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Reviews for Where He Belongs

By : AikawaAkihiko
  • From ANON - Juniperbreezie on August 09, 2011
    Good story. Man, it took Kouga long enough to assert his leadership. And why in the world did Inuyasha tell him about that council member. That wolf is just plain crazy. Kouga needs to clean house and get rid of him and the others. I wonder if Sesshomaru will stop by for a visit now that his brother is mated?
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  • From ANON - amanda windsor on August 06, 2011
    -^.^- I LOVE it so far I can't wait 4 the next chapter to come out ^.^
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  • From NAnderson on August 03, 2011
    Well it may have been a hard chapter to write, but you did it wonderfully! I was so in aw of how cute you made the pups sounds when they woke up ^.^ such cuties! and I cant wait to read the next chapter! I can tell its going to be great.
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  • From ANON - S.Tori on August 02, 2011
    Actually, I wasn't sitting there thinking "ooooh, that old man should get his comeuppance!" it was more that -- I guess I am hoping that he will finally see past his own prejudices and see Inuyasha plainly, not as a manipulative and meddlesome hanyou, but instead as a good fighter, a good parent to the cubs, and someone who has overcome his insecurities and fears and learned to be with Kouga unabashedly despite all his previous entanglements - romantic and otherwise - leading to only misery. I want the old man to realize that the fact that Inuyasha was willing to leave was *not* the result of a simple mind or a weak will that could be easily manipulated, but instead the result of his very real love and concern for his newfound family.

    I want the old man to realize that he's been unfair.

    (And also, I want the smallest, beaten-down underdog ookami to become Inuyasha's friend.)

    The one amusing thing that keeps striking me is that I keep picturing the old man as Scar from the Lion King, especially when he orders the three wolf warriors to go after Inuyasha and kill him as he flees. (Yes, the wolf warriors were demoted to hyenas. This kind of thing happens frequently in my strange mind.)

    Anyway, thanks for posting this :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2011
    When I saw you updated I squealed with joy. My neighbors must think I'm weird...Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From uniqueindividual on July 27, 2011
    I enjoy this story very much. It's a nice fluff story that isn't too complicated, yet is still funny and suspensful. I don't think the Challenge chapter was too much, and I agree with your reasoning on why the Elder jerk didn't get caught. Although, I must warn you about Inuyasha fanfics that are Mpreg sometimes bring the baby in waay too early, before enough feelings between the slash couple get developed. I just mention this because of the "mysterious pain" in Inyuasha's stomach. And they have successfully fucked(lol). But continue on, good writer, for your story is really fun to read and addicting....very addicting.
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  • From wizgrl14 on July 26, 2011
    This was an amazing chapter! Kouga is a really good Alpha, wanting to keep order and handle injustices and wrong doings. I can not wait for the next chapter, this just gets more and more exciting as each update is posted. Keep up the great work.
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  • From KEdakumi on July 25, 2011
    Such a great story. I think I mentioned before that I love how it is different from other fictions out there that I've read. I hope that old deluded wolf gets what he so rightfully deserves.
    Can't wait for your next update!
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  • From Vyper on July 25, 2011
    Michinaga sure doesn't know when to quit. He is a fool and I hope he gets killed soon. I want Inuyasha and Kouga to be happy. I would love to see that fight too. That would be so cool. I reread the mating since that was hot. I hope for more of that in the future.
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  • From ANON - huahuas on July 25, 2011
    Grrr. Michinaga is so awful. But he's a good villain, because you didn't make him "evil" he really thinks he's doing this for his tribe.

    I loved this chapter, like the whole story. Glad Kouga put his foot down.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on July 25, 2011
    Never underestimate your writing whether it is bad or good. Besides this chapter was full of excitement and love Koga's love for his new mate and cubs and his tribe as a whole and the excitement of the fights. I think you did a very good job Koga needed to do something to claim his leadership as a complete fact. Your challenge sounded like something that a wolf demon leader would do to stike out contenders in his pack in the anime from the things and ways that Koga had talked he had won his right to be the leader not just assumed it. Besides back then it really was seriously a fact of strength and fight to live and lead. Besides when you think about it Koga really didn't have all that much to lose even except his life for even if he and Inuyasha and the cubs had been exiled he still would have his family and a beautiful perfect mate who would stand by his side and well frankly fight better than Koga himself and also his mate knew how to survive without a whole pack which is also a plus so really Koga had no problems because winning or losing the challenges he wins. And the elder needs to be strung up and kicked in the head for his insolence and stupidity and his prejudice talk about a real creep. I'll be waiting for the next chapter anxiously. Thank you so much for the awesome update I thought it really added to the story beautifully.
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  • From ANON - Amanda Windsor on July 25, 2011
    I really like what you have so far but when are you going to update it?? i really want to read the next chapter.
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  • From SammyD on July 22, 2011
    Oh please, please, update soon! I have to find out what happens next!!!!
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  • From Enigma180 on July 14, 2011
    Iloveit!Iloveit!Iloveit!Iloveit!Iloveit!Iloveit!Iloveit!Iloveit! So good! I love the parts with seshy^^ Is it bad he made me laugh?(thats always been my reaction with Mr.Stoic)
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  • From ANON - blackcat16 on July 06, 2011
    This is the BEST Kouga/Inuyasha fic on the whole internet!!! i love this pairing especially the kinda vulnable Inuyasha and the dominant Kouga. I have searched high and low for a good story with this pairing and while there a few here on AFFN they still don't compare to this story> i love the characters, the polt line and the lemony parts> i hope you keep writing this story and more with this pairing. Keep up the great work!
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