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Reviews for Dirty Life

By : Strawberries
  • From kogaluver on November 24, 2004
    Such a wonderfully creative story. I've followed it from the beginning and have enjoyed every chapter. I'm very excited for the lemon between Rin/Mir/Inu, not because I'm a hentai ^_^ but because I know you'll write it expertly. It's gonna be soooo hot, I just know it. Good luck!
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  • From Velika on November 23, 2004
    oh, please don't let miroku die!!! please, please, please don't!!! he doesn't deserve ittttt =´((((((((((( well, don't really listen to me... it's your story... i guess you have a reason to everything you write... so... i guess i can bare whatever you decide to write... anyways, continue soon!!!! i can't wait (i really can't) to read next chapter!!!! you're an awesome writer =) good luck! bye-bye!
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  • From ANON - Kiki Ortega on November 22, 2004
    Nice Job! I'm glad you updated... we all appreciate it very much! Well, as always keep it up... you're so talented at this!
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on November 22, 2004
    It was an awesome story...Never read like it before..the drama, the hardships man you really caught a good mood..i enjoyed it very much and i have recommended it to some of my friends and you have a great talent for writing keep it up and keep updating im dying to know what happens next....
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  • From ANON - New Fan on November 21, 2004
    Great chapter, I hope that you can update soon. I wonder if Sess is going to see his brother
    for the first time in years. Update sooooooonnnnn!!!!
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  • From VampireWitch on November 21, 2004
    Wow....very powerful fic...
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  • From Velika on November 21, 2004
    poor miroku!!! i hope some will help him!!! he doesn't deserve to be hurt so badly... =( nice chapter, a little small (compared to the others) but it was good... i hope you continue soon... i like this story so much... and don't mind the anonymous... they're just cowards who wants to piss you off... they're not worth it.... anyway, i want to read more from you soon! =) later!
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  • From ANON - KowaiiMusume on November 21, 2004
    Nice to see you got your insperation back. Wonderful chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on November 20, 2004
    Poor Miroku, he does not deserve that. I hope that his suffering will end soon as well as Inuyasha's and Rin.
    I hope that Rin does not be with Sess since she is so young. When she gets older maybe. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - hanyou-elf on November 20, 2004
    i've always enjoyed this story, like some weird sicko. but tonight, you have heightened my sense of struggle and played with my emotions. i couldn't believe what i read and i sure do hope inuyasha and kagome get together in the park. i hope he can get away from kikyo and hang out with her. and poor miroku. miroku, while not one of my favorite characters, is in such an awful hellish time right now. i hope to kami-sama that he can get away. i mean, as much as i am looking forward to inu/kag-ness, i want him to be okay. i can't wait for the next chapter and i sure do hope you update soon!

    ja ne!
    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From ANON - tigeryasha on November 20, 2004
    Read your answer to my review. Good heavens, please do not get the idea that I am a Kikyo/IY person! I am very much for Kag/IY, always have been, always will be. It just seemed a strange inconsistancy to me, as a reader, that this was one of his "clientele" where you didn't describe in detail what was going on in the bedroom. Please do not feel you have to insert something for my sake if it flies in the face of your storyline, especially anything "light". I'm glad you did respond, though, as it does clear up the inconsistancy. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - arisu on November 20, 2004
    Wow, you really hate Miroku, don't you? Poor guy. Don't let anyone tell you how to write your story. If they don't like it, no one is forcing them to read it. Rest assured, you have plenty of satisfied readers who can't wait to see where YOU are taking the story. Keep it up! :-)
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  • From ANON - Kiki Ortega on November 20, 2004
    Just so you know, I'm still here cheering you on... it's all up to you... you're the writer (or typist)!!! By the way, don't listen to those dweebs, it's your fanfic and you decide what happens (and what doesn't happen). Thank you sooo much for sharing it with us... it has most of us impatient for an update....

    Oh... and by the way, I totally side you on that Kikyo and Inuyasha issue... even though I love Kikyo dearly, this is, as you stated, a Kagome/Inuyasha pairing and you have every right to make theirs the best lemon in the story....

    Well, lots of encouragement!!!
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  • From ANON - Shahira on November 20, 2004
    The review from Anon, which is obviously not only not a review, but someone who is not truly reading this story, was not only uncalled for, it was intended to hurt feelings for no reason. If you can't either write a respectable review on a story that you have taken the time to actually read, or be constructive in your critizism, then you should not post a review at all. What goes into the story, is strictly up to the creativity of the author, and whether or not he or she choses to take some of the suggestions of their readers. If you do not like the content of a story, then do not read it. Dirty Life is a good fic, and the author had done a lot to keep the story consistant and interesting. A lot of work has gone into it, and no one has the right to be vendictive because they do not care for the content. As the disclaimers all point out, only one person owns the rights to the Inuyasha characters. This disclaimer also holds true for the reviewers.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on November 20, 2004
    oh man, no new chapter.i'm so sad, hope you find your inspriation again soon. for what it is worth i enjoy your story. maybe what the one reviewer was talking about is at the beginning didn't it say that if the boys didn't make enough money that naraku would take it out of their butts? maybe that's were they get the idea that naraku uses his people sexually. i can understand why you leave out most of what kikyou and inu do, its not like this is something inu wants, it is just doing his job so its not like the acts or any real feelings are in to what he is having to do with kikyou. plus if in the future then you let everyone get out of this life, then if inu and kag can get together then if they are intiment then the feelings inu has for the act comparied to how he felt other times would be good to write about i'm sure inu would have alot of conflicting emotion if he and kag got together if he could leave his old life behind, would he even want to be with anyone like that easily? just thoughts i'd been having on this story. can't wait for more please! take care.
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