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Reviews for In too deep

By : Pallas
  • From ANON - Seraphyn on February 25, 2004
    Don't stop there! You have to keep going! My God, you have me drooling for more!
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  • From ANON - CarmMeldoll on February 25, 2004
    I love how this story is progressing. Please continue to update!!
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  • From ANON - ~vampyrosa on February 24, 2004
    I'm loving this story. So well written! I love this evil Sesshoumaru. I think that's how he should be. None of that wussy lovey-dovey crap. Your writting of Kagome's character is so true. It felt so real reading from her point of veiw. excellent. By far this has been 1. Entertaining, 2. enjoyable, 3. thrilling. Your spin on the Sess/Kag plot line is interesting. I eagerly wait for more.

    ~V~
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on February 23, 2004
    I really like your story! Your story is very interesting even with its occasional language problems. Don't worry about it! So, you are Dutch. Do you live in the U.S.A. or do you live in Holland? Well I think you are doing fine! I doubt that I could write a story at the level of a first grader in Spanish (the language I am presently trying to learn---aargh wish I had learned it when I was a kid!) Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on February 23, 2004
    Butcher the language all you want. We butcher it exceedingly much as it is.

    Your storyline is wonderful, and I'd like it if you'd continue for as long as
    you possibly can.

    Ja Ne,
    CybrEmly
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  • From ANON - A.J. on February 23, 2004
    More! More!
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  • From ANON - Piper on February 23, 2004
    I Love it! More! Make Inuyasha pay!
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  • From ANON - feminafures on February 23, 2004
    oooh another good chapter...I really don't think you need a beta reader, you're doing just fine.
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  • From ANON - A.J. on February 22, 2004
    This is a Sessh/Kag, right? I hope so. I can't wait to see how you make Sessh's blood lust for Kagome into more. And make Inuyasha pay! I love your writing style! More!
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  • From ANON - Jade Dragon on February 21, 2004
    I love your story keep up the good work. Hope you get many reviws.
    This story is an Sess/kag right? I hope it is.
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  • From ANON - Helen on February 20, 2004
    I must admit, a good one. Some of the stories I've read on this site are mindless, plotless excuses for literature. But I like this one. It's cool. Well, the chapter I've read, anyway. I like your style of writing, and the fact that it's not just words coming together to make one long piece of shit. It makes sense.
    Finally.
    So, you need to hurry up with the other chapters, because I want to see how this turns out.

    Peace.
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  • From ANON - feminafures on February 20, 2004
    Good fic, I'm looking foward to more of your work!! LOL...Though I think Inuyasha is a total ass so far.
    Ja ne
    Gia
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  • From ANON - videl loves goKU on February 19, 2004
    WOW great first chapter...I can't wait for more....this is a Sess/Kag story? I hope so, I love Sessy, he is my fave character and even though Sess/Rin are my absolutely favorite couple..I still like sess and Kag stories...well anyways I liked this chapter very much and I do hope you continue it soon....um...and I hope Inuyasha gets a reality check and a slap in the face...lol...yeah if its a sess/kag story...oooo let inu catch them being naughtly lol I am such a pervert that would be a funny reaction especially with Inu being such a bastard. Ok Ok its your story and I can't wait for more...Update as soon as you can please!

    ~Videl loves goKU
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  • From ANON - videl loves goKU on February 19, 2004
    WOW great first chapter...I can't wait for more....this is a Sess/Kag story? I hope so, I love Sessy, he is my fave character and even though Sess/Rin are my absolutely favorite couple..I still like sess and Kag stories...well anyways I liked this chapter very much and I do hope you continue it soon....um...and I hope Inuyasha gets a reality check and a slap in the face...lol...yeah if its a sess/kag story...oooo let inu catch them being naughtly lol I am such a perverty that would be a funny reaction especially with Inu being such a bastard. Ok Ok its your story and I can't wait for more...Update as soon as you can please!

    ~Videl loves goKU
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  • From ANON - sarah on February 19, 2004
    arrrrrrr this is so good i cant wait for more. keep up the good work and post soon
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