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Reviews for Rin's Adventure

By : Atropa
  • From ANON - ducusdraconis on November 08, 2004
    i am happ see see trhat you are back to writing. especially with this story. I have missed your writing, it has a way of bringing out a passion most writers lack. I can't wait to read more
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  • From SilverFox on October 18, 2004
    Oh! Very nice! I like it so far...I can't wait til you update this. I have a bunch of your stories read or bookmarked, thats how much I have enjoyed reading your stories...A Rin and Souta fic..Who would have thought that they'd pair up well? Well...obviously you did or you wouldn't have written this. ^_^ Until next time! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kouji on August 25, 2004
    Where the good hentai it's just near it I want hentai action, and again good story & storyline, but I want hentai!!!!!!!!!!
    ~Kouji
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  • From ANON - da rin-chan on August 22, 2004
    aawwwww kawaii ending for the chappy!!! plz continue the great work!!
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  • From ANON - Tom on August 21, 2004
    Don't kill Souta, give him an opening (chuckles)
    Semper Fidelis
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  • From ANON - Zelix on August 19, 2004
    Finally, a new chapter to this one... i love this, hope to read more soon!
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  • From ANON - Tom on August 18, 2004
    I'll tell you a short storth ath a hidden message for Souta. In 1965, I was a young idealistic 2nd Lt. in charge of a section of 155mm Howitzers. In that year the NVA Howitzers outranged ours by two thousand yards. They pressed that to full advantage, culimnating into what my band of brothers call the Sre Ka duel. For three days we fired at each other. As men fell around me, Capt. Richer ordered us all into the bunker waitwait Air support. It might of been stubbornness or stupidity, but I stayed at my Gun and and manned it myself. Now the shells themselves weigh 102 pounds and the powder 45 pounds.. As I was only one man, I could only fire 1 round every two minutes. For five hours as Nva Artillery continued to search for me and came very close too if a shell were not a dud!!! Finally a came across a crate that contained Base Bleed Rounds, that had been mislabeled Beehive. I could now search out their guns with the added 3000 yards on the round 50 pounds of weight. My first shot in the after action reveiw hit their fire control center. The second hit their supply dump. After that round a shell landed close enough to uplift me from my position and wreck the gun. Luckily I breathed out... I switch to a new gun that wasn't damaged and fired four more rounds before P49 Sky Raiders came in and rocketed the area of the guns. For all that I recieved the Silver Star with combat V and a promotion. of atteattery's 40 men. 25 died and the rest were wounded. I lost part of my right ear. From that day on we labeled ammunition ourselves.
    Semper Fidelis
    Brigadier General Thomas B. Golladay jr USMC (Ret)

    P.S. Sometimes when out on a limb we find withen ourselves absolute endurance to preservere when others who we think stronger cannot due to hesitation or luck of the draw.
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  • From WriterLady1031 on July 22, 2004
    Hey, this story is good. I like what you're doing with this because there aren't a lot of stories about Souta or Rin as adults. I'm not sure if you've written a story with Sesshoumaru and Rin as a couple, but I'm so glad that this one isn't. Rin is his pup, so it always grosses me out to read stories of them together.

    Anyhoo, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Utena the Black Rose on July 22, 2004
    *squeels* Rin & Souta are so cute together! I love this story, can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Da Rin-chan on July 22, 2004
    OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH i mostly like sesshy/rin but i like this one also i think i found a new fav writer!! keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - Tom on July 21, 2004
    A Flute??????????????? Okay..................................SempSemper Fidelis
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  • From ANON - Zelix on July 21, 2004
    I'm loving it, not because it was my idea but because it's good!
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  • From ANON - Tori on July 21, 2004
    I love this story keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Sess\'s Girl on July 17, 2004
    This is pure and simple crap.
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  • From ANON - Tom on July 16, 2004
    If not what I suggested, try a combination of it with terrorism, but ultimately Souta would prove more powerful as he has the knowledge that aims the on aon and that will be key. Further Souta need to get Rin a permit to carry the swords lest she be arrested by Tokyo police, being from a shrine family it won't be diffucult to obtain one for her.
    Semper Fidelis
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