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Reviews for Dirty Life

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - Carrie on March 01, 2004
    i really liked your story. please write more! i feel so bad for inu yasha and miroku! will miroku have any remebeerance or will he be under the sedative the whole time? when are kagome and sango going to fall for inu yasha and miroku? i like how naraku is reffered to as "the pimp" tee hee!
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  • From ANON - Kari on March 01, 2004
    so glad u updated :), i need more though getting good, but sad :( but i can't wai hea hear more your doing a really great job. update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Babsie on March 01, 2004
    The idiot Babsie made a idiot comment...
    I just forgot that Inuyasha is human in this story...sorry.
    Forget about him being mad and transform...or maybe not...A human person could "in some way" transform too.
    Well...here Iīm babbling again.
    Just write to ask ...sorrryyyyyy

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  • From ANON - Babsie on March 01, 2004
    OHMYGOD!
    Will Inuyasha snap? Being abused is one thing..other is when you are at the "part" of the agressor...Inu is abusing his best friend...WOW...That would make him transform in a Yokai out of control...mayb not.
    Answer me something....who are the other side of the mirror? :-)
    Naraku? Kouga? Sesshoumarru? The girls? Kagomeīs mother? Kaede?
    Just curious.
    And about Naraku....I donīt know...what about turn him back in Onigume...With just one eye and a lot of bandages
    Please, update soon
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  • From ANON - tigers_eye on March 01, 2004
    Loved the story so far. Can I hire IY by chance? Though I don't guarantee he'd ever leave my house. :) Anyway, keep goinI'dI'd love to see the girls get these two out of this.
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  • From ANON - KagoKitty on February 29, 2004
    all i can manage to say is: OH...MY...GOD...
    =^@.@^=
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  • From ANON - shaina on February 29, 2004
    Ummm.... I'm really hoping that you don't take this personally. But, I hope to God that this incredible story does tur turn into a slash one centered around Miroko and inuyasha. I was really hoping that it was a realistic story with inuyasha slowly finding happiness with kagome. And Miroku with Sango. But, the story is incredible so far, I'm just a little worried now.
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on February 29, 2004
    I just had to put in a review for this. I felt ashamed and perverted at first to even write a review, but (oh God!) I (in a really small voice) do like your story. I think that it's written pretty well, and the flow of it is good from what I've read so far. And like someone else wrote, there are a lot of guys out there 'into' this type of situation, and probably a lot of them, for whatever reason got them into it, get 'stuck' with no way out and nowhere to turn. People think you can just walk away of bad situationt itt it's not like that and it isn't true... try escaping from domestic abuse.
    I even though it's hard to see this happening to Inu and Miroku, I hope that you don't end it into a fairy tale (meaning a happy ending with M/F) too soon. But I hate to see them continuing to be in such a situation for very long. I could be wrong (hoping I'm not) but since you've introduced Kag and Sango I feel that you will be getting them (proper partners K/I, S/M) together. (Please - shouting from background).
    I love Sesshoumaru, and I HOPE you don't make him into a girlie guy. Some people like to portray him as such just because he's so pretty!
    One of your other reviewers wrote about probably needing therapy after going through that kind of stuff -- which could be true, but... I just hope they work things out well enough on their own... and after such that - (Please dont!) - that Inu and Miroku start thinking about each other - not after they get out and have their girlfriends...blah, blah, blah... And that is IF you decided to work things out that way. Of course you could have something totally different in mind for your story.
    Are you thinking of bring Sesshoumaru in for maybe a girl and gets together with Rin itheither paying high price for a virgin, or just that he winds up with her being one?
    Well, anyway... Lot of guessing/suggestions on my part which I don't know how you feel about, but anyway.... I will be keeping tabs on your story -- I wish chapter 4 was a bit longer -- but do tak take offense to being told that! It just... left me hanging (cliffy i mean!) and doing one of InuYasha's struggled gawking sounds. I am real happy that you got the last couple of chapters up so fast... Please keep up the good work, and this is the longest review I've ever done... see once i got over my shyness...!

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  • From ANON - Ickabod119 on February 29, 2004
    Dark Very Dark. Your writing paints a very sad look into part of society that goes unnotice. Even though you made them out to be at the cusp of adulthood they are still considered boys and it is a shame that some of this really goes on in the world. Well I will try to keep up with this one can't wait for more!!!
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  • From Numisma on February 28, 2004
    I definitely like where this is going. you're a natural at writing, and i anxiously await the coming chapters.
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  • From ANON - mistressoffire on February 28, 2004
    Kind of dark and angsty I like it plz contiue on.
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  • From ANON - Babsie on February 27, 2004
    Hello ....itīs me again :-)
    I was thinking and have to ask...didnīt male prostitutes "do" desperate women as well? How Miroku would handle some old hag coming after him? Just a tought...:-)
    Please, update soon
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  • From ANON - Babsie on February 27, 2004
    Well...Maybe e ise is a light in the end of the tunel...But will Inuyasha have the gut to ask for help to Kagome...or even if she try to help...will et het her?
    Yes, you got a point when you said that some great stories start shoking .
    So I guess Iīll have to wait to see what will happen.
    Update soon :-)
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  • From ANON - Mija on February 27, 2004
    omg I just found this and I have to say that although Im crying here and hurting for my poor Inu and Miroku and shippo this is one fantastic fic, your writing is well done and the detail is wonderfull please please up soo soon and let my boys find some sort of happiness..grrrrrrrrr wants to *itch slap Naraku..make him stand in the corner getting things ummm put where the sun dont shine..hehe anyhow great work I love it update soon if you will please??? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - REVIEWER #34321 on February 27, 2004
    Totally awesome story man! Please continue!!!!

    Keep on Writin'
    Reviewer #34321

    PS Can Miroku get Sango???? (in the end?)
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