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By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - Mysterious AM on September 10, 2004
    I hope you update again soon! I'd lost this story and couldn't remember the name for anything, but I finally managed to locate it again today. Yay! ^_^ But Inuyasha and Kagome still haven't really met yet. I was hoping that after my long lapse in keeping track of the story, they would have. But hopefully when you post the next chapter they will! Until next update! (And yes, I really WILL be back, because I got some sense and bookmarked it, heh)
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  • From ANON - Nora Wall on September 05, 2004
    Great story, so many twists and turns! Earlier in the story to said that if you bring Sesshomaru and this that he will be paired up with Rin, but in this story isn't Rin around 12 or 13? (Miroku said that she was two years younger than him and I am guessing he is the around the same age as InuYasha) Wouldn't that kinda be....weird because of the age difference? Sesshomaru as to be at least over 18 in the story because it he can drive and drink at a bar...but he could be a sneaky little boy and use a fake ID for the drinking part...^__^! Oh well I guess I will just have to wait and see what happens! lol.

    And another thing... IS INUYASHA AND KAGOME EVER GONNA MEET???????? lol. Again, I guess I will just have to wait and see what happens. lol.

    Well keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Nora Wall
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  • From ANON - marian tarielle on September 04, 2004
    This is not my typical style fic, but it has held my attention far longer than most do anymore. It's very well written and while the subject matter is very disturbing I like the characters (at least the ones I'm suppose to like) and really want to continue reading. So good job! You've managed to write a very compelling story, PLEASE continue it soon.
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  • From ANON - marian tarielle on September 04, 2004
    This is not my typical style fic, but it has held my attention far longer than most do anymore. It's very well written and while the subject matter is very disturbing I like the characters (at least the ones I'm suppose to like) and really want to continue reading. So good job! You've managed to write a very compelling story, PLEASE continue it soon.
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  • From ANON - Shjorpa on September 02, 2004
    Wow..! This is a great piece of fiction! The storyline is not something you see done very often (if at all) so the originality is there. I mean, you can only read so many High School fics or Inuyasha fooling with Kikyo so Kagome runs away-fics before growing tired of the subject. It's certainly a chocking and disturbing subject matter, and I'm glad to see that you aren't trying to sugarcoat it too much. I'm glad to see that the boys have some of their fire and caring personalities intact still. They are pretty strong boys. Hopefully Kikyo won't be too cruel to Inuyasha, but the fact that she requested a bondagesession is kind of hinting towards what she likes in bed, and it's probably not champagne and rosepetals.
    As disgusting and disturbing as the subject of this fic is, I absolutley love it! It's easy to get sucked into the story, leaving you wanting to find out what will happen next. The things I'm a bit curious about is how the girls and boys are going to get to know eachother more. They don't seem like the types to use prostitues and the boys have a pretty hectic schedule. And if they fall inlove (which is very likely considering the attraction they have towards eachother) how is that going to work out? No girl will feel very good at finding out they are inlove with a prostitue I imagine but if they get passed that, there is still the major problem of Naraku owning the boys. If they run away then Naraku is probably going to do his best to get them back, and as demonstrated with Rin he won't like them having girlfriends. It would be too terrible if he got Kagome and Sango to work for him aswell.. And how is Sesshomaru going to free his little brother? Will he even want him back after the life he's lived? I hope so. Oooh, I'm just burning with a need to find out what's going to happen!
    Enough with me thinking out loud here :) It's seriously a great fic and you shofeelfeel proud of yourself for it. I'm hoping to see the plot thicken soon :)
    Looking forward to the next chapter. Until then, take care :)
    /Shjo
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  • From ANON - sesshy_babe on August 28, 2004
    Man what a mess up life. Poor Inuyasha I hope Sesshomaru finds him soon. I bet Sesshomaru going to be Rin's client. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - sesshy_babe on August 28, 2004
    Man what a mep lip life. Poor Inuyasha I hope Sesshomaru finds him soon. I bet Sesshomaru going to be Rin's client. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - sesshy_babe on August 28, 2004
    Man what a mess up life. Poor Inuyasha I hope Sesshomaru finds him soon. I bet Sesshomaru going to be Rin's client. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - sesshy_babe on August 28, 2004
    Man what a mess up life. Poor Inuyasha I hope Sesshomaru finds him soon. I bet Sesshomaru going to be Rin's client. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - anon E mouse on August 19, 2004
    I'm wondering, is this gonna have incest in this? or not? im verry curious
    I do not support incest unless its fictional
    ill put it in s fos for you me and my her her (ick puke nasty not goin there) and i wouldent even put that on my worst enemy
    but fictional incest is not real so i guess its ok
    i think im makin a fool of myself here so ill shut up
    but b4 that a rin and miroku show would be highly popular in the place thier in wonder why Naraku didnt think of it

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  • From ANON - Paige Crews on August 15, 2004
    *o*This is the BEST Inuyasha alternate-universe IN THE WORLD!!!Ya better update as soon as you can 'cause this story is too good not to finish^_^.I guess I really like this story 'cause I like gay lemons,but I like guy-girl sex MORE.WOW!Ya never really think about male prostitutes.I mean,I knew their were male prostitutes,but I never really thought about it.You get a 10 out of 10 for originality,and I hope Inuyasha and Kagome meet soon!
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  • From ANON - hanyou-elf on August 10, 2004
    *tears* what a lovely chapter (not lovely like fluff lovely, but well written lovely) i enjoy reading your story so much and i am so happy that sesshoumaru is going to find inuyasha... or is aft after all, inuyasha will be away for a few days and sesshoumaru will be going in in a few days. hmm... and if inuyasha isn't there, will kagura help him out? it seems like she's taken a very big liking to inuyasha, maybe she'll see sesshoumaru, want him, and help him and then because inuyasha isn't into kagura... she'll bened ned on to sesshoumaru? (we shall see, ne?)

    anyways, i am totally enjoying this story and i can not wait for the next update. i am glad to see you back again and are updating! its a great story and great chapters, please, update soon!

    ja ne!
    ~hanyou-elf!
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  • From ANON - Sorena on August 10, 2004
    Wow...I must say that was the most unique lem hav have ever read. Usually I tend to stray away from fics with male/male or female/female pairings...but after reading this one I found it rather interesting in a dark sort of way. I still prefer male/female partnerships but this one is written so well that I find myself kind of seeing and understanding what male prostitutes have to go through. And what other horrible things happen in this world...including Rin's problem with her foster dad. I hope Inuyasha and Kagome meet soon and something good happens to him for once. :)
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  • From Ellen on August 09, 2004
    OH I'm going to cry!

    Thanks for Sharing and I cant wait to read S'more!
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  • From ANON - animechick262003 on August 07, 2004
    Very deep story, although your writing is very familiar to me. Youac tually write similar to another authores on this site, cant help but wonder if your one and the same? Any how I loour our story very detailed. I can't help but wonder if you haven't taken formal writing at some point. And If so I cant help but wonder why your wasting your time writing fanfiction when you have so much talen? Anyhow about not putting sess with RIN. I'm for him being paried with ehr, Im a fan, so wouldnt bothr jme one bit. Very good story! Keep up good work and I look forward to future Chapters.
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