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Reviews for Moonlight's Shadow

By : northstar
  • From Mikki4387 on November 02, 2005
    very awesome story! I really like how you are portraying Kagome and Naraku. You arn't disilluding your reviewers into believing that they are purely good or evil, rather you are showing us a very human side of Naraku, making him vulnerable, and desirous of the same things that we seek like love, and acceptance; Kagome we see is human too, not this ethrally perfect miko. She has very real fears, and like the rest of us, has learned there is a time to love and a time to hate. I found it very realistic how you started off the story wih Kagome being a substitute for Kikyo in Naraku's eyes, instead of some N/K stories where he wants her for her, and now he has come to CRAVE Kagome because of who she is and for her differences from Kikyo. I am loving this story! I hope you plan to write more this much more angst which you are so good at!
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  • From ANON - That Crazy Guy on October 29, 2005
    Whoa...emotionally striking, stunning descriptions, the ever so noticable applications of cause and effect. This is an awesome piece of writing. Just a marvelous demonstration of literal talent. Now, with the very detailed entrance into this review out of the way, allow me a moment to degrade into an idiot.

    YAH STUPID GAWDDAMNED DOG-FACED HANYOU MORON!!!! *Smacks Inuyasha with a 2x4 across the skull*

    Right, had to get that out of the way. First things first, I ought to congratulate you on effectively making me actually care about what happened to that annoying bimbo AKA Kagome. I won't lie, I hate her. There is only one other person in that series I hate more...and that would be the failure main character that could seriously use a blunt force trauma to the side of his head. But you actually made me care about what happens and happened to her, a feat defintely worth praising you about. I sure as hell hope Kagome can score some vengeance on Naraku for this ordeal... And I mean the kind that causes nightmares that never leave.

    Oh yes...I forgot about the other bimbo I hate...Kikyo. Miss Miserable and Clay herself. Why can't she leave Kagome alone and go back to her pitiful existence of harvesting souls to just barely survive. ...Wait a sec... *Looks back at sentence, stunned.* Sweet Jesus...I'm protecting Kagome... Well...if Hell was ever meant to freeze, it sure as...well hell, did now.

    And was it just me, or did Miroku seem to have a very somber personality almost instantly upon seeing Kagome. Don't get me wrong, aside from the assheaded fool of a Hanyou, it isn't hard to tell what happened...but Miroku just got...dark. Hell...down right dark if you ask me. Could our favorite lil monk possibly have had something similar happened to a loved one before hand...or is it something a whole world more...unlikable let's say. Or am I just being a paranoid freak, and being very analytical about something that is probably meaningless, other than to show a serious side to the rarely serious monk, and prove that while dogs are mans best friend, they are also as smart as lead paint chips.

    Either way, here's a standing ovation for you good sir. You managed to make me, a proud Anti-Kagome member, care about her existence for once. Bravo!, Bravo!

    -Craving More
    -That Crazy Guy
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  • From ANON - Arwey on October 22, 2005
    SOOOO FREAKIN' AWESOME! Especially the last chap...cannot wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Korinna on October 22, 2005
    Yaaay updated, I'm glad you're continuing this story. Will Naraku be reappearing anytime soon? Or will it focus on kagome's internal suffering a bit more before reaching to that point?
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  • From ANON - wynter89 on October 21, 2005
    wow inu yasha must be stupid to not understand. and Miroku is right, inu yasha DID fail her, in more ways then one. I mean Kagome traded spots with Kikyou, and when Kikyou come back she wants to kill her. "well she must be some weird person, trying to kill someone that save them....

    good luck
    may kami-sama be with you
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  • From ANON - sendosha on October 21, 2005
    Wow, great story. Dark and full of angst. I´ve never hated Kikyou before but in your story I just wished Sango´s hiraikotsu had caught her. To call Kagome a whore and an abomination- a clay doll who shouldn´t be alive! And Inuyasha just proved what a worthless bastard he is, that´s why I would never pair him with Kagome. He doesn´t deserve to be well treated, not because of his hanyou heritage but of his lack of or ill character. I just hope you will make Kagome strong enough to take the rest of her soul back.
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  • From ANON - KittyKatGirl on October 20, 2005
    O.O wow....
    This is very, very well done. Emotions: perfect. Please....PLEASE keep updating!!
    *gives Inuyasha noogie* Ah....noogies for simpletons...
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  • From ANON - ChaosD on October 20, 2005
    SWEET! Updates! The story is great, definitely the best Naraku/Kagome pairing I've read so far. *nods* Well keep writing great fics, I'll patiently wait for the next updates or stories you do. Until then, may your mind stay focused.
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  • From ANON - Lord-Anime on October 19, 2005
    I hate that stupid runt. I like Sess/Kag, but this is very interesting. I have a hard time deciding how to view this. The pairing is generaly rape, but this is only sorta rape. But anyhoo, I found this to be well written. Fucking goddamn Hayou runt. I agree with Sess on this one. Send the fuck-up bastard failure of an inuhanyou to hell, better yet. have some random person rape kikyou in front of Inu and make him like watching her be raped. That is revenge. Is it any wonder I like Sess/Kag, the "Ice Lord" would treat her like a human, not a shard dectector.

    To hell with the fucking bastard Hanyou,
    Lord Anime
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  • From ANON - Lord-Anime on October 19, 2005
    I guess I will be joining your trip to Hell...
    That was a very well written chapter, just one thing...are Naraku and Kagome now bound in some way? Both thier powers are nither pure nor corrupt. This should be good.

    Please, update. And if you need a beta, please, send me an email.
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  • From ANON - donovanwitch on October 14, 2005
    OMG!!!!!!!!!! This newest chapter was the best yet. I can't believe that after al Kagome has been through that Inuyasha isn't trying to comfort her, he is too busy being mad. I am so glad that you decided to make this an entire story. What is going to happen to Kagome next? And what is Naraku going to do now that all of Kagome's friends have come and taken her away? You must keep updating. I absolutely love your story!
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  • From ANON - J Glessner on October 14, 2005
    ok, this story sort of reminds me of a bad dream, the kind that you can't quite remember until someone mentions something odd and the memories flood back... No, I've never had this kind of dream, that's just how I feel when I read this. I don't know if you believe in reincarnation, but THAT'S what this particular memory feels like; a life I lived before. So this fic kinda creeps me out.

    Other than that, however, I commend you on your writing style and will very much appriciate the next chapter. I want to know just how corrupted Kagome has become, now that she soul-bonded (or something similar) to Naraku... And I think I know where the Shikon jewel has got off to.
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  • From ANON - AJ on October 13, 2005
    I LOVED IT!!!!!!! THAT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!! I SWEAR THAT DAMNED HANYOU IS SO STUPID!!!!!! OH, WELL MAYBE HE WILL GROW OUT OF IT!!!!! LOL !!!!!!! Anywho, I hope to see a whole lot more of Kagome and Naraku!!!! LOVED THE CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!! *HUGS*
    KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kachan on October 13, 2005
    ...here's to hoping you continue this story. It rocks. ^-^
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  • From ANON - chanda on October 13, 2005
    The end A/N well said, this is a very dark fic, and very well written... I am glad that you updated... I am always a hopeful Kag/Inu fan, however what choice you make for this story will not sway me from reading more....

    Chanda
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