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Reviews for In Alignment With Angels

By : SchrodingersCat

From ANON - scarletraven1001 on October 07, 2005
ooh... im glad you liked my review! hehehe...
anyway... that was a very good ending, and it really was fitting for the rest of the story. an angsty story with a happy but not sappy ending. i loved it! it would have been great to see them all a few years later, but it wouldn't have been right if you compare it to the tone of the entire fic.
an awesome story. i hope your write more, because kami knows, the fandom would not be the same without your talent!

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From ANON - me myself and i on October 02, 2005
(changed my name from red rose, just to know that i didn't stop updating xD)

oooh my god!!!!!! i really had lost all hope that this would have a last chapter .. really, not that i did'nt want ... it just took you a very long time *sigh*

well, you can't imagine how happy and shocked i was when i found out you had updated! shocken in aa good way. and i think this story should get the first place in this iy fanguild nominee or whatever it is! i mean you made it so original so unique, so beatiful this story tht is nearly unearthly .. i have read many ffx but its very rare to read really good ones, and this, i can say wihout doubt, is one of the BEST i have ever read!!

i love you writing style and just everything about the story and the ending came just as perfect as it should!

there aren't any real words to describe how breathtaking this fic really is ... you just have to know

*clap*

thank you for this little pice of a readers heaven! ^___^
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From ANON - Caitriona on August 27, 2005
Your story was nominate for IY fanguild Best Drama, so I read it, and I must say that it is really rather good. The time jumps, while a bit annoying to my OCD mind, actually makes the storyline more enjoyable. The reader has to keep up with the story int he past, present, and future all at the same time. Bravo!
I noticed in this last chapter you said that you were growing bored with this story. Let me be one to say to you PLEASE don't stop writing this piece of fiction. Even if you took out and changed the main characters names and took out the references to Hanyou and Youkai, this story would still be a powerful one! Not a whole lot of fanfiction can say that. You owe it to the story to continue writing it. (no pressure :) )
Thanks for writing!

Caitriona
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From ScarletRaven on August 22, 2005
wow... this story is totally, absolutely, AMAZING! really angsty, but not to the point that you just want to tear out someone's hair for the hell of it... and the angst in the fic does have a point, unlike some other fics were they go all sad over not seeing each other for 2.5 seconds... lol!
i'm so glad i decided to read this... i'm on the edge of my seat here! especially over that last cliffy you left. wow, what's inu's plan!? i can't wait to find out.
the time sequences are kind of confusing at first, though. but as the story progresses, one just gets used to it, and the sorta mixed-up timeline just adds to the thrill of the fic...
thanks for sharing such a wonderful story with everyone. please, update when you can, before i go completely insane with anticipation!!!
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From ANON - aleaha on July 06, 2005
ooh thats just mean, leaving it off like that...and damn aff for not having notices for when the updates are...damn damn damn...damn.

I love this, and its to early in the morning to say more, I could be assasinated by the family *_^
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From ANON - Bianca on June 23, 2005
AWWWW U SUCK!!!^^ THIS STORY IS TOO GOOD FOR A CLIFFY!!! PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU UPDATE SOON!!!
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From ANON - rEd roSe on June 21, 2005
well .. i kind of expected her to be pregnant again *sigh* .. and you don�t have to feel guilty, i know how it is to lose interest in a story and to try hard to update quickly only for the fans, but i can only assure you that this fic is great, i love how you can slowly conbine the pieces of the puzzle (but you allready know what i think of the story ^.-)
this chapter was as brilliant as the others and the drama part sad as allways(but i love it *g*). their lifes seem so tragic and the only good thing in them is having each other, but even then fate doesn�t seem to let them live it happily. i really hope that all will end with a happy ending for them and for me (anf for many other readers) because i will get depressed if it ends sadly *sniffel* .. sry^^ ... (so let that damned bastard of naraku die, he is such an ass *lol* xD)
i relly hope your muse comes back quickly so you can update soon! because you can only be contented with your writing if you enjoy it .. so yeah (but is it maybe possible to update in the next 2 weeks? because then i�m going to malta for a whole month and won�t be able to read anything^^ *sniffels*)
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From ANON - Kiwichan on June 21, 2005
Excellent update! Whoo hoo I knew she was pregnant, ok well I didn't know for sure but I kinda thought she was and it turned out that she is!!! I love the way you write this story. All of the chaptes have contained everything that you can imagine from drama, to comedy, to action etc.etc. And you don't rush it! The way you set the chapters up (you know..out of order!) makes each section or time frame of each chapter important so that the reader, well me in my case, pay attention to all the little things! I love it! Shame on you though for leaving an evil cliffhanger and then going away for the summer.....ok I am just kiding cause I actually like cliffhangers...they make me think more about what might happen in the story. (Is is wrong to like cliffhangers?) I really hope that you gain your interest back in the story cause I can't wait to find out how it ends. Good luck with your writing and I hope I was able to offer you some positive feedback. I hope you have/had a great trip(s) (mostly I said this because I don't know if you will read this reveiw before or after you get back, and because I am stuck at home all summer :(..)

Kiwichan
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From JebusOfNazareth on June 20, 2005
FUCK. FUCK. FUCK. Now my hearts at the bottom of my feet. *reiterates previous reviews about Naraku dying. Horribly.* MOTHER OF GOD THIS IS KILLING ME.

So awesome. So awesome.
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From ANON - fallenangel7583~NSI on June 20, 2005
wow. great chapter. i really didn't expect to bring miroku into the whole strategy as per taking down naraku, but i'm sure he's a welcomed influence in teh group. good that kag won't be by herself in the airport and better that they decided to finish it off instead of just running...running never solves anything. great chapter, sad to see the story come to an end. keep it up! the story, as always, is amazing!
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From ANON - Kari on May 29, 2005
wow, great fic, sad but so very good. i'm on the edge of my seat and i gotta know the final chapter and i have to know what happends. so please please update soon!
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From ANON - twistedthorn on May 23, 2005
Oh my god! I have to say I'm torn between loving and hating this cliffhanger. This story is great, you should be proud of such an amazing acomplishment .......but did you have to end the chapter at such an exciting turn point! I hope you don't let Naraku get away with what he's done, Kagome and Inuyasha have suffered enough. I'm truly hoping you'll let them survive this so that they can be happy. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - frostedglaze on May 23, 2005
She's pregnant! O no what is Inuyasha going to do now? I say kill Naraku, and let Inuyasha and Kagome stay together and be happy.
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From ANON - tornadotrail on May 23, 2005
oh god this is such a great story yet so sad. This is just a guess but I'm assuming Kagome is pregnant again? Oh please let there be a happy ending to this.
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From ANON - Kiwichan on May 23, 2005
Well this chapter definatly answered a few of my questions :)...BUT then you go and leave a nasty little cliffhanger like that and I am stuck with more QUESTIONS!!!! I am just teasing. I actually like the cliffhangers because it makes me imagine all the different possibilities of what could happen. It's a nasty little habit of mine. I definatly enjoyed the scence where the doctor and Inuyasha were talking. I really felt that the way you wrote the scene was amazing. I felt like I could really feel his pain :(.. so so sad. Now all you need to do is make Inuyasha kill Naraku and him and Kagome have a happy happy life and another baby! (ok ok so its just how I want the end to go, and maybe...hopefully...i am whishing on stars here....that this little cliffy just might mean that she is pregnant again?? :crosses fingers:...) I know I know whisful thinking. Anyway congratulations on another excellent chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
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