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Reviews for Dirty Life

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - Erin on November 20, 2004
    Here is a bit of advice. Only cowards write criticisms in any aspect of life under the name "anon" or "anonymous". In fact, I never read anonymous notes or letters because their sole purpose is to cause strife. Why would you let someone without a name stir you up so badly? If they had a real opinion, they would have left a name or an email. I do not agree with gay relationships or gay sex, however, child prostitution is a reality that needs to be stopped. You have never made any of those "lemons" even mildly pleasant. I am glad you are writing about how painful and dirty that existence is. Your story makes me wish that I had resources available to help the children that are out there. Keep writing, and I would love to read how these characters will find happiness again by leaving this life forever behind. Nice work!
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  • From ANON - KowaiiMusume on November 20, 2004
    I don't remember anything about Naraku doing it with anyone to be honest with you. This is one of the stories I have on my stories list and look for every chance I can. Don't worry too much about someone's bad review. I understand as an author my self that we won't be able to please everyone. I usually just remove reviews that are stupid or really bashing. I hope you get your insparation back soon. I can't wait to see where things go.
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  • From ANON - Velika on November 19, 2004
    i really liked it... continue soon!!! i'll be here to read next chapter =)
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  • From ANON - tigeryasha on November 19, 2004
    Read chapter 20. Good, as always, although you're still not going into the kind of detail about the sex acts happening between IY & Kikyo. It's like this story is going from NC-17 to PG-13, which wouldn't matter if the story had started out as PG-13. The story feels like it's loosing its edge. Especially since Kikyo appears to be one of the main "villains". It would be nice to find out what's going through her head while she's enjoying Inu's "attributes", for example. Of course, if you have something planned, this review is a mute point. Otherwise, consider this my somewhat desperate plea for an extensive...lemon, I think the word is...between these two. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 19, 2004
    you stupid son of a bitch who the hell do you think you are letting naraku fuck my man in the ass only i can fuck him and no one else bitch and take this seriously i will find out who the hell you are and kick your ass until you die BITCH!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - xXlovablekdXx on November 18, 2004
    omg i love this story. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Sky on November 15, 2004
    This story is pretty sad, u know with the bro and sister thang!! Hopefully everything works out!!! Update soon

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  • From ANON - hanyou-elf on November 15, 2004
    (wipes tears dramatically from eyes) omg! i love this story, have i ever told you that? the story is well developed and the plot is way complex. and i can't believe that they would have to do something like that! where did you come up with that plot twist!? how is inuyasha going to handle the fact that his brother has come back and to go with him, he has to play with miroku and rin-chan? (shakes head sadly) and the fact that the brother and sister are going to give into it so easily! (pouting sad) that's so sad! i mean, surely inuyasha is going to fight about it? i mean, he's going to try to not do it, right?

    update again soon!

    ja ne!
    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From ANON - Lady Kagome on November 15, 2004
    It's been awhile since I have wandered around this site, and when I left, I had thought you had taken a permanent hiatus from writing this story. I am glad to see that you haven't, and have thoroughly enjoyed reading the last 6 or so chapters. You are doing a magnificent job, as always, and I look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Moon&Stars on November 01, 2004
    I really love this story. I feel so bad for Miroku. This story is very different from all the other stories that I have read. Please update as soon as you can. I really look forward to reading it. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - hanylf^©lf on October 30, 2004
    (glomps) omg! (wipes tears dramatically away) that was awesome! i can't wait for the next update! this is so good! (and i can't wait for the next lemon!) i really like the different levels of this story. i mean, it's a story of longing and a story of lust. and its a story of redemption, i sure hope that inuyasha and sesshoumaru can get it all worked out, i mean, i love them together, (not like that, although...) and i hope that they can be reconciled.

    great job with this story and i can't wait for the next chapter!

    ja ne!
    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From ANON - tiger kitten on October 30, 2004
    damn that was a short chapter. I think it's the shortest one ever. Man I'm lik dis disapointed. ACK past midnight must go to bed.....
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  • From ANON - tigeryas X on February 16, 1920
    H Inu Inuyasha's back in Kikyo's clutches. (Insert maniacal laughter) Now, what sort of sick, twisted things can she come up with? (Girl after my own heart; starts wringing hands together) She could do somethings that would humiliate IY in front of Kagome, & humiliate Kagome by making her seeke ske she's still a child, a novice when it comes to the carnal pleasures. Wonder if that apartment has a large, picture window? Anyway, looking forward w/ great interest to next chapter. God, I love this story.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on October 26, 2004
    oh man, got to tell you this story is really something. i'm not usually into dark stuff but, something just got me stuck on this story it is really well written can't wait for the rest. hope they can get out.
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  • From ANON - purple_rain_clouds on October 25, 2004
    Love ur story, please update!
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