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Reviews for Dirty Life

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - TJ on December 18, 2004
    WHEW poor guys. Oh and BTW umm isn't it called a threesome not a three-way? Oh well....just update quickly.
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  • From ANON - Kiiro on December 14, 2004
    This story kicks ass. But... How could you do that to Miroku?! He wasn't even doing anything and those bastards came up and raped him. He could've died! And him having to screw his sister and best friend for two hours infront of Sesshy and 'The evil bastard who should die but wont for some stupid reason' Thats just wrong... Its Incest!. And Sesshomaru... What in the hell was he thinking going for 7 years without checking on his brother?! If he hadn't abandoned him in the first place he never would've started whorin' so its his fault! *re-reads writing* Oops.. I guess I got a little over emotional : ). Its sad that this is really happening in real life to kids... Anyway I love you're story plz update soon! And can you plz kill Naraku? and if you're not too busy, Kikyou too because she's an evil slut bitch. : )
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  • From ANON - Oyuki on December 14, 2004
    this is so awesome. you've made my cry though. does their life have to be so horribly horrible? getting beaten and raped and homeless and starving? why? why? awesome story though. please, please have more soon.
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  • From ANON - Yasmin on December 14, 2004
    OMG i had read up to chaper 5 a long time ago !! I had forgotten about this story since adultfanfiction doesnt have email updates i forget about the stories . So if you can send me an email update whenever u update i would REALLLLLLLLLYYYY appriciate it!! I love i ! its so diferent . the whol plot is crazy. damn so close to being free and he gets hurt . oh man oh man . cant wait to the next chappy!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on December 13, 2004
    Are you thinking of a way so that Sess can get Rin, Miroku and Inuyasha out of
    Naraku's grip before they do the deed. I hope so; update soon
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on December 13, 2004
    Whew....that's bad....And I'm siding with InuYasha on this one - Naraku won't care.
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  • From ANON - tigeryasha on December 13, 2004
    Enjoyed the new chapter. Definitely leaves an opening to get the three kids out of that god-awful condition. Meant to leave a review of the prior chapter, but ran out of time. Right idea; wrong target. But then, I think I mentioned in a previous review that I'm biased w/ IY being the one in trouble. ;)
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  • From ANON - Kiki Ortega on December 13, 2004
    Great job, as always.
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  • From ANON - inuronin on December 11, 2004
    the was freaking amazing!
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on December 09, 2004
    Yeah good chapter....so kewl..wats gonna happen next to the three Rin, Miroku, Inuyahsa...wat bout Inuyasha and Kagome..dum dum dum ....lol...keep updating..such a good fic
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  • From ANON - CheetahBaby on December 07, 2004
    LOVE IT!! omg~ i love your story do much! well i cant wait for more!.. later..
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  • From ANON - Seabreeze on December 06, 2004
    We're all holding our breaths for the next chapter... hurry up before we all pass out!
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  • From ANON - Alaskantiger on December 06, 2004
    Can't wait to read more! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)
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  • From ANON - kinky lurker on December 06, 2004
    (runs and glomps) this is such an awesome story and i'm so glad that they are on the right path! i can't believe how awesome this story is and i am totally looking forward to more from you! i hope you update this story soon.. i don't think i can wait for very long...

    the tension, angst, promising lemons...

    ja ne!
    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From Numisma on December 06, 2004
    chapter 14 is intact now.


    but does chapter 23 end with this as the final paragraph? : --- Inuyasha gave up and just stood there while his brother embraced him from behind. Inside, he relented and let it all go, all the anger and old pain. There was no point in keeping it now anyway. That stinging drop fell from his eye, down his cheek, then vanished. "You don't have to beg." ---


    just trying to help you out.

    it oculd be that the chapter just needs to be edited in the Edit Chapter Option. the thing w/ chapter 4 earlier, w/ it being cut off, happened to me w/ chapter 11 of MHH. it was due to a broken html tag.



    anyway, great story, and i'm glad you are continuing to write it even though some of the material (the incest stuff, primarily) is highly controversial. the way you handle this material is quite honorable.
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