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By : Genevieve
  • From ANON - nightmareofcat on August 09, 2003
    its me again hahahaha lol well any way i like the chapter and the whole story for that matter by the way u think u have a lot of cats i know i have a lot of them 9 adults and 16 kittens im not kidding either well anyway i gotta go later

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  • From ANON - Mija on August 08, 2003
    arggggggghhhhhhh a cliffy!....(sniffles,,then whines) but I want to read more....ok ok putting myself back together...sigh...anyway love this chap, its wonderfull...and from the look and sound of it, it has to be Shesshomaru or someone else...because isnt Jenenji that sweet half demon with the herb garden?? he would never want to break Kagome or either live or die by his will, Jenenji was such a sweetie..I cant see him hurting her or anyone else...anyhow thats my thought, unless its Kouga, hes fast too soo could be him, ooh you got my mind a thinking and wanting more sooo pleaseeeeeee pleaseeeeeee update..:-)
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  • From ANON - ApriL on August 08, 2003
    When i said it was messed, I meant that there wasn't anotheapteapter and I was Looking forward to it. Anywho, my first guess is that the abducter/staLker is Kouga. Anyway, I'm anxious for another chapter, so...uh...yeah.
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  • From ANON - Nekiochan on August 08, 2003
    Good chapter.

    As for the stalker, you said that you were thinking of Sess, to be that stalker. But in the story, you said that the stalker was getting feelings, so it can't be Sess, or can it?

    I know it's a guy, so thats a start. (that would be *really* creepy if it was a girl) Also you said *finally Kagome was HIS* or something on the lines of that. It can't be Naraku, that would be too obvious. It could be Kouga, but would he kidnap Kagome AGAIN?

    Aghh it's too confusing. My poor little brain can't handle the thinking process. (migrain's comin along)

    Just pick whatever person/thing you want to be the stalker. It can't be that hard.......or can it.

    Well hope your not banished from the computer for too long.....But hey, the good thing is while your away, you can write more chapters. YEAH !!!!

    Part my my house. Yeah, I wish, BUT it could happen with the right people.

    Anyway can't wait till the next chapter(s) come out.

    Good luck !!!!
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  • From ANON - Kitty on August 08, 2003
    I vote for Jinenji the other hanou that fell in love with Kagome. He wouldn't have to want her for lemony reasons, that's kind of scary, but saving her from Inu yasha sounds right up his alley.
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  • From ANON - Annyomus on August 07, 2003
    hey A/N means Authers note
    ooc means out of chrater example----
    the anima people arnt being themselfs ex sess. is in love with Kagoma,which he is really not that would be
    an ooc hope thats helps u p.s yuor story is great plez keep writing

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  • From ANON - ApriL on August 07, 2003
    Aw...man, that's messed. WeLL, great chapter, and Love your work. What eLse do peopLe put in reviews? Oh yeah, keep up the good work and bLah bLah bLah...
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on August 07, 2003
    AU or A/U =Alternate Universe. This is used for the stories that are far different from the original Story that the author has done. Here are a few examples of AU- Stories that have every one lives in Kagome's time such as they all go to high school together; or if Kagome is born in the feudal age instead of the modern. Any crossover is considered AU.

    OOC= Out Of Character , Any time it has a character doing something they really wouldn't do. Example= Kagome and Kikyo as lovers (thats WAY OOC). Kagome committing suiside over Inuyasha.

    Are there any others you want to know?
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 07, 2003
    ok soo the stalker wants Kagome??? Need to make sure I got that part straight...you left it on a cliffy about who the stalker was actually wanting and hating...hmmmm I really dont have a clue whouldould do it, and I thought Kagome loved Inuyasha??? hes loved, by me anyway..(sniffles for Inu) ok pulled myself together again, Now...hmmmm lets see theres Kouga, Sheshomaru, Naraku, hmmm how bout another demon??? did they come across anyone else during thier travels??? someone who might have a thing for Kagome? Well there is Miroku but I dont think he would hate Inu..would he? hmmm aaack even my mind cant come up with someone else unless mak make it a totally unique charactor that no ones heard of before...lol that would be fun...it would be your creation and you can put him in any scene ya want..hehe..where hes lusted for Kagome from afar..hehe..ok ok I know im not helping so will stop, I still cant wair thr the next chap...this is going to be soo good..update soon k?? pretty please???
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  • From ANON - Rachel maley on August 07, 2003
    A/U = Alternate Universe. A story that takes place in a universe that isn't QUITE (and sometimes not at all) like canon (i.e., the way the show happened).

    OOC = Out of character. Sesshomaru giggling would be OOC for him. He might laugh, but I'm betting it would be *dignified*, and giggling is never dignified.

    Keep writing - this has some possibilities.
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  • From ANON - Nekiochan on August 07, 2003
    Hmph....*goes and pouts in corner*
    I wish I was Kagome.
    But it was funny when they were calling each other name.
    But Kagome always wins...or at least I think she does.
    Anyway....of course keep up the good work on the story.
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  • From ANON - Nekiochan on August 07, 2003
    Poor Kagome.
    I hheigheights.
    I would have had a heart attack.
    Good chapter so far.
    But very funny also.
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  • From on August 07, 2003
    *thinks about this for a minute since she is also blonde, then remembers what a/u and ooc means* a/u is alternate universe and ooc is out of charecter. ya see? ne more questions, just email me

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  • From ANON - nightmareofcat on August 07, 2003
    ok i was laughing my ass off,ill admi i w i was crying, and i know what its like to have my kitten delete my sentences, not to mention any names *caughs,pugsly* but please update soon
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 06, 2003
    omg that had me laughing hard and I luved it, but wants to know whos watching and lusting for one and hating the other...probably Kikyo...grrrrrrrr...I know your having probs with the comp but as soon as you can pleaseeeeeeeeee update..luv this story..:-) and sooo happy you like my fic..(grins happily) ty...please please update as soon as possible k?? ty ty..:-)
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