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Reviews for My secret mate

By : sesshomarufangirl
  • From ANON - sma_orlando on December 19, 2014
    Please finish this story. And please have Inuyasha come back some how.
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  • From ANON - BreaXStrify & Satu [and others] on August 24, 2008
    Okay....my friend Satu & I [Brea] fully agree...and this story...sucked....

    And....I'm not that picky of a reader, but:
    a) beta, badly needed: we're not even going to read the other chapters...
    b) um....from reading a TON of yaoi daily, and writing our own: we know it is a BAD idea 9/10 times to write in first person.
    c) Satu: I can't believe people actually like it...
    d) Brea: ummmm male preg....is really gross....I've only read ONE fanfiction that did not suck, but it was never posted.
    e) Rose *randomly appears out of no where*: ummm let's keep the preg to the women...that's what we're here for.
    f) Maria-lyn *randomly from couch*: I WANT GOOD YAOI DAMNIT!
    g) Allison *pointing to computer and bossy like rambling so fast Brea cannot type fast enough*: [slow ver] Stay awake in english class....please....
    h) Beckah: Get some history [Satu & Brea: on what?!]
    i) FIND BETA!!!
    j) GET A GAY BFF! [Satu: send me fruit basket]
    k) We mean...it was a good plot an stuff, but....we don't know...just :/....
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on August 10, 2008
    i´m glad sessy has found someone new, though i´m a bit puzzled - why hasn´t he simply used tessaiga on inu? but o.k...otherwise, i´m dead curious about what will happen with the pups, especially cause the legend mentioned only two and the third is a hanyou
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  • From ANON - evy on August 09, 2008
    ok why did you kill inuyasha what the hell is up with that.
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  • From ANON - marmalade on August 09, 2008
    I like the story but have some corrections
    chap1 - it's not soup(thats what you eat) its soap
    - and it's presence not presents
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  • From Izzanami on August 09, 2008
    Ahhhh, I am so sad. I had been a while since you updated and I was so excited because I thought that you would bring InuYasha back. They got to spend so little time together after he wasn't a secret anymore and they were able to have a normal life together. And then Sessh was gone because of the war before the pups were born, and that was time lost to them. I'm so, so, so incredibly sad. I wouldn't tell you to bring him back, it's your story, but I still wish you had. Poor Inu. Poor pups. Poor Sesshy. I don't know where you plan on taking this, how long it will be, if you have planned it all out etc... but if you're going kill a main character (I think you shouldn't have), it's my opinion that it should happen at the end (at least that's usually how it goes in movies, books, manga's, etc... for main characters). It's too hard at least for me as a reader and I think probably for a lot of other readers as well to get used to a main character, become endeared to their character, and then have them die, and the story continue.
    I'm not trying to be mean or a jerk, I hope you didn't think so, and this is not a flame. I don't want you to take what I'm saying the wrong way. It really is a good well written story, it has a great plot, and it's creatie and dfferent, and I loved all of it until you killed Inu off. I'm still interested to see what happens, although it is heart wrenching to read after he dies, I just can't stop thinking about him.
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  • From ANON - Inu's Kit on April 03, 2008
    I think that was cruel how you made Inuyasha die and not see his pups grow up as well as sesshoumaru look for another you should of made sesshoumaru use his sword to save Inuyasha. I mean it is the sword to bring back the dead is it not? well besides that i hope you write a lot more chapter ja ne
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  • From mimori101 on December 15, 2007
    I agree with finding a way to get Inuyasha back (one can only hope). Whatever happens though I'll still be looking forward to the new updates, great story!
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  • From nchsmi on December 14, 2007
    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You killed InuYasha!!!!!!!!!! How could you? That was so sad! The children are so cute! I hope they adjust well to the new person in Sesshomaru's life. Whoever they maybe. But, I'm still holding out hope, that somehow InuYasha will come back. Maybe the Shikon Jewel can be introduced? Anyway, great chapter, please don't wait so long in posting next time. I really missed you!
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  • From Madamdragon on December 14, 2007
    aww im glad to see you updates but sad to see that Inuyasha really did die! I wasnt expecting that! I hope you make a twist where he will come back in some way or something. Great update though!
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  • From mistysmysticrose on December 14, 2007
    Why did you let Inuyasha die? Why didn't you just have Sesshomaru bring him back with the sword of healing?
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  • From ANON - Omnni on December 09, 2007
    Love it, hope there will be more soon.
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  • From solitare1 on November 01, 2007
    Well, are you going to let Sessy remember he has the sword that can bring back life, or are you just going to let it hang like this?? Great story by the way.
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  • From nchsmi on October 23, 2007
    Come on already! Please come back and finish this great story! I'm dying to know if Inu will be saved! B reading U!
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  • From nchsmi on September 17, 2007
    Okay, its been 2 months and no update? What is up with that? Come on and get busy!
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