe things very skillfully. Like when Kagome is at the hospital you take the time to describe her day briefly, but still descriptively. I felt so bad for Kouga in this chapter. The fact that Kagome felt embarrassed about kissing him when she saw Inuyasha has got to feel like a knife to the heart. Ouch.

    Please don't take long to update this. It's so good. You've have just won over another faithful reviewer in this reader.

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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on January 20, 2009
    Yippie! Another chapter!

    Heart-wrenching for Yasha though, as he had to see the two embrace, but he will have to face facts of go crazy ... not liking that idea.

    So, when is Sesshomaru going to come back into play? And when are these two ever going to go on vacation? THAT will be interesting ... unless they leave after a confuntation with Sess, who gets caught "molesting" Kagome again. You know ... I doon't really like the idea, but maybe, just this once Koga can beat the crap right out of Sesshomaru (like that would ever really happen) after flying into a rage because he caught the two together? Just an idea for you to play with, or not.

    I hope you update again soon! It felt like FOREVER since your last update.

    I seemed to have made it through inventory, and am still currently employed, and I hope that it will last! *sweat-drops*

    Until we meet again.
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  • From L0VER on January 19, 2009
    wow. the awkward feeling when others hug, I KNOW HOW HE FEELS! and awww poor inu :( honestly.. why cant kag just get ALL the guys? HUH! then i wouldnt have to feel bad for anyone, and everybody would just be happy!! :)
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  • From MourningRaven on January 19, 2009
    YAY!!!! You updated!! That was a good chapter! I knew Inuyasha was not about to let go of his feelings. I hope that he does not try to come in between Kouga and Kagom though. I am curios about what will happen with the Sesshoumaru situation. Kagome needs to tell Kouga so he can be aware that something else might happen. Keep up the GREAT work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - saruwarui on January 19, 2009
    Love it so far and I'm only on the third chapter! Can't wait to keep reading!
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  • From MourningRaven on January 17, 2009
    PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!
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  • From osherry on January 12, 2009
    Hey Lissa,
    I was going to e-mail you, but now your e-mail address is hidden again. So you get another review instead! OK, here's a few ideas. You can keep them or toss them...

    Now honestly, if I was writing this fict it would end up Inu/Kag. But since it's not me... I still like the idea of sympathy sex. So here's an idea... She goes on a date with Inuyasha and goes home with him. She tells him that she's staying with Koga and marrying him. But! That she had intended to marry/mate/have sex with Inuyasha before the well closed. So she's willing to give him sex JUST ONCE because it was something she was going to give him anyway before the well closed. That way you can squeeze in realistic lemon with Inu/Kag with some touching love making. I also like the idea of Inuyasha giving Kagome away (if he can handle it).

    And of course Koga will love to rub it in.... "I always told you she was 'my woman'!"

    Then perhaps Inu and Koga can fight off Sesshoumaru who is making himself a bit of a nuisance. And I don't understand why Kagome isn't slapping Sessy with a sexual harassment lawsuit. I mean the guy is way out of control at the workplace. Hey, he's hot--but it is sexual harassment.

    By the way, I had thought originally that Inuyasha would look like a senior citizen and that was why he never told Kagome who he was.

    OK those were my little ideas...
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on January 09, 2009
    Hey!

    I missed two chapters! *whimper* Ahh, but I just finished reading them and I likey! *snicker* Can't wait for the "date" with Inu Yasha ... it'll definately be interesting seeing as Koga thinks it is just the two of them ...

    Yes, I am VERY happy that the Holiday season is over, but also kinda pensive. See, I'm seasonal right now, and I'm really hoping that they will keep me on after inventory, which is what we are setting up the store for now ... ('.');;

    I can't wait for the next chapter! Hope that it is soon!

    Until we meet again.
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  • From L0VER on January 02, 2009
    i lost my internet connection for the last week or so.. so i didnt get to read any updates. so. YAY, 2 chapters for me :). but anyway. honestly.. i have to say.. inuyasha seemed so CREEPY in the beginning ... idon`t know.. maybe its just me. but until he talked about his wife.. it returned to normal . ahah x) anyway. i cant wait to see what happens next. and i`m definitely going to read your new story. as a matter of fact. im gonna go read it now!.. i`ll tell you what i think about it then :D
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  • From redrubycutie on January 01, 2009
    ah thanks for clearing that up. This chapter was good how inuyasha talked about his mating.
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  • From MourningRaven on December 31, 2008
    Yay! Thank you for updating so soon! I like the new chappie! I am interested in how Kouga is going to react to InuYasha. Update soon!!!
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  • From osherry on December 30, 2008
    Ahhh! Kagome finally ran into Inuyasha. He better have a good reason for not seeing her sooner. I'd love to see him make some moves on her even though she's mated to Koga. Hee hee! That would make my day! Maybe she could give him some sympathy sex... Oh la la! Oh, I'm horrible. OK. Keep writing!
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  • From redrubycutie on December 29, 2008
    Wow so Inuyasha is Old. how so? Is it because he is Henyou? How he mated too?
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  • From MourningRaven on December 20, 2008
    Please update!
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  • From L0VER on December 14, 2008
    wow. i thought things would get bad ..but i guess not ^^ kouga is so cuteeeee. omg .. i can only dream. anyway. icant wait to see what happens next! ^^ i cant bring myself to hate sess.. ahha
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