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Reviews for Torn Between Two Brothers

By : inuyashasgirl
  • From on March 30, 2004
    cute story
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  • From unokitsune on March 29, 2004
    omg, this story is great. cept, my opinion, inuyasha sounds a bit ooc. he's nice wow. neways, great story, cya laterz
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  • From ANON - CeltGdds on March 29, 2004
    First - (I am not being evil or mad with this) I think there is another story with this title, but it works I'm just pulling from my memory.
    Second- I just didnt see Kagome just giving in to the sedding like that- do it or you'll be disinheritend-automatic complianec, i dont see her as being that weak and greedy, I was hoping for something closer to her saying fine, good bye father, heading out to the wedding guests saying farewell to her family telling INuyasha how sorry she is for the inconvience, being stopped by his dad, telling him off for using her and his son as business commodities-possibly slapping him-running into her dad on the way out -"Kagome, daughter please rethink this?" her response close to "I RETHINK THIS! YOUR THE ONE WHO SOLD HIS OWN DAUGHTER LIKE A SEX SLAVE!" and storming out leave a very bewildered group of guests. THen KAgome getting a job with Sango or Miroku-leaving with them possibly-meanwhile her father gong over what happened and her family's shock and the reactions of the brothers. I didnt think about this long its just it doesnt seem to me that KAgome would be so submissive specially about her virginity-Kikyou undoubtly infact I'd be shocked if she protested-but not Kagome. I hope this does sound as a flame-I read alot of fanfic and getting a bit frustrated at the ones that arent finished and theyre full o fplot (some a bit too much) anyway It is a good story and you should continue as you want to, its not my rightr to tell u how to write. PLease dont take this wrong! GOod luck Ja NE!
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  • From ANON - InuyashasGurl008 on March 28, 2004
    Great begining plz continue!
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  • From ANON - rosie on March 28, 2004
    for ur first sess/kag fic its starting out great! =D i hope u keep updating!!
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  • From ANON - Lina on March 28, 2004
    I like it so keep going.
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  • From unokitsune on March 28, 2004
    you're one of the very few authors that has Kagome's dad alive. It looks good so far, please continue.
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  • From ANON - Ume on March 28, 2004
    This is a really good start. I cannot wait to see how Kagome meets Sesshoumaru. Sigh, i love Sesshoumaru. My favorite parings is Sess/Kag. If that isn't your favorite paring, i understand. I mean, i like almost every paring. The threee that get on my nerves the most is Kag/Miroku, Inu/Sango, and Rin/Sess. I'm as sorsry if you like those parings, but i loath them. Anyway, i just wanted to say how good this fic was. I absolutly loved the prolouge. I really want Kagome to meet Sesshoumaru badly...i think i already said that. Anyway PLZ update this story soon. It is superb. Ja Ne.
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