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Reviews for Where He Belongs

By : AikawaAkihiko
  • From jdbbrz27 on April 11, 2011
    That was really good and I really enjoyed it. I loved how descriptive you were about the forest I could almost imagine myself there just from reading it. The lemon was done very nicely especially in how Koga figured out that Inuyasha had never experienced this before I can't remember if you had mentioned that Koga knew Inuyasha was a virgin or not I'll have to reread the story. But how considerate Koga was in his manipulations of Inuyasha's body and making sure that Inuyasha felt good about it although I suppose it would leave poor innocent sweet little Inuyasha confused on what exactly Koga expects of him. I am so curious to find out what is wrong with little Inuyasha and a bit excited to find out. I also am adoring the cubs they just sound so adorable expecially the two youngest I just want to hug them and cuddle them almost as much as I want to cuddle Inuyasha. You have got to have Inuyasha have a pup you can't let those little adorable ears disappear they are soooooooo cute. I mean just imagine two little ears like his popping up out of dark hair with white highlights that shine in the light, and beautiful golden big eyes god I would love to see a picture of that pup in Inuyasha's arms so cute I wish I could draw oh well I wish I could write to thank goodness we have writers like you at least I can read great stories. I decided to review here instead of on fanfiction I usually review here but sometime I'll review there under the same username and email address. Can't wait for the next chappie.
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  • From kougaslover on April 11, 2011
    Aww, I absolutely loved this chapter! I think the way you've slowly brought them together, their time slowly revealing the feelings they've had for each other to be brilliant. And the tenderness in Kouga pleasuring Inu was awesome, so sexy yet delicate and loving. Great job and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From myperversities on April 09, 2011
    OMG, I freaken LOVE this story!!!! You HAVE to put another chapter out soon! Please don;t make me wait!! It's too good!
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  • From Nescafevh on April 08, 2011
    I've come to realize something about Inuyasha. It's not his DEMON that's wild, vicious and uncontrollable. It's his DOG.And that's Sesshomaru's fault. I saw this special on Animal Planet about wild dogs left by families to fend for themselves. They are wild, vicious and uncontrollable, even attacking and killing humans and I realized that THAT WAS INUYASHA!

    Think about it, he HAD a human familypack, but theyshe left him (died), leaving him to wander and become wild. Only his human side is usually in control, repressing the wild dog side. Now as Inuyasha's alpha Sesshomaru should have dominated him earlier in life to establish control over him, but that would be acknowledging Inuyasha as his pack, and he can't do that.

    But if KOUGA was to dominate him (it would have to be more than once, maybe they could organize a time-in controlled situations-to do so)then possibly they could 'tame the wild beast' as it were and even unite Inuyasha's normal with his wild side and possibly make him stronger and more powerful. Look at the power he wields normally and then the power his 'wild side' wields. Imagine having access to BOTH.

    Maybe you could do this in your story?
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  • From ANON - Merely Truth on April 05, 2011
    That's a good plot you have here ! I hope Inu will begin to train some fighters and prove himself worth !
    Thank you for your story !

    A french mother,
    Bonjour de la France !

    Merely Truth

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  • From ajj77sunhawk on April 04, 2011
    Hey good to see you here, definately worth a second review and rating. Update Fast please. :D
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  • From KEdakumi on April 04, 2011
    Such a very cool story. It's great how you are keeping everyone in character. How come Inuyasha didn't recognize Ayame? Just wondering. Can't wait to see where this goes!
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  • From ANON - A Fan on April 04, 2011
    At first I thought this was another ill thought out fic about Kouga and Inuyasha. I was actually thinking of not reading it. Wow, I am so glad I took the chance. I love this story and the plot is so original. Please update again with the rest of the story today. I truly wish to know how this story ends. I am happy that Inuyasha will finally be able to have a family and someone to love him. I also want to see how K/I and the rest of the pack react when they realize that Inuyasha can get pregnant.
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