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By : Strawberries

From ANON - InuYoukaiOtaku on March 17, 2004
NOOO!!!! Kick them in kne knee! Who care's what mean nasty people think! If the problem gets worse then report them! You have an AWESOME story!!!!!!!! I have this story saved in to favorites and i check on it every day to see if you updated. T_T What happens about Kagome and them?!?!?!?!?! ARG STUPID IDIOTIC FLAMERS!!!!!!! Ruin it for everybody why don't you!!!! *glares daggers at flamers* Reviews are made for being nice, and giving constructive critisim! NOT FLAMES!!!! This is a VERY good story, and has a VERY good plot. EVERYONE..well almost, that reads fanfics, who desideds to become a fanfic author, gets some ideas from other stories! I HAVE, but it's not PLADERISM..i can't spell T_T..sound it out.

Thanks a lot flamers!!!! You ruined it for everyone! This is a great author, who was doing a wonderful job! then you guys go and ruin it for everyone!
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From ANON - KIMMY on March 17, 2004
please dont ever quit becathisthis is a good fic. i realli enjoyed this fic and its the first thing i look for when i sign on. i have read other fics before, yet this fic is still my favorite. so please dont quit. as some of the reviews said, you have more, much more people who likes your fic and those who dont. to those who flamed, GO TO HELL. you fucking retardz can go to hell for all i care. just because you dont like reading the story doesnt means you have to review. no one told you to in the first place. reviewing is NOT for FLAMES you fuckers. its where you tell the author what she/he's missing and how they should improve it. and also tell them if they did a good job writing the chapter. geez, for gods sake, everyone gets their ideas from one sourse or another. it just doesnt pop out of nowhere. i watch a movie or read something that triggers an idea.
NEways, i an truely sorry for my outburst fallen-angel. i never reviewd before, well at least not on aff.net before. i feel imbarrass reviewing, but hey, i just gotta review your. sorrie it took so long for me to finalli review. KIMMY

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From ANON - Skye on March 17, 2004
Great story! Please don't quit the story! Forget about the stupid flamers! You have more people who enjoy the story then you people who don't. Flamers are just immature adults who like to pick fights for no reason. Please keep going, this is my favorite story!
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From ANON - Amanda on March 17, 2004
so your just givip hup huh?
let me tell you something as long as its not copied word for word its not plagarism look up plagarism and copywrite laws and then tell them what for
for gods sake dont quit the fic i like it
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From ANON - Hillary on March 17, 2004
awwww please dont drop
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From ANON - AleGnA on March 17, 2004
You shouldn't listen to ignorant people. Besides, you already explained about using that other persons story as a guide so, other people should learn how to read the small print, which in this case was the author's note at the very beginning of the story. I myself haven't read that story and find yours to be rather interesting itself. You should keep going. Unless the author of the fic you basedrs ors on has a problem with it then other people should just back off and let you be. If they don't like it then they don't have to read it. There's plenty of other fics out there. Besides, are they going to go pick at everybody else's fics and say that they're copying too? There's alot of fics that are pretty close in plot and style and most of that's accidental. There's only so many things a person can do before it's all been done. Don't get discouraged yet. You write really good! :)
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From ANON - Someone Out There on March 17, 2004
OK people did it to me again. So they added a few more reviews before I got mine up again, so people don't grip with the numbers I have claimed on my last review!
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From ANON - Someone Out There on March 17, 2004
It's ME AGAIN. See, what did I tell you? You have 110 reviews. 108 of them are great reviews! 1 if your comment, and there is ONLY 1 flame! I saw that someone else managed to find the story and do what I was going to (without luck), but they said that it was as this other person said and I'm going to go with that!! Everyone out here is dying... so cure us! All of us that write are going to take some heat or put down at one time or other. There's a story on this sight that I started reading and it seemed like a lead up to a story of mine, with my idea, and I have to admit that it shocked me a bit, but as I read the next time they posted, even though it was similar of the idea and major theme, the story was still different. It was like my story inspired theirs. I still felt a little out though, because that was one of my most brilliant peices (or I thought so) and now someone was using the idea too, but that's what stories are. IDEAS and feelings of the writer. I would grieve if someone actually 'took' my stories, but all I could really do was think my writing inspired them to do their story.

See I told you I'd write alot. Hopefully you will reconsider your decision. AND SOON. It's like jus just about every other reviewer has said: your story involves you with a lot of thought afterwards as to what their going through, especially knowing that they KNOW that this is not THEM inside. That just because they do this, doesn't make them 'that way'. And I could see the twos predicument as to what they're feeling after being helped to enjoy it. THAT would raise a lot of thought of themselves and like you write, it would make them feel ashamed.

Please continue the writing of YOUR story. We need some (good) closure on them, (even though I know life out there doesn't end in 'happily ever afters' in the real world). I've hurt enough in my life that I can feel very deeply when a writer writes a story captivating enough to stir up a responding ache (sympathic feelings) to what that character is going through. With your story, I've felt like going out myself, grabbing one of these guys off the street or whatever, take them to a nice room, give them a decent meal, see if there is really something I can do to help them 'escape'. (YEAH, about as easy getting a battered woman away from her husband or boyfriend). But you have definately stirred up something.

I hope that you write a good ending, because I want to read that. I want to see the characters I love make it work out, because sometimes I became one of those characters myself while reading and I would want it that way. (Don't quote you don't always get what you want - I know that too well already)!

So unless you want me to keep this up. WRITE A NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!
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From ANON - tigers_eye on March 17, 2004
I was going to do a review of chapter 9, which I read last night. Then I pull this up this morning & see the note about discontinuing?! HELL, NO!!! DO NOT DROP THIS STORY! IT IS WAY TOO GOOD TO BE CAST INTO OBLIVION! If what that one reviewer said made you upset, then "take 5" as they say, gather yourself together, then forget about that person & continue on. If you know you didn't rip off another writer, then screw the reviewer. DO LET THIS STORY DIE ON THE VINE! I've looked over most of the reviews, & I've seen ones from people who, respectfully, have pointed out parts that they may not have been comfortable w/. Heck, I'll admit, I wasn't too fond of chapter 9 just because I can't see that pairing. (Shivers run down spine.) However, these people were respectful in voicing their opinions. So don't take just one accusation to heart, & give up. It wouldn't be fair to all of us who have been thoroughly enjoying your story. Personally, I was going to pitch the idea of bringing Jakotsu later into the story, since I understand he had a thing for IY in the series & has a few screws loose. Would seem the perfect type for a rougher scene involving our fav character. There; put two reviews together in 5 minutes. Anyway, hope you change your mind.
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From ANON - Firefrost on March 17, 2004
NO!!!! :( Don't drop the story, please!!!!! I'm REALLLLY enjoying this, and can't wait to see Inu/Kag! Don't be discouraged by annoying flames; it shouldn't matter what they think! I saw you post your source on the first chapter! Obviously this flamer is somebody who doesn't care enough to read the author's notes or inputs for each story.

I find it horribly unfair to the fans who enjoy the story to leave them hanging due to an inconciderate, uncaring flamer. I, as a writer, have gotten flames myself, so I get where you're coming from. Please... don't let the flamers spoil it for the rest of us! *puppy eyes*
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From ANON - Jules on March 17, 2004
It's not fair T_T An awesome story and it is being abandoned. As long as you are not copying word for word, I do not see the problem. I thought every one had the right to do their take on an idea. Some people are just so shallow *grr* Well, if you do ever continue the story here on AFF, I'll be keeping an eye out for it. Truly enjoyed the story. It was so refreshing to read a story where Inu was not "all that". Again, yourry wry was AWESOME and I am sorry that you won't be continuing.
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From ANON - SUGAR03 on March 17, 2004
WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NO I LOVED IT DAMN YOU I WANTED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENED DAMN YOU TO HELL SORRY IF I OFFENDED YOU BUT YOU SHOULD JUST TELL THOSE PEOPLE TO FUCK OFF DAMN THEM TO ANNOYING BASTARDS GO TO HELL PLEASE I BEG DONT STOP THE WRITING I WANTED TO SEE WHEN INU AND KAG WERE GETTING TOGETHER FUCK IT
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From ANON - Alaskantiger on March 17, 2004
This is a great story. I read the note saying that you going to discontinue this story. That sucks I wish you wouldn't. Anyway thanks for sharing it with us. ^_^
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From ANON - ME on March 17, 2004
Okay, went and did a little research ^_^--read the first chapter of Loveswhore's fic--the idea may be the same, but in no way, shape, or form did you 'rip' the fic--it is not a 'cut and paste' job that your flamer said you did--ignore them!! Almost every idea in a fanfic has been 'done' to some extent, it's very difficult to come up with a totally new idea--life in the fanfic universe would be very boring indeed if we were allowed to read only one author's take on an idea/situation/plotline--now THAT would totally suck for all us fanfic readers who just love a good story!! Your story is just great--very well written, characters, plot, everything pulls the reader in--like all goodriesries try to achieve. I think you've definitely achieved every writer's dream by emotionally involving your readers in your vision--normally this isn't my type of story to read but I find myself emotionally torn after each chapter I read, dwelling on it, and anxiously awaiting your next update!! what can I say?? I'm totally addicted to your story!! The idea of not being able to read it to its conclusion upsets me!! I have to know that Inu and Miroku will somehow ha 'h 'happy ending'--I have faith that you can achieve this ^_^ I sincerely hope that all the reviews you've been getting on this will help to change your mind about dropping this fic--I like how one reviewer said that we're going to bug you more to write this fic than to take it down, so to 'just shut us up', please, continue your great fic!!!!!! Okay, now thisthe the longest review I've ever left in my life!!!!! enjoy ^_~
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From ANON - amyfushigiyugi on March 17, 2004
::crying my eyes out::
i loved the story and this fucking sucks
if u just want to chat email me at amyfushigiyugi@aol.com
or IM me on aol aim amyfushigiyugi
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