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Reviews for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

By : FaTaLfURy

From ANON - KagoKitty on May 09, 2004
What the hell are you doing?? Trying to kill Kagome off??? Damn, I've finally come back to read up the last 3 chapters I've missed of your story and all I see is angsty little segments where you've got Kagome either scratched up by Inuyasha or falling to her death!! *sniff* I wanted to cry...it was so sad! So...you miss me?? *giggle* I bet your jaw's to the keyboard 'cause you thought I'd deserted you? S? Sorry 'bout that...
You've been practicing that lil' dance I showed you lately, huh?? *giggle* Not too shabby, girl...not too shabby. See...*sigh*...a close family friend of mine has been suffering, so I had to quit the tour to come home to be with her and her family. She passed last weekend...so I kinda haven't been around lately...au'vu've seen. Glad to see you did miss me, though! lol...thought I was forgotten. Anywho, reading your last chapters was worth the wait...and damn, girl...I'm so envious of your fight-scene writing skills, too!! Yep, so I'm home...(and unemployed) for now. But it'll all work out cause my boyfriend's been busting his ass really hard to set me up at an audition for where he dances...more of a variety there...so I'm hoping I'll be able to try out and be with him!! *sigh* Can't wait for the next update!!
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From DreamAngel on May 09, 2004
OMG... I love it. I'm not too happy about Naraku getting upperhand but the fact that it isn't over yet makes me happy. I just hope it doesn't take that long for you to update. And whoever cast the writers block... Come on.... I know you want to get the rest of the story, like we all do... Please lift it... *innocent smile*
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From ANON - ktakn_yeni on May 09, 2004
goood!!!!!!!! again as always lol *congrats* you should update faster this time.. as an award for all of us .lol

see ya!
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From ANON - Inuzands on May 09, 2004
Yeehaw! A new chapter! Sorry for the lack of reviews lately, but I had finals. The last two chapters have been just lovely and I'm very happy that no one has died, even though I'm waiting for Naraku to meet a grisly demise. Hee hee hee...... Anyways, I can't say any more than you already know, so keep writing these awesome chapters and I'll be here to read 'em! :)
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From ANON - MegaBorX on May 09, 2004
YEah finally an update... and it is fantastic... a little short but still worth reading plz plz oh
plz finish the story up before you go away on vaca....
have fun but dont forget about us.

It was a very good chap but plz no more cliff's its driving me mad.

Write again soon, Fury-chan
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From ANON - ??? on May 08, 2004
Amazing story, love it, cryed a little (thats a big deal for me, cause i'm a guy). Keep writing and o god please update soon im dying of anxiety. :)
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From ANON - ramona grimalkit on May 06, 2004
Sorry about the gap...I've had a few problems at school--it's the last week for me! That frees up a lot more time to beta, I guess, but I don't know how. Do you? I still think this ranks as one of the best fics I've ever read, but I'm starting to come unglued waiting for the next and/or final chappie. PLEASE don't leave me hanging
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From LadyRei on May 06, 2004
Oh my gosh... I leave to study for my exams... and Kagome nearly dies? How sad.... *steals the box of tissues for myself* Well... thank you for wishing me luck... I got 3 A's! Yay me... I'm happy now! But I can't wait till you update... those cliffy's are evil. Whatever you de to to do, I wish you luck. Oh yeah, and here's some cookies! *hands her a giant plate* Enjoy!
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From on May 05, 2004
OH I HAVE !FAILED! ----- I JUOOKEOOKED OVER YOUR REVIEWS AGIAN AND ~AHHHHHHH~ I HAVE FAILED, IM SORRY, I HAVE NOT BEATEN THE RECORD OF LONGEST REVIEW.....
BUT
IM STILL , , YOUR BEST REVIEWER AND READER!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH AND I HOPE THESE 3 REVIEWS IN ONE DAY SHOWS IT!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY AND PEACE ,
plz say im a top reviewer and let me say, all your other reviewers , your guys sure no how to review!
damn i though i was good at reviewing... any way
cya all and good bye,
like i said before,
~for now~
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From on May 05, 2004
I Just had to write another review after looking over others...
i also have to say.. i love your lemons,
they're so good,
i could never write one that good...
i wish i could...
i dont really do this on purpose or any thing,
but see sometimes when i write my stories lemons i slightly use some lil part of a story i really liked...
so i hope u dont mind if u ever see one of my stories that is slightly like your in one lil part....
and see im hoping to go on and on forever to beat one of your other reviewers for the longest review ever so i need to say some more..
hmmm let me think
well i already said i love your story,
i havent said 'i think your the best writer in the world' yet,
so,
"I THINK YOUR THE BEST WRITER IN THE WORLD"
gosh i hope this beats that other persons review...
so plzz review soon
and just let me say,
"MY FAVORITE COUPLE IS INU AND KAG FROM EVERY ANIME I KNOW!!! AND WHAT U DID WITH YOUR STORY, THE WAY U MADE THEIR RELATION SHIP---- ILOVEIT.
I MAY HAVE SAID THAT A BIT TO FAST SO I-LOVE-IT"
im sure this is long enough now so,
your , favorite reviewer and loyal, very very loyal , reader/reviewer,
write cauour our the queen, or if you prefer princess,
update SOON
LOVE YA GOOD BYE
~for now~
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From on May 05, 2004
Damn...when i first started reading this i thought "OH GOODY, theres so many chapters up!!" well now im done and i just have to say... "I LOVE YOUR STORY" damn i never thought i would be writing a review untill the end.... i though u would already have the end up.. i no this is girly of me---but i almost felt like crying in the last chaps ;( ..... so just plzz hurry and review cause i cant wait to read your next chap.... im in suspence and... i dont no what to do..maybe i'll start putting up some of my stories..i no they wont be as good as yours but, still i think some one might find mine interesting, let me just say one more time "I Love Your Story"
cya,
your very very loyal and loving ... reader/ reviewer
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From ANON - guyanas cutie on May 01, 2004
YO THIS STROY MADE ME CRY, BUST OUT IN HAPPINESS AND ETC.
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH
PLS FINSH THIS STORY ITS SOOOOOOOOO GOOD
UR SUCH A GOOD WIRTER
GYAL (GIRL) U HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UP DATE SOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNN

PEACE OUT
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From ANON - MegaBorX on April 29, 2004
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i now have carpal tunnel plz update soon
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From DreamAngel on April 28, 2004
I'm still here... *sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit* I'm still waiting
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From on April 27, 2004
*jumps up and down giddily*

she'a alive she's alive!!!!

update soon
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