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Reviews for In Alignment With Angels

By : SchrodingersCat

From ANON - Ladyhwk on May 23, 2005
Wow! This is incrediable! Good organization, nice amount of tension. Your character developement is building nicely. Mostly though, I like it because it is different enough to be interesting, yet you have managed to keep them 'in character'. I am looking forward to more.
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From ANON - rEd roSe on May 23, 2005
omg! oooh it�s so cool you updated this story so quickly! -*gg*- .. well .. this was again a great chapter, just as i suspected it would be^^ aaand there was such an evil cliffie! but i can�t wait to read about their first kiss and what the hell is going on... so please -*go on my knees*- pls pls pls update soon!!! :-)
oh i think such a story needs to be reviewed so positive and such an author just need to know how good his masterpiece is^^
by the way, i heard that song .. run .. and i really like it!!! .. ok i think this was enough for now .. one last thing .. update soon! XD
bYe bYe
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From fallenangel7583 on May 23, 2005
so...Kagome's pregnant again, huh? ...that's my guess at least. i can completely understand her...as well as her outlook as to the whole situaiton. i agree with both of them, which makes it hard. yes, they could move around but if someone finds them...they have to much at stake to risk it, especially if they have a kid. poor nieve Kagome though, they'll still keep tabs on her, even if she leaves inu and go after her regardless. man...talk about a freakin catch 22. ....i think there needs to be some flufly intervention (does inu even have sesshoumaru as a brother in this?) go sesshiles!!!! LOL. ::sigh:: i've been thinking lately how they could get themsleves out of that ditch adn the only answer i have is that InuYasha needs to take down Naraku and the whole crew before it can be just him. i see the whole punisher scene acting out with proper cause. (it's not revenge...it's punishment!) ::sigh:: great drama!!! i love it!!!
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From JebusOfNazareth on May 23, 2005
Sweet mother of god. I can't take this anymore. I need release. My heart is literally poundung against my chest wanting to lurch forward and out. Naraku better fucking die. And die horribly. My inner Akuma demands nothing less.

However. I think I will be satisfied with the end. SO you know, either way.
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From ANON - rEd roSe on May 22, 2005
soo .. where to begin...? oooh, i know: this story is awesome!!
i never read one like this, the idea is somehow unique and it reminds me a little bit of a film (not the story but the thing with the dates)
and i love it this way even if it was a little confusing at first but .. WOW!! and the story is just amazing, excellently written and just so fucking delicious!
pleeease you have to update soon!! i beg you .. i just need to read more!! i really hope this ends with a happy end .. but even if i will be sad if it doesn�t, i�ll never stop loving this story!! it�s just great and for you to fulfill my lack of brilliant fanfictions, pls update soon!!
winkzZ^^
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From kiwichan on May 11, 2005
You make me wanna cry with this one :(...Excellent chapter! Thats sounds kinda wrong after saying that I was gonna cry...well anyway, great chapter, I figured His "Job" might have somthing to do with the death of his baby but I didn't know for sure...the BIG question now is.....WHY ON EARTH DID HE GO BACK TO WORKING FOR NARAKU????ooooo this is gonna be good, I can tell! The lemon was tastefully done, and the way Inuyasha tried to protect Kagome was perfect, sad, very very sad, but it worked out really well how you wrote it. Oh and you didn't cause me any trouble, after reading those chapters so many times, at least I have a good inkling as to whats has happend and what is going to happen! Anyway keep up the great work!
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From fallenangel7583 on May 11, 2005
wow. so...that's what happened. i had a feeling that InuYasha went after Naraku and had inadvertantly brought about the death of thier son. i can understand both of thier pain but unfortinuatly, in Kagome's place, she needs to understand that it wasn't InuYasha's fault for the death of their son. i can't believe she would blame him. if she hadn't gone to Naraku.... ::sigh:: VERY well done. i love the characters you have put together for the two. i don't know, though, how InuYasha could go back to working for Naraku after that. how he...why he would... ::sigh:: he should have gotten her out that day...he should have known better. man, this is to good. i'm sitting in my seat just about screaming, "run you baka!" very good story, still very touching. man i love it!!!!
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From fallenangel7583 on May 11, 2005
wow. so...that's what happened. i had a feeling that InuYasha went after Naraku and had inadvertantly brought about the death of thier son. i can understand both of thier pain but unfortinuatly, in Kagome's place, she needs to understand that it wasn't InuYasha's fault for the death of their son. i can't believe she would blame him. if she hadn't gone to Naraku.... ::sigh:: VERY well done. i love the characters you have put together for the two. i don't know, though, how InuYasha could go back to working for Naraku after that. how he...why he would... ::sigh:: he should have gotten her out that day...he should have known better. man, this is to good. i'm sitting in my seat just about screaming, "run you baka!" very good story, still very touching. man i love it!!!!
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From JebusOfNazareth on May 10, 2005
Man, this is better than Momento. But I'm still saying that the happy ending is nigh. IT BETTER BE!

Or at least Naraku's death.
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From ANON - fallenangel7583 on May 04, 2005
it took out part of my bold lesson. LOL. sorry...okay. after you open yoru brackets with the B in the middle, you need to close it, cause it will bold the rest of the story if you don't, same as itiallics. to close, like i said, redo the brackets and put a backslash before the B. shoudl look like < /b > that should work. sorry if aff.net voids it again. i'm trying. if that fails, email me adn i'll pass you a cheat sheet on HTML.
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From ANON - fallenangel7583 on May 04, 2005
WOW. ...side note...i'm listening to some type of relaxation music that is thunderstorms and really heavy rain, and reading your story to it has sent nothing but absolute chills up my spine and tears to my eyes. i can jsut about feel my heart breaking for those two. an assassin, huh? wow...i really didn't see that one coming. i had a feeling he was killing people (obviously) but wasn't sure if it was street fighting or orgainzed crime. interesting. just....wow. i can't imagine what Naraku did to kagome to make her lose the baby...but i can only guess. and that makes me cry.... great story, as always, and i really can't wait to see what you do. this isn't the sappy pretty everyone is freakin happy story that most people write. as always, you have created real to life characters and given them a giant rock and hard place for them to wedge themselves between.

how to use bold and italics, huh? uhh....welllll....okay. it's all HTML code. to use a bold faced work you need two brackets and in the middle put a B. when you are done with it, do the brackets with after the slash, add a B. i can't transpose code cause it won't work but without the spaces, it would be like < B > insert word and the same for Itallics but use an I. that should work for you.

not much else to say really. wonderful chapter, great story. you have me so hooked that it is not even funny! i feel so bad for that couple; what trauma for thier fragile lives. man...that sucks. great story!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Kiwichan on May 04, 2005
:Blink: :Blink: Okay that was interesting, but a little confusing, hold on let me read the chapters again.........(cheesy elevator music) .....okay I am back, now for my thoughts....:blink: :blink: .....nope lost them again, hold I will re-read the chapters again.......(once again with the cheesy elevator music...oh hey that one is nice!..)... Okay now I am back! It only took 3 tries but I think I got the jist of it. Even though I found it to be a little difficult to read I like the overall effect of it. I haven't see a story like this one, and the plot is some what refreshing. I definatly think that you shouldn't change the way you have the story set-up. I like the way it makes you think about what is going on, what is going to happen, what you know already happend, and all the other good stuff in between. The change with the times and all that makes the story more interesting and keeps "me" the reader, hooked! I definatly can't wait to see what you have planned for this story and keep up the excellent writing!

Kiwi
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From ANON - scerpixy5 on May 04, 2005
Good chapter. That answered a lot of my questions thank you. I just hope that there is still a little bit more in the meeting between Kagome and Inuyasha. Sorry I don't know how to use bold and italics so I can't help you in that department. Keep writing this story please it is really good. Update soon!!!
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From ANON - jebus on May 04, 2005
Well fuck. < B > should do bold. < I > should do Italics.
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From ANON - Jebus on May 04, 2005
If AFF accepts html and should do you bold and italics.

Also, Getting much better. Inu better rip Naraku a new one. In the end I mean. I like my stories to end happily.

AND VIOLENTLY.
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