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Reviews for In too deep

By : Pallas
  • From ANON - Rhea on April 17, 2004
    Damn, ppl. I don't like you very much.
    This story is too damned good, and it makes my little scribblings look like Crayola markings on the walls.
    Hmmph.
    Or maybe I just have zero self-esteem.
    Or maybe I really can't write.
    Either way, I'm loving this story.
    Keep it up.
    Just know the second I feel good reading a chapter, you need to be worried. Then my writing will be better than yours. Trust me. That's not a good thing.
    ^___^
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2004
    Dark, dreary, a little depressing, I LOVE IT!!! Please write more, this is a really great fic, the way that you're potraying Sesshomaru gives me tingles! The story line is great so don't change a thing, k?
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  • From ANON - anon. on March 09, 2004
    *shaking fist at author* update damnit!
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  • From wyldwolfrose on March 07, 2004
    oooooo, this is getting good!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! STALKER DOG!!!! hehehehe
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  • From vettech82 on March 05, 2004
    Sits like a dog and beggs "More Please!!!!"
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  • From ANON - Yle_chan on March 02, 2004
    Tourrourrrrrrrrrr Kagomeeeeeeeeeee sesshoumaru is a jkkkkkkkkkkkkkk arggggggggggg how can he do that to kagome snsnifsniff T-T it's not right sob sob ..... but he is a sexy jerk ehehehheh #_# love sesshoumaru and i love the pairing sesshoumaru/kagome ^_^ to think I was a fan of inuyasha/kagome eheheh but now things have changed my sesshyyyyy I love youuuuuu ^_- please keep writing I really love your fic you have a great mind ^_^ your fic is one of the most interesting that I have read in the last 3 month ^_^ ehehehhehe

    Ciaooooooooo

    Yle_chan
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  • From ANON - Kim on March 02, 2004
    I like where this is going. I'll be looking forward to new chapters. And don't worry, I don't think your english is bad at all.
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  • From WriterLady1031 on March 02, 2004
    I like this story! For someone who has learned English as a second language, you're doing a very good job. Yes there were a few grammar, spelling, and syntax errors throughout, but not much. Just work with your beta-reader and those things should be cleared up right away. ^_^ Update soon!

    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - Shak8spere on March 02, 2004
    It's a very good story. I would be happy to offer my services as a beta reader. I am an English teacher who happens to like this anime. :) Email me if you want to take me up on my offer.
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  • From ANON - Slate Grey on March 01, 2004
    Another wonderful chapter! You're one of my favorite authors - the amount of times I've reread "Night has Fallen" probably qualifies for some kind of award - and I'm just thrilled that you're bringing your fabulous characterization, dark undertones and lovely descriptions over to this fandom. (Not that I wouldn't read *whatever* you write, but it helps to know who the characters are. ;)

    In other words: thank you, thank you, thank you. Er, and thank you. Good job. *grins*
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on March 01, 2004
    Me so Happy! You Updated!!!!!!! Yeh! Good job! Please update again soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Semiaf45 on March 01, 2004
    I can't wait for the next chapters pleeeeeaaaassseeee post them soon!
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  • From ANON - Semiaf45 on March 01, 2004
    I can't wait for the next chapters pleeeeeaaaassseeee post them soon!
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  • From ANON - Piper on March 01, 2004
    You are making Kagome seem weak when you make her be that way with Inuyasha. She should be horrible right back at him and act like the things he does to her don't hurt her. It's just making Sesshoumaru's acusations about her being weak seem true. I love the story though! More!
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  • From ANON - CarmMeldoll on March 01, 2004
    Sitting on the edge of my seat, with excitement trying to figure if he will Kill her or Kiss her! Poor Kagome! Keep up the great work
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