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Reviews for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

By : FaTaLfURy
  • From ANON - Mija on March 10, 2004
    *looks around in confussion* where the hell was I when all these terrific chaps came up??? I recall reading the first one and then nothing..I mean where the heck was I?? cause I know I love this fic and omg those lemons were totally hot...again im still confussed on why I didnt see the updates before or I would of read and reviewed..sigh..ooh well I sowwy but I hear now and I gotta tell you that you are a totally excellent wriand and as for humor or whatever in your fic?? I say keep doing what your doing now..I like the humor and the romance and lemons and the heart wrentching pain when Inu cried..still sniffling at that..my heart broke I tell ya just picturing him howling in pain and killing the poor tree as he fell to his knees and cried...awwwwwwwww sniffles my poor poor Inu baby...*sobs* ok ok Im calm anyhow as I said whatever your doing keep on doing it..your doing sooooo good and soo great as it is on this fic I dont see any reason for you to change anything..go with what your muse and imagination tell ya to do cause its working wonderfully for you as it is...again love this fic I can babble on all night about this but then I would never stop..God I love thi soo soooooo sweet and soo good sniffles..ty ty ty and update soon k?? pretty please?? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - MystifiedStarlight on March 09, 2004
    This is a wonderful story! In all honesty I have never read a lemon fic that I liked this much! I love how Inuyasha is sweet, obnoxious, and caring like you make him to be. Please, don't change a thing! Just write more!
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  • From ANON - KagoKitty on March 09, 2004
    the smart side of him...*snort*...yeah right, like Inuyasha HAS a smart side!!
    lol...i enjoyed the chapter and ESPECIALLY the ultra tangy lemony goodness...
    keep it up!!
    =^-.~^=
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  • From ANON - nina on March 09, 2004
    I strongly believe that you are one of the best romantic, sensual lemon writers that I have had the pleasure to read. Your description, detail and dialogue between Inu and Kag are perfect. You really show them 'making love' rather than just hard core fucking (sorry, bad potty mouth) not that that's a bad thing, but you do the slow burn very, very, hot and sensual. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Ickabod119 on March 09, 2004
    I didn't think Inuyasha had a smart side to him. I can't wait to see what else you plan to bring to your story. I can't wait until you post moreof this story soon and Excellent Lemons!!!
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  • From catesy on March 09, 2004
    Looks like Kagome still didn’t get her bath. Lol good chapter.
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  • From ANON - ReiHino on March 09, 2004
    Aww... that was so sweet! Inuyasha definately deserved to get sat... hehe. Oh, and another little reminder... you hit 1000 today! *pats on the back* Good for you! You deserve it! Anyways... keep up the good work, and I'll be here to review it till the end! :)
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  • From ANON - Sabichan on March 09, 2004
    WOOOOOOWWWWEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
    Sabichan loves good lemons!
    And this was one of 'em! Very sweet, yet sexy at the same time! You did a great job, and I thought it was so cute how shy she was the morning after! KAWAIIIII!!!
    Great detail, VERY vivid, and did I mention hot? No?
    Well it was HOT!
    WWOOOOOWWEEEEEE!!
    Anywho!
    wow. it's fics like this that made me want to start posting in the first place. It's awesome, I love it, and I'm so excited to read some more!
    Really curious what happens with the dream, what about Kikyo? Boy, she's not gonna like this is she?
    TE HE!
    by the way, are Kagome's eyes really blue? Seriously, I have up to episode 136, and they've always looked brown to me...*shurgs* I think she'd look super cute withe eye eyes though! Bluish gray, even better, very mysterious. Wish my eyes were blue (mine are brown by way)way)
    Anyways, less about my eyes, more about your great fic!
    I'm crossing my fingers that we'll get another lemon, but no pressure! This one was more than satisfying. May I suggest, for futher humor, using more Miroku. I've learned that he's one of the anime/mans mas main sources of comedy, and well....makes sense huh? I know it's kinda hard to try writing the supporting characters-there's just not that same bond as Inu and Kagome have. Theirs is so obvious and strong, while Miro and Sango are only getting started.
    I have no idea what I'm writing about now, it's four am, and I have to work in....four hours...what a co-inky-dink, ne?
    But I had to read and drop a review for this first, I wouldn't be able to sleep otherwise. Can't believe it took me so long to see it!
    Once again, Awesome Job, Awesome Lemon!
    Thanks for writing sweetheart!
    Ja ne!
    ~Sabichan~


    (i think i just broke Carrie's record for longest rambling review.)
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  • From ANON - Sabichan on March 09, 2004
    First off, an apology for taking so damn long to reveiw. I haven't been able to read the current fics for a few days, so I just saw this one tonight! GOMEN!
    To be honest, I'm only on the third chapter, and already, I just have to say "WOW"
    You've done it again!
    I'm blown away. It's so intense, and I was crying at the end of the second chapter. HOW SAD!!
    But also how believable! That's always been a big thing for me. I can't fully enjoy a fic it the characters don't react like a normal person would...or hanyou for that matter.
    Okay thade ade a lot more sense in my head...
    Anywho, the point is, I'm excited to see what the next few chapters havestorstore! What is Kagome dreaming about? GRRR!! Must read! Must know!!!
    I'll review again, but just had to say first, that you've done a great job!
    Ja ne!
    ~Sabichan~
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  • From ANON - Ickabod119 on March 09, 2004
    I think the way you write you could balance both Drama & Humor But now I think you have to make Inuyasha suffer some more like have Kouga show up and there is nothing like a jealousy puppy with insecurities issues with himself. I can't wait until you post more of this soon!!!
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  • From ANON - KagoKitty on March 08, 2004
    i really love this story!! its so cute!! I think you should keep the plot serious like the first chapters, but put in a lil' dash of fun every now and then. ya know...like the actual inuyasha story (duh)!!
    once again, i LOVED your story and plot, and i hope after such a great lemon and an adorable morning after, you can keep this fic rollin'!!
    toodles,
    =^-.~^=
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  • From ANON - ReiHino on March 08, 2004
    Aww.... that was nice. I see that Kagome still needs time to adjust a little... but I know she loves the hanyou... :) Glad you like my reviews... I like putting them. By the way... you were over 700 hits when I read the chapter... good for you! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter... Sayonara!
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  • From catesy on March 08, 2004
    You deserve more reviews than what you get. I think this story is great and hope you continue.

    p.s I think you deserve reviews so much that I joined just to leave you one. and I don’t even have any lemons to post.

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  • From ANON - dokushoka on March 08, 2004
    wow! your story is the first "lemon" inu yasha fanfic i've ever read and i really like it! ^_^ (uhm...can you tell me what a "lemon" is?) i liked how you started out your story. it was great build up to the love scenes ^_^v i hope to read more of your stories. great job! ^_^
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  • From ANON - LilithQueen on March 08, 2004
    Your story is sooo lemony sweet!I love it!!Please keep them coming!!SLURPPP!!!^_^
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