Reviews for The Shoot

BY : Dunkelgelb


  • From ANON - skyrere on March 13, 2019

    OH my...

    oh MY!!!

    OOOH MAMA!!!

    it's been a long time since a story could turn me on...

    damn fine job my dear.  damn fine job.



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  • From ANON - Tenzi Northwind on March 12, 2019

    Wonderful story.  Great to get lost in the story only to be reminded that it is a story within another.  Powerful imagery.  I truely hope more is cuming!



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  • From ANON - Hattaru on February 15, 2018

    I must say very interesting and creative, I love it I can t wait to read more and for you to update chapter 4. this story is amazing and very different.😄😆☺☺



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