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Reviews for Sweet Surrender

By : inumom
  • From Ladygraywolf on June 08, 2009
    That was very good. I cheered(literaly). Wonderful job.
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  • From Ladygraywolf on June 08, 2009
    I love it when her friends are cool with everything and are understanding. I'm wondering if Hojo is going to cause problems. Wonderful story.
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  • From loretta537 on March 20, 2008
    this was a great story! although parts of it almost seemed like it was copied from your story Once Upon A Time.
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  • From doggieearlover on March 10, 2006
    I discovered this thanks to your posting it on mm, where I recieved the updates of your stories. I'm glad I was able to find it on AFF, now that I can get back on again. I couldn't stand not knowing what happened.

    This was well-written in the first person. I enjoyed every minute of it from Kagome's initial reaction to InuYasha's 'rejection' up through the wedding, honeymoon, mating, and even Hojou being carted off to the mental hospital (that was a great touch). I also had to laugh as Kagome considered the possibility that she was her on ancestor. As always, your lemons are hot and romantic at the same time. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From Silverbeam on January 25, 2006
    Wow, such a wonderful story. This is the first full fic I have read on this site. It was sweet and romantic, I hadn't expected such ah.. love scenes. A couple of one shots from other authors on other sites were harsh and kinda weird, but every chapter you wrote was beautiful. Please continue writing! And if you're going to be doing a sequel (though i don't know how, this story had a fantastic ending ;P) or adding extra chapters, I'll be sure to keep checking up!
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  • From Silverbeam on January 25, 2006
    I've only read up to chapter 11, then I had to stop cause I was forced away from the computer, but I love this story!!!
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  • From ANON - EvilKitten (not signed in) on September 01, 2005
    WOW!! *Stands up and applauds* Your story was marvelous! I was blown away by the great detailed imagery and I love the fact that you made the sex seem not so dirty... (Even though some of us like it that way). I even liked the first person aspect of it, which is surprising because most people who write them dont even get the details right. You are a very gifted writer and who cares how old you are? Doesn't that make you wiser or something? *Smiles* Thanks for taking the time to write it. It was most enjoyable.

    Kit-en
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2005
    Engenious peice of work.
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  • From ANON - DA on August 25, 2005
    I don't know about anyone else but I would personally be going ...eeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... so what you're telling me is that I indirectly birthed myself... o_O *twitch* ...
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  • From ANON - kikyopleasediesoon69 on August 25, 2005
    yea i know i commented already but i had one thing to say..i dont think InuYasha would really call her "love" all the time like that
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  • From ANON - MJ on August 25, 2005
    You rule! I can't wait to read what you write next.
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  • From ANON - amber michele on August 24, 2005
    OMFG!!! so far that was the besssssst story i have read on here! great job doing this i cant wait for more!!!!

    -amber
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on August 24, 2005
    Absoulutely WONDERFUL!!! Looking forward to your next story.
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  • From ANON - The C&C Bandit on August 24, 2005
    I must say, I am very impressed by your collection of writings. I have read several and each one has managed to put a new spin on an old concept, as well as create a few new concepts to feast my mind on. For the life of me, I do NOT know why people have rated certain of your fics as 4 stars. I suppose it’s the fact that people on AFF tend to not appreciate quality unless it’s quality with citrus. Rest assured, each one of your tales deserves a full 5 stars.

    Your writing style has always been a major plus (not to mention the fact that you obviously use your spell-check). However, this being your first venture into the 1st person perspective (at least that you have posted on AFF), I would like to offer some advice.

    While the style itself is sound, there are times where the fic feels ‘incomplete’. This is always a danger when writing in first person; the author is unable to grant the reader a full perspective. To compensate for this, the author MUST add extra detail to let the reader infer things that the character might not have picked up on. While you have done this to a certain extent, you could even take it a step further.

    Another thing to consider might be to have the character telling the story from a perspective that is obviously futuristic – as in YEARS later than the events they are describing. That way they can relate what others might have told them during the years since the events. It helps make for a more rounded story.

    Obviously, you are already employing these techniques to a relatively good extent. I am merely saying that you should consider using them more…

    Again, this is fabulous work! You are by far one of the best authors I have come across in a long while. Thank you for your efforts to improve the IY fan fic community.

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  • From ANON - MJ on August 24, 2005
    I totally love this story I just read the whole thing in one go and can't wait to see what you do with it next.
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