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Reviews for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

By : FaTaLfURy
  • From ANON - Nina on March 27, 2004
    I loved the lemon in the rain. Very sexy and hot, just the way I like it. And what fun at the amusement park and on the train. On another note, if I don't review immediately after a new chapter is uploaded, please don't think I abandoned you because I haven't. Sometimes I print up your chapters along with other authors updates so I can read them on the couch more comfortably. My eyes can only take the computer screen for so long, you know. Then I get distracted and forget to review. So please be patient with me. Chow for now. YOU WILL ALWAYS ROCK MY WORLD.
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  • From ANON - KagoKitty on March 26, 2004
    Aren't you excited yet?? You're nearing 5000 reviews!! Wow...
    I just love thinking of Inuyasha wanting to chase a damn bullet train just like a dog would...that IS so very funny to me!!
    With that in mind, you reminded me...
    Have you heard about the whole 'fetch' thing in the newer episodes?? Lol...my friend sent me pictures...thought you may want to see them, just let me know, 'cause they are *giggles* TOO hilarious!!
    Anywho...back to the story...really good chap, (especially putting in the lil' bit of Kikyou rememberance angst...then mending it a 'lil with the, and I quote: Inu 'flying' on a 'worm',) lol...I loved it...its so...so, so something he would do!!
    *sigh* I better go...ya betta' update soon, too!! Can't wait 'til you reach that 5 thou!!
    love ya,
    =^-.~^=
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  • From ANON - Cylana on March 26, 2004
    I really liked the last chapter :D

    I've been watching for it for a while XD (well, it felt like a while XD)

    Inu's reaction to that stuff was really cute, and seemed exactly the way he would. He's so cute when he gets that look on his face ^-^

    I'll be keeping tabs on this XD
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  • From ANON - MegaBorX on March 26, 2004
    Oh my god i thought ud never update.... But none the less excelleant.
    Bravo you handled their little tift very well, (tlaking to otrevireviewers) dont wry shell end u writting a another spectacular lemon soon enough

    I absolutly loved this chap, and gomen that im not writing as much of a review as last time but im keeping ths terse b/c i have Inuyasha Fanart to go draw!!!

    And thank youn im currenlt yediting my fic to transfer over here, grrr so many damn regulations....


    Until next chappie!!! Keep it up , .
    L
    (_)
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  • From ANON - maria on March 26, 2004
    I like the part with Inu on the roller coasters. When is Inu going to make the choice to leave Kikyo & stay with Kagome?
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  • From SilverFox on March 23, 2004
    I love it so far! I just found it the other night, so I've been doing a little catching up, but its great. I was hoping that Sesshoumaru * starts to drool profusely * would kill Kikyo, but no such luck there I see...Oh, well, maybe Kikyo will do something really stupid and get herself killed without dragging Inuyasha off to hell with her. He was an idiot to make that promise to Kikyo in the first place. * sighs * Well, maybe he'll come to his senses soon enough. Later and until next time!
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  • From ANON - MegaBorX on March 23, 2004
    Hai Another Excellent Lemon.....Very Touching and Sensual (sp)

    And congrats on hitting the 4k mark......
    Keep up the lemony goodness, and although the other reviewers may get jealousy i would suggest laying off the lemons for 1 chapter, and focus more on the intermingling relationsihps of the other characters....

    I am very glad to hear that you plan on following through with some of my suggestions, but.....*hand holding back demon horde's wavers slightly*
    I find your suggestihat hat you have some alternate ending other than Kagome and Inuyasha en up up together very disheartening...

    YEs beauty is in the eye of the beholder but i honestly think the most beautiful thing is for Inuyasha to realise the same happiness and joy that he deserves, PLz oh mighty author dont make me beg, Dont allow that bitch Kikyo to get her final whim in... Inu and Kag have ben through enough dont you think, give them thndernderella ending they deserve... not a Romeo and Juliet.

    After all you said it your self, if Inuyasha were to ever say those words, he could never leave Kagome... And what kind of father and husband would he be if he left his pups and his mate to live without him.... Would they go through the same torture that he himself went through without his father.... Hanyou and Miko attributes aside there are still demons in Japan that would love to attack his relatives outta revenge....
    '
    Could you possibly work it into your wonderful masterpiece that Kikyo lays herself to rest alone,
    I would not be alone in saying that we would all be dissappointed to see one of the most touching couples in anime not live happily ever after......

    Arigato

    oh and
    "Rain is falling down on them, pelting them with its wetness." nice Metaphor there LOL!!..

    Keep up the fantastic work... and maybe you could be so kindas to review my own story once i transfer it over from inuyasha.net (I cant write lemons for the hell of me and Im in a biot of a writers block)

    Once Again Arigato
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  • From ANON - ReiHino on March 23, 2004
    Wow... sex in the rain... sounds like fun... *many dirty thoughts running through head* But damn, that was one good chapter. You are an amazing lemon writer... I hope you know that. Anyways, you have I believe nearly 4500 readers and 96 reviews... congrats! *hands you some cookies* Now.. eat some cookies and write some more... I can't wait to see what else you got going in that head of yours... hehe.
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  • From ANON - Stefanie on March 22, 2004
    Oh wow! Ive spent most of my day reading this story (dont you hate it when you are trying to read and people keep telling/asking you to do stuff) Anyways, im really enjoying this story. Please update soon. Oh...and of course i dont want Inuyasha to go to hell with Kikyo. So if at all possible...just have Sessy kill her off Ok...enough of my chatter....keep up the great work and ill be here to read your stories >^_^
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  • From ANON - Gemini on March 22, 2004
    OHHHHHHHHHHHHH GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was incredible! If you could see me I'm drooling. That was so good. I could never write like that...ever. So I admire your talent -_^ Please send more!!!
    P.S. Have you ever seen "The Big O" if not you have to, if so, do you think you could write a lemon fic for that one, there are only two! Can you belive that, just two. And it's a good anime. Really good!! Plus I could never honor it the way you could, so if you get some spare time, please write one, or two, or three, or TEN!! (In the chinese zodiac, I'm a rabbit!!^_^!!)
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  • From ANON - Ishtar on March 22, 2004
    great story!!!!! i cant wait for the next chappy!!
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  • From ANON - ladyjulianna on March 22, 2004
    once again you captured my attention. keep up the good work and ing ing kikiyo! i cant wait I shall be reading laters *HUG*
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  • From ANON - KagoKitty on March 22, 2004
    D for DAMNnnnn...
    lol...sorry, computer's messed the fuck up.
    Note to Self: Find boy...date boy...fall in love with boy...make love with boy in the rain.
    *shivers* gave me the sweats thinkin bout a soaked Inuyasha.
    Yes sir....a soaking wet Inuyasha can brighten any Kitty's gloomy day!! *whew*
    *giggle*
    love ya!!
    =^-.~^=
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  • From ANON - KagoKitty on March 22, 2004
    I'm handing you your expected dosage of vitamin D. D for O_o
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  • From ANON - ladyjulianna on March 22, 2004
    hi im not usually moved to review not as much as i used to be any way but damn you got it goin on with your lemons!!! your a damn good writter. please make the other love tria go go away huh? kikiyo needs to die a long horrid death....agian lol evil bitch from hell yuck. he needs to tell her the three words PLEASE???? when will you get to that hmm? any how keep it up i'll be reading
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