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From ANON - Leiliiani on March 17, 2004
After reading this FABULOUS story, and skimming the the dozens and dozens of rave reviews, I figured I would add in my two cents-worth at last.

*ahem*

PLEAASE please PLLLLEEEEEEEEZE don't drop this story!! * sobs, crawls on ground, begging* Pretty please?? with lots of yummy candy on top???!!!?!?!
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From ANON - Someone Out There on March 17, 2004
Oh....And see! When I started writing MY review on your decision, there was only one other posted that was crying NOOOO! By the time I got mine up there were already several begging! So does that help? PLEASE! I was embarrassed to ever write a review the first time, but I'm hooked on your story too. I WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER AND THE NEXT, AND THE NEXT --- Got the idea yet? We're going to bug you more to write than to take it down! Do you really want me to be writing that much??!
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From ANON - Dragon_Lady on March 17, 2004
I normally don't bother to review, but I'm making an exception here. I have been reading this story from the beginning, and have been hooked, as many others are. I can understand how a person could be upset when others steal their story and just insert different names and different sequences for the events. I've had that happen to me years ago on one of my old websites. (Only difference was the person copyed/pasted my story, changed the names, and didn't bother to change anything else. The person then sent it to me to post on my web site as his/her own "original" story, since I was accepting reader submissions. Needless to say, I wasn't happy, though admittingly amazed at the stupidity of that move)

Anyway, but as you've said, you did not copy and paste the story, merely used it for inspiration. (and with no other source of information on the subject, there were bound to be similarities) At least you were courteous enough to credit the original source of your inspiration.

I am responding because I would hate to see such a great story go unfinished. I hope you will reconsider your decision.
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From ANON - Someone Out There on March 17, 2004
Like, NO! It's like we all take insperation(?) for stories, especially those of INUYASHA. Who hasn't quoted a line, or action and such right out of the original story line? I've read some that have taken whole sections from the story itself adding bits into it here and there, which I don't really care for because once you see the show, I don't always want to read ti. BUT... I tried looking up the story that you say you were inspired by and couldn't find it, so I can't say what's what really. You did give credit to the other story. I've seen stories where people took the entire story and just put their name on it!

I went back through the reviews and I only found the one flame. Of course I didn't go through every one thoroughly, but as long as they either said great, more, please I skipped them. In other words...YOU CAN"T DO THIS TO US!!! Since you say that this story plots is all yours, then keep on writing. You've done enough chapters that I believe (If you used some things before) that you have a bit of knowledge of your own to visualize 'what happens' and be able to write about it. Go back through. Look at your wonderful reviews. Remove Chapter 10. Write this 'damn' story, and repost Chapter 10 with a real chapter.

Oh, I am not a Kikyo lover. I'm into Inu/Kag, Mir/San, Sess/Rin as matching pairs. I hope that you don't use her to be InuYasha's sex toy. It gives me shivers to think that, but then Kagome is too sweet to be purchasing him. Course I cobe wbe wrong. Maybe Kagome (and I think you've made her 'uptown') needs to do a report on male prositution and has to 'rent' him.

I know, I know...reaching, huh? Well, he's already given his virginity to the other witch.

Also, poor Rin. t det devil's gonna have something done with her. Hope Sess comes to help. (I love him -- oh I said that out loud)

Well...see got me started again and I wrote a ton! Please don't drop this. Do your thing.

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From ANON - Ickabod119 on March 17, 2004
First Off Fallen angel you should contiune this story. Alot of Fanfiction writers seem to think that their idea's are somehow copyrightable. Idea's in Fanfiction are not copyrightable plain and simple if you want to verify this go to Resources and Read FAQ's. For you to be considered ripping off a fic is if you burrowed text from the story not the idea. SO CONTIUNE IT PLEASE!!!
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From ANON - SkatCat on March 17, 2004
No! Please! please! please! please! PLEASE!!!!!! Don't give on your fic, I've really been enjoying your story. Your two fics might be a little similar here and there but you even credited Loveswhore for the basis! There are so many Inuyasha stories similar to each other with the same plot and more. The most popular I think are the ones where Kagome is asleep and she goes �into heat� or is having a hot dream about Inuyasha and then he either has sex with her or runs off to...�take care of himself�, Kagome catches him and then they have sex. I�m sure these people have received similar letters as you but don�t let one comment like that stop you from writing such a great story! It�s only one persons view and they�re exaggerating. PLEASE!!! I need to see an ending for this fic!!! You have many fans who support you and want you to continue!! Don�t give up!!!! PLEASE!
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From ANON - watermelon on March 17, 2004
no no no dont drop the story!!! its so good....ive been enjoying the story a lot and i would like to know what happens next....so please, please dont drop the story....
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From ANON - Kari on March 17, 2004
creeps................................ i really liked this story alot and i mean alot. why does some jerk have to come mess it all up for the rest of us who really like this story. that bastard as InuYasha would say :) but i think u should keep writing this story it's really good i mean really really really really good and i wanna keep reading it and enjoying to to find out what happends and see if InuYasha and Kagome meet and InuYasha can be happy. but just blow that person off and keep writing this great story. thanx and please just think about it and keep writing. i mean alot of people like this story and one person one person has to write say you totally copy *kinda sounds like i'm back in the 5th grade*. blow that person off please i beg of u *down on hands and knees* hehe. just think about it please. thanx so much!
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From ANON - Lady Kagome on March 17, 2004
OMG nooooo! Please don't do that! I really like this story, and I say that with nothing but true emotions. This story speaks to me on so many levels. So please, please do not drop this story.

Just because someone gets a bee up their ass and they have to insult writers does not mean you should curb your creative streak. You credited the story you used for your ideo plo please, please please rethink this.

I am sure that you will get many other posts with this same reaction, so please, think it over again...
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From ANON - ladykaa28 on March 17, 2004
I was really enjoying the fic. I'm sorry that people can be cruel. I would to read the end of it.
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From ANON - Fallen_Angel on March 17, 2004
The only souce of information I had for this story concerning male prostitution was The only way I know by love's whore. I have no idea what male prostition is like and yes, I did say that I got the idea for the story from her. The storyline is mine and mine only. I may have use a couple of words from her story but I don't know any other way of writing a particular scene concerning what male's do in this situation. I did acknowledge that that is where i got the idea from but I did not "cut and paste" any of her story. The plot is all mine. But if I begin to get hassled by readers, I am dropping it so you wI doI don't like
getting flames. So I will drop the story. Happy?

Fallen Angle
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From ANON - Fallen on March 17, 2004
Ok, I can understand that your influence came from loveswhore's "The Only Way I Know." But you basically cut and paste her story onto your's. The first chapter is a total rip; all you did was change the character names and the sequence of events. At least you gave credit. However a little originality would have been appreciated.
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From ANON - nina on March 17, 2004
Awesome chapter. Thank you so much for the Koga/Inuyasha lemon. It was great, perfect. I can see him trying to help Inuyasha. I wonder what Naraku has in store for the guys next and Rin. Once again, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Hentai Master on March 17, 2004
when will kag come bacto tto the picture and please dont let anything bad happen to Rin, Miroku, and Inuyasha only naraku and jake
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From ANON - Marieka on March 16, 2004
*Shivers*wwoohh creepy Naraku
Well now that I'm here I'm with ya to the bitter end or hopefully better end.
Thanks for sharing, can't wait for S'more
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