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Reviews for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

By : FaTaLfURy
  • From ANON - Kohana on April 05, 2004
    ::finished reading chappie:: ::gaaaaasp:: wow! That was an awesome plot turn ^^;; It's gonna take alot to get rid of her now isnt it? ^.~ I'm just hoping somehow, in some way Inu-kun gets out of his promises...but i'm always like that..the fluff queen, who wants everything to work out in the end. I can always just keep reading and hope though ne? ^.~

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    mi-chan ( kohana )
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  • From ANON - Kohana on April 05, 2004
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! lol. I love your writing style, and you get the characters so right ( well in my mind anyway ^^;; ) I have only read up to the 23 chappie, so im gonna read the 24th now! Love it! Please keep a goin! Ill kepp reviewin I promise! ^.~

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    mi-chan ( kohana)
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  • From ANON - deamjem on April 05, 2004
    I am realy picky on what i read and got to tell you. I love this. keep on going. have me on the edge of my sene gne going online almost 9 time a day to see if you updated yet.
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  • From on April 05, 2004
    *glares with rage* noooooo how could you leave it off there. UPDATE SOON

    love ya
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  • From ANON - MegaBorX on April 05, 2004
    i dont now what to say....Im glad inuyasha is realising his true feelings and all, but im saddened to her hes still on with his vows,
    that love no longer exists, thereby negating ne vows they made, him laving kagoithaitha pup s highly dishonurable...

    And the Kikyou/Naraku thing is just plain creepy, but as long as they both die n the end Kag and Inu end up together then alls wel with the world...

    All and All a distressful but well written chappie.... plz let it end good til next time
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  • From ANON - ramona grimalkit on April 05, 2004
    OMG!!!!!! I'm sorry for not reviewing before, butve bve been keeping up with this fic, and I can't hold it in any longer. THIS ROCKS SO HARD IS UN-FREAKING-BELIEVABLE!!! I think I've read only two others that are anywhere near as good, and they no longer update, so that puts you over the top. Congrats on 5000+ readers, and hopefully a future influx of reviews(you deserve more), and know that I and many others are waiting for your next chapter with baited breath. Now, on to technicalities: The small mistakes are nothing for you to really worry about; I'm more concerned with the small habit of switching tenses I've noticed. Im not criticizing or anything, but try to look a bit closer, and keep them talking and thinking in the same time period. For example, a couple of times IY was thinking of the past, but saying things as if they were happening right then. It's a little confusing. I hope you don't get offended or anything, but that's what reviews are for, right? To offer constructive criticism(I hate that word)and help other writers make their stories better. I'm also a fic writer, but I write for my college's anime club manga. IY is by far my fave, and you do it justice. Keep writing, PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - ladykaa28 on April 04, 2004
    Oh my goodness that was a good chapter. I just hope you can get another one out as soon as you can. This one was mind blowing. For Sess and Inu to come to terms and for Sess to approve of Inu's choice for a mate is one thing, to say that he will make sure that Inu makes the right choice to stay with Kag that just blows you away.
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  • From ANON - ktakn_yeni on April 04, 2004
    thats an awesome fic!!!!!! it took me two days to read it... but GOD!! you left it at the best part. you have to update !!!!!
    you have greats lemons... great history... very original.. is so sad see what kagome does for inuyasha... but i love the lemons parts.. i was looking for a lemon fic... about the after mating part... and i got it!! all thanks to you!!!!!!!! ^.^ you've made my day! update soon!!!!!!!! and i read about you in a hospital.. are you okay? i hope so.. see ya!! update!
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  • From SilverFox on April 04, 2004
    I hope that the conclusion I am drawing is that he tells her the heck off! Oy! What I wouldn't give to bitch-slap Kikyo into the afterlife myself! Anyhoo, I loved this chapter as well, and Sesshouamru and Inuyasha have a brotherly moment, that was sweet, so sweet in fact it gave me a cavity, no...wait! It was already there?! *^_^* Anyhoo, I just hope that Inuyasha has the strenght to tell Kikyo his plans, and no too to hell with her right then...Poor Kagome...
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  • From ANON - KagoKitty on April 04, 2004
    Dammit, HOW COULD YOU JUST STOP THERE??
    *sniff* poor kagome...
    you...
    This is all YOUR fault!!
    *giggle* okay, okay...a lil drastic, I know...but good acting, neh? lol.
    I'm glad you enjoyed the fetch pictures...they're so adorable!! And I do agree, their hilari

    Oh...*clucks tongue*...looking for a hook up with one of my bubbies, huh?? *giggle* Sure you'd like one...BUY ONE GET ANOTHER AT 1/4 THE USUAL PRICE!! lol...
    hoping for that scene btw inu and kikyou really soon...be scoufor for it!!
    much love to ya!!
    =^-.~^=

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  • From ANON - catesy on April 03, 2004
    Oh Kikyo, this is going to be interesting. I hope you write a song fic because I really like those.
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  • From ANON - Nina on April 03, 2004
    I just know that Sess has this Kikyo thing figured out for Inuyasha. And now I think I know where you're taking this too. But I'm not telling, because whenever I think I have a fic figured out, I always end up wrong. Oh well. Sess to the rescue. I'll be waiting for the next update. I hope you're ok now, hospitals suck.
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  • From ANON - MegBorX on April 03, 2004
    just had to reread the chap again.... and i noticed ur last reminder..... plz oh plz that scene ur referring to better be, Kikyo going to hell, dont u dare break inuyasha's vow of monogomy with kagome.... or once again ill call forth my demons....

    on a lighter note keep updating and hope u feel better
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  • From ANON - ReiHino85 on April 03, 2004
    Sorry....t lat last review was mine... I forgot to put my name.. my bad!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2004
    Hmm... it's always nice to know that Sesshomaru can be nice. What will happen with Kikyo... now I'm curious. See what you did?? Well.. it was a great chappy like always, and I'm sorry about your illness... we understand! *sends flowers* Do feel better hun.... Oh yeah... and now you have 5700+ readers! Yay! Alrighty... you get some rest, and write a nice ch by by the time I come back, okay? Ja ne!
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