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Reviews for Dirty Life

By : Strawberries

From ANON - rin-chan on March 18, 2004
great story.....Flamers are mean ...i cant wait to read more on it .Keep up th egood work ^.^
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From ANON - Xenia on March 18, 2004
Oh... and this message is for the person calling themselves FALLEN (the one who keeps flaming Fallen_Angel):

You're an asshole. Not because you have some criticism about this story, but because you're a condescending JERK. Comparing us all to the fans on the AS boards? Accusing us of only liking this story because it has InuYasha characters in it? Come on. You've made your points - now STOP BEING A PRICK. Seriously. You're not coming off like the bigger person here - YOU'RE the one coming off like a petty child throwing a tantrum.

And newsflash for you, honey... EVERYTHING has already been done. Do you really think this precious fan fic (can't remember the name) you're claiming Fallen_Angel has "copy and pasted" is the first fiction EVER written about male prostitution? Do you think it's the ONLY story with a remotely (or vastly) similar plot-line? If you honestly think that, you're not that bright. EVERYONE is inspired by SOMETHING. Some of the most entertaining fan fictions I've seen have been based off of other stories or movies or what-not. I don't really care WHERE a story gets inspiration from, so long as it's a well-written story and I'm enjoying reading it.

So come off your high horse and stop trying DESPERATELY to ruin everyone's fun. I mean, seriously. You insult the story we're all enjoying, you insult the author of said story, you insult all the readers, you insult our reasons for enjoying it... What's next? Fire-bombing the building where the AFF servers are located, so the whole site goes down? Just stop being a damn killjoy. You had your say. You made your points. And hey... We just don't give a crap - Which should be BLATANTLY obvious, but you seem to be too dense to catch on. So there it is, in black and white, just for you.

Now go away.
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From ANON - loveswhore on March 18, 2004
i love the way you've writen it. It written much better then my works of Sasha do to my tendencey to hold back on my works least they be dark too or too antsy. you're doing really well this well i have decided to either work harder on my ORIGNALS discontinue them.Bthe way, i really this story.^_^
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From ANON - Xenia on March 18, 2004
I'm glad to see you're going to continue to work on this story, because it's a really good one. I really like how you wrote Kouga in this story - too many people write him as such a huge jerk and I don't know where they get that from, 'cos I don't think he's a jerk at all. I think you got him pretty spot-on :) And I love the fact that he's in this story in the first place! :D

Can't wait to see what Naraku does about Rin... *frets* What a cliffhanger!

And I thought your lemon was really good... especially for a first time! I didn't think it wasl atl at all, so no worries :)
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From ANON - Mija on March 18, 2004
wow..three whole chaps..sowwy I lagged havent been reading or reviewing..sigh..sorry..but anyhow oooh man those chaps were totally awsome..and omg Inu turned Kagura on?? hehe he must have a really nice umm package..hehe and omg poor Miroku when is that bastid Naraku going to just leave him the heck alone??? poor Miroku and Koga?? ooh well if Inu had to have someone might as well be Koga, he was at least gentle and stuff with Inu and he felt for him on some level which was totally cool..but omg omg omg soo Naraku knows Rins ther ooh ooh man and hes going to have Hiten do something to her isnt he?? grrrrrrrrrrrr really really want to hurt Naraku..badddddlllyyyy, just let me at him for five minutes I'll make him cry like the sissy la la he is..bastid...ok ok done venting..hehe..and whats this about flames??? ooh man just let the flames go gf they aint worth the grief they seem to inflict on people...lots of my dear freinds who are totally awsome writers here get flamed and it hurts them still and if I could Id let everyone of them eat thier words..I mean really...is it just me or do flames have any real inteligance behind them?? if ya dont like a story dont review simple no??? if ya have some critism that you think might help then by all means most authors like that..but just plain out being mean and rude is just nonesense..sigh ok this is a touchy suject for me..and I guess ya can tell huh?? ooh well...I stand by what I say..anyhow glad your continuing I like this fic..till next chap huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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From ANON - comicfancat on March 17, 2004
I'm glad your not going to let some major jerk who can't see that its just a story upset you and that you will continue it.I myself have enjoyed it and can't wait for the next chapter (its in the favorite box in my computer).Though everyone has their own opinion, never let them stop you from anything you want to do.Your a good writer and should keep it up.I'm an artest myself and am under constant eye balling,it just takes some getting used to as long as you never lose yourself it will remain fun.

Kerry aka Comicfancat

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From ANON - Kari on March 17, 2004
I really miss this story awhole lot! i really do wish you would keep writing this wonderful story. i mean alot of people love this story aswell. and i really do hope u keep going. you a great writer, and your doing wonderful too. please i beg of u keep writing :(.
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From ANON - animchick262003 on March 17, 2004
FLAMESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!! FROM!!!!!! ME!!!!!!!!! BUt the good kind LMAO!!!! Hahaha...ok um so yea I like this this is awsome. SOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOODD!!! I have been angry the entire fic wantin kic kick some major toosh but um thats a good sign good writing usually evokes emotion in some form or fashion. Great WORK!! EXCELLENT JOB!!!! Tooo danm good for words!!!! Five stars????? Hell how about teeeeeen!!! Ok so yea IM a bit hyper. Hope ya can use the flames though maybe roast a marshmellow(SP???) Some how I think I spelled that wrng. DAMNED CHARDONAY FINGERS.

Until your next update I will not bathe, eat, sleep I wil simply day in and out stare at my screen like this

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So um hurry up ^___^
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From Numisma on March 17, 2004
i will also join the ranks of support and state that i have found this to be probably my most favorite fic on the site and i will be among hundred avi avid readers of Dirty Life who will be sorely sad to see this story discontinued. yes, it is your right to stop writing the story for whatever reason, but i feel i speak for so many others when i say for you to not let a crabby reviewer bully you around. you shouldn't have to deal with that kind of crap.

whatever your decision is, please at least consider becoming a professional writer and getting your work on the market. i would most surely pick up any volume of literature if it bore your name as the author ;) and trust me, that's saying a lot, cuz there are only two authors who have done that to me in the past.. Neil Gaiman, and Ambrose Bierce.
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From ANON - Lady Kagome on March 17, 2004
I am back again, because after I posted this review, I noticed the arrogant jerk that posted once again seemingly trying to piss off the creator of this story.

If hav have such a problem with the content of this story, then please, don't read it. And if all you are going to is sit here and tell the author that all she is capabale of is plagarizing, then there is something seriously wrong in your head.

This author has some damn grand talent, and I would know, I'm a freaking English Major. Who cares if she based the plot off of somebody else's story as long as she credits it. For all you know, she has gotten permission from the original idea holder to work on this peace. Some, but not all, authors would be highly flattered to know that their story spoke enough to somebody to make them want to write their own peice based on that topic. And yes, some may be offended. But as a writer, we know it is a dog eat dog world, if you are going to publish your work on a fan fiction site, you need to realize that the work is available to any one and everyone who has access to an internet connection.

Irregardless of your opinion, you still need to show some respect to this writer. She has obviously put a lot of hard work into writing this fiction. As for it being Inuyasha characters, that is just a perk for most of the people on the site. But that is not all that this powerful story holds, it carries a true plot, wrapped in bare human emotion, pulling almost any and all readers into the center of the detailed descriptions.

So to my point: If you have nothing nice to say, then say nothing at all. Let the girl have her own creative freedom. If you take such offense to the idea that she based this on another story, perhaps even taking a few lines from the other one as inspiration, then you need to get over that really fast. It's part of a writers world. I know I may be repeating myself, but honestly, good grief Fallen. Do you have nothing better to do than rant on a talented writers review board?

To Fallen Angel:

Do not take Fallen's words into your writer's heart. These words come with a grain of salt. When you have but one person criticizing your work out of thousands, then you have nothing to worry about. There will always be one bad seed in everything good that one does. The only thing us writers can do is keep our chins up, and keep cranking out the words that we write for ourselves. That's right, for us. Disregard anything you see here, it's what is in your heart and writers soul that you must listen to.

I will leave you with those words, I apologize for the long post.
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From ANON - Lady Kagome on March 17, 2004
Thank you so for for realizing how much your story is loved!

I am so very happy to hear that you will be continuing. I can't wait to see the happy ending that I sincerely hope is in store!

Much love to your story: Write on!
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From ANON - Fallen on March 17, 2004
*sigh followed by a smirk* Apparently you have several people addicted to your story. Is this besiege of accolades and pleadings because of the actual plot or merely because InuYasha characters have been inserted? To anyone who thinks that my previous review was completely erroneous, I challenge you to read loveswhore's "The Only Way I Know." If you like the story itself, then you're a reader who thinks that the actual idea and content is interesting. If you don't, then you're just someone who likes the plot only because of InuYasha. Either way, you'll see the similarities. Perhaps you'll consider this story to be a tribute to the inspiration. Or you may regard this story to be a poor carbon copy written for fangirls.

*shrug*

Like anyone else, I'm entitled to my own opinion. I'm not a jerk, an asshole, or any other name that reviewers have childishly tossed onto their board simply because they're having temper tantrums over what I said. What you, Fallen_Angel, chose to do with your story is no concern of mine. Your writing is actually good. However, I read the original and the similarities between yours and "The Only Way I Know" are simply too blatant and frequent for my tastes. How can I praise you without pointing this out? It's perfectly fine to gain inspiration from someone else's work. But if you didn't have any other source for information, why didn't you take the time to research this topic a little more? A quick search in Google will pop up numerous results and personal accounts. That way, this story would have more to pull from. I think your writing is good enough to deserve a little more time and info poured into it. This is just something to think about.

On a final note: Fanfictions are not copyrighted. However, every author thinks that their story is precious and that their ideas and words have value. To find their exact original concepts or phrasing in someone else's work is something I sure they would find offensive. This story isn't exactly plagiarism, but nevertheless it has enough sections in here to be considered a rip. And that's just discourteous even if credit was given.

So now, reviewers, will you illogically argue and scream at your computer screens about how wrong I am like the neurotic InuYasha fans on the AdultSwim boards? Or will you consider there may be a small grain of truth in what I write?

Try not to think to hard about it. Your head might explode.
*smirk*

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From ANON - Lianna on March 17, 2004
I like this story hella, dont you dare think about scrapping it. All those stupid fagmuffins who said that this was a cut and paste story are stupid, don't listen to them. Please don't delete this story, I'll virtually kick their arses if you want me to ;D
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From ANON - AleGnA on March 17, 2004
Yay, yay, yay! *does her happy dance across the living room.* I'm so glad you decided to keep this story up. Don't worry about any flames, I'm sure you'll get many great reviews to make up for that one stupid flame. Yaaaaay!!! *skips around waiting patiently for the next chapter.* Don't mind me! :)
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From ANON - SUGAR03 on March 17, 2004
YAY ITS COMING BACK NOW INU AND KAG CAN GET TOGETHER -THEY BETTER-KEEP ON WRITING AND IF ANYBODY SAYS ANYMORE SHIT ABOUT THE STORY TELL THEM TO GO FUCK THEMSELVES
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