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Reviews for Before I die

By : Genevieve
  • From ANON - KuramaglD on August 15, 2003
    Goijh, i know this was hard for you to write, but this is really hard for me to review! but I promised you that I would so, I am, after I yell at you!
    You left another cliffy!!! I know it so you get reviews but it just so mean and cruel...wait never mind that is you. i'll start the review.
    Your first lemon was not bad, THANK YOU VERY MUCH! for not having to much. there are some people here who get a little out of hand with there lemons even though they put some lemons i think there is a little more then some!
    All in all the story itself is great. though i have a question for this chapter. i know this is your lemon one but what happen to the other people? just wondering.
    keep up the good work!
    from the friend you have destroyed for life! j/k ^_^
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  • From ANON - foof76 on August 14, 2003
    AAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    YOU ARE EVIL!!!!!!! (lol) I think you should go in to the dominatrix business because you like to torture us so much!!!! I'm in pain!! No lemon cliffies!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ApriL on August 14, 2003
    Oh my... *gasp* lolZ
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 14, 2003
    ooh thats just wrong!!!!!!!..you said this chap was not a Cliffy!!!!....you lied!!!!!!!!!!!!.......(whines and sobs)..no fair no fair...cant get a gals emotions all worked up to leave her hanging like that..sniffles..meanie....(lookes wide eyed and then guilty) Im sorry your not a meanie...but finish the love scene pleaseeeeeeeee?? pretty please????
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  • From ANON - kagomereborn on August 14, 2003
    FUCK, FUCK WHAT THE FUCK,WHERRE THE FUCK YOU ...AHHHH FUCK HOW COULD YOU, FUCK WHAT THE DAMN FUCK AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU EVIL, YOU CLIFFY, BRAIN , MY BRAIN FUCK *SCREAMS, AND STARTS PLANING 'SOMEONES' DEATH*

    YOU WILL FINISH THIS AND SOON VERY VERY SOON AND THERE WILL NOT BE A CLIFFY IN IT, * STARTS RANTING WORDS INU WOULD BLUSH AT* AHLL FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - SanosLilRebelGurl on August 14, 2003
    I wont hurt you, yet.... As long as you keep ME happy, i wont threaten you. *thinks if she kills Goigh the story wont get updated, then sits back down* I cant belive that you left the damn story on a cliffy! Do you know how much I hate cliffies!!!! I will forgive you if you uodate within two days. Well, I have other people to threaten. Later
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on August 14, 2003
    GAH! VILE! *falls silent for a moment* like I really should be talking there . . . sort of the pot calling the kettle black. More please, and soon : )
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  • From ANON - foof76 on August 13, 2003
    I really like your story. I love the parts where he starts getting turned on! I'm such a hentai, I know:) I absolutely loved the tickling scene!!! Patiently waiting for a lemon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 13, 2003
    pouts......sniffles.......kicks at pebbles with her feet likehildhild...whines......NO FAIR!!!!......I want more.....ok composes self...please please write more?? ya cant just leave it there...sniffles please update soon?? ty..:-)
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on August 11, 2003
    Good story so far. Very engaging . . . so what's up with Kouga? From the sounds of it, you originally planned on Naraku grabbing Kagome. If that's the case, you should read my story on FF.Net, Starlight and Shadows. You might find it enjoyable, you might not. Either way, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 11, 2003
    omg this one was soooooooo good..who would of thought Naraku controling Kouga??? I liked this chap alot..please please please update as soon ou cou can please?? ty ty
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  • From ANON - ApriL on August 10, 2003
    Not again! WeLL, can't wait for the next chapter (pLease hurry!) Oh, and I KNEW it was Kouga...even though you didn't yet, and bLah bLah bLah
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  • From ANON - kinu on August 10, 2003
    Hi its me again i love it even better than the first and i love how long they all are keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Kinu on August 10, 2003
    HI i heard your c for for help in the forest for reviews and i was so hurt not to see more of them i love you story so far and i will review all the others as well I PROMISE =). and if you like come to my website www.destined.to/inuyasha or please e-mail me!
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  • From on August 09, 2003
    *stands and wriggles out of the jacket, then runs around the room screaming' im free!im free! then falls over Goigjh on the floor' sorry about that. lol. I swear to the gods that if yuoi dont update soon, *bleeps ensue for the next ten minutes* ok im fine now, but i cant speak for the rest of the people in them. Lm. LMAO! just playing, i really hope that the 'eyes' wil be Sesshomarou, hes just too cute! well, its was good as uaual. later, dinner is done. and if you want a beta reader, email me. Later



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