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Reviews for Brothers Alternate Ending Posted

By : LindaSims

From ANON - Babbit on May 18, 2005
Just thought I'd say thanks for putting up the story and giving it the ending that it had. It was, in my opinion, actually very beautiful and realistic. I've never written here before and so I don't know much about flaming or anything, but I'm grateful that you still put the story up and ran it through to its conclusion. I felt that it was complete as a whole and I liked that.

I know it's kinda strange but I really loved this ending because I thought it extremely appropiate for Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha's relationship as you told it. They're brothers, now. To my mind, that was the most important part of the story and the best part of it.
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From ANON - kallipso on May 18, 2005
I love your story and think that it was great. I would like to get the epilogue from you if I can and I think you should ignore the flame. The story was set up as a threesome and if a person has a problem with that then they were not trully reading the story very well. This means that they should be ignored because they are just being BAKAS!!! Please repost or send me the epilogue I am dieing to find out what the true end you had intended is. Please!
Thanks!

Devoted Fan,
Kallipso
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From ANON - Mika on May 18, 2005
Honestly >.>
I hate reading het fanfics and I can kind of see where that flamer was coming from. Its a bit/very disappointing to follow a series for a while that focuses on one couple then in the last chapter to see that couple shattered. Especially if you were only reading it for that one couple. Compare the feeling with if you were reading a story involving inu/kago and its all het and fluffy with a little tension between him and sess then after following it and loving them for several months in the last chapter you read him dump her to go off and do hot yaoi with his brother.
I understand you disliked mpreg but why write about a couple being in love if you can only see their feelings as worthy of sexual release. They were willing to die for each other but not live together? Does that mean that the driving need to have children is more important then 'Love'? Does that invalidate the feelings a same sex couple has because they cannot have a child of their own blood to be heirs to their lives work? If you cannot see yaoi or gay relationships as being as good or equal to straight relationships why even write it? Why push yourself to do something that you obviously can't accept in your heart? Its a confusing thing to choose in my opinion.
But in your defense I still say a writer has a right to do what ever they want with there own story and use their imagination however they please. The fact that you had this story in the het category and the yaoi category at the same time led me to believe that you would write a separate ending for each category. The fact that you didn't leaves me more then a bit disappointed. Yes you're a good writer, Yes you wrote an amazing story, but next time put warnings or something so fans can know to avoid reading what they don't want to read.
Writing doesn't make you impervious to others opinions and If your going to do something like switch couples in the last chapter you should be prepared for your fans being upset and even hostile about it.

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From ANON - Sum gai on May 18, 2005
Umm, but you did bend to the will of others. To not let them rules you would be to leave the epilogue and keep writing despite what they say. You're letting your actions be swayed by others. You're doing the opposite of what you intend.
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From ANON - ???? on May 18, 2005
Well i never give an e-mail myself, but i dont flame (which IMHO is like YOUR STORY SUX U R STOOPID) (thats not what i think about you, but i'm pretty sure you understood what i meant, didnt want to take the 1/10000000 of a chance you might misread that)but i know the feeling of a story with a....less desired ending...it will really ruin your day..
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From ANON - Zombie Hamster on May 18, 2005
Firstly, I liked your story. It was an interesting, if not a bit unconventional, read. I thought it was well written and wonderfully dramatic. I did think that the epilogue was a bit strange considering the relationship you had created between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru, but it worked in its own way. (I'm not a big fan of mpreg either.) Besides, I believe in a writer's right to write whatever they feel like writing. All we as readers can do is bitch about the results.

However, I thought your removal of the epilogue was a bit hypocritical. You stated that you should first write for yourself, then the masses. Wasn't removing the epilogue bowing to your flamer? If you truly wrote for yourself, and you were happy with the epilogue, then leave it as is. I hate to sound harsh or like an insufferable know-it-all, but negative criticism is apart of being a writer. People will misunderstand you. People will say mean things. People have different tastes, and you won't always be considered a delicacy. That's something you are going to have to face, not just in writing, but in life in general. All you can do is stick it to the stupid people who don't get you and trudge on. Don't let a flame make you change something just because they got you angry. If you want to write yaoi, do it. If you don't, then don't. Be as bold as you said you were and leave it. Like you said, what's important is how you feel about it. Act that. Live that. Be that. Keep writing.

I'm sorry if I have offended you, but it would be a shame to see a decent writer go to waste in such a fashion.

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From ANON - inu-chan puppy (too lazy to sign in) on May 18, 2005
Thank god i always save the stories i like in my computer or i would have missed the lovely epilogue. Het it's your story do can do anything you like and if all stories ended the same way then how would your's be different to toher's. everyone have their own views and removing a chapter due to one flame is not very wise. I think almost every writer faces a flame once or twice in her/his lifetime and it's the proof that you are doing good work (atleast i think that). So someone has a different opinion of your stroy and decided to voice her/his discomfort So? Look at the ones who have the same opnion. they are much more in number than your ONE flamer. Will it be fair to them? Just think about it for once.
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From ANON - Ivy on May 17, 2005
Well whatever the case i thought the story turned out great!
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From ANON - Sakura Fubuki on May 17, 2005
OK, I admit that I haven't even read your story...yet. Just the 'Epilogue removed' thing caught my eyes, so that's why I read the reviews first, and then writing this right now.
I do hope that you didn't remove the epilogue in question because of somebody who cannot even spell or write decent sentences.
Now I'm off to reading your fiction. I'll let you know what I think of it once I finish reading.
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From ANON - FireKitty on May 17, 2005
AND IM GLAD THAT SESSHY CAME BACK TO LIFE!!! EEEEE!!!
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From ANON - FireKitty on May 17, 2005
Well, this was an excellent story!! Dont stop writing yaoi just cuz of some jackass. You're a great writer!!!!
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From ANON - docious on May 17, 2005
I have to tell you that I love this story. First time yaoi no way. Your lemon scenes were so hot and tasteful. Not a combination you see alot of. I am very disappointed you removed your epilogue. I'm afraid I wasn't quick enough to read it before it was removed. Perhaps if you could send it to me. Let me just say this in closing. If that epilogue was the way you envisioned this fic ending than screw anyone elses opinion (unless they pay you obscene amounts of money to change it). OK maybe not even then. Please keep writing yaoi I did enjoy it so much. I've added you to my Authors to watch.
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From ANON - sessrocks on May 17, 2005
Hey, The epilogue was very nice! It was good to see it end like that. It is rarely done. It was your fic and you write it very nicely. Don't let other people bother you alright? It was a great fic and I loved reading it, till the end! Good work should always be apprieciated. So forget about it.
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From ANON - Golden on May 17, 2005
Awwwww you took the Epilogue out because of one person? Well I guess it is your decision. I don't like flamers at all. But I would really appricate it if you sent me the Epilouge? My e-mail is kawaiiinutenshi@aol.com and I would love to read this story to the end. Please send it to me, one person's flame shouldn't make you want to give up. Your a wonderful author and I really want to read the end of this wonderful story, and I hope so much that you write more in the future. I'll be sure to read it. Again, I beg of you, please send me the Epilogue so I may see through your own eyes what should happen to this story?

TTFN! Ta Ta For Now! FEEL BETTER!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Serenity on May 17, 2005
Inuyasha mated Kagome!? How wonderful! NOT! I hate that bitch Kagome! That sutpid whiny whore! She good for nothinig (well for looking for jewel shares but youg et what i'm saying here) stupid junior high student! With the 'sit' commaned! Gods i hate her and now i hate your story too!(though it was very good at the beganing) And don't ask me why, i do not want to anwser and you do not want to know why!
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