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Reviews for Circling Paths

By : Cepheus
  • From loretta537 on May 16, 2008
    this is a great story, i wonder what will happen when kagome finds out about her aunt? please update this story soon.
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  • From midnightsweet on July 03, 2007
    nice story. a little "worded" but a nice read anyway. looking forward to the lemon and fight..
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  • From Martine on May 21, 2007
    I like this story, i've read it since you started, just not big on reviews, but i'll feed you all the reviews you want if you update hehe, new chappie soon please!

    snuggles and cookies, K.F.F.
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  • From Poppendol on May 01, 2007
    I like this fic very much and I hope you are still planning on posting and continuing ths story, even if it is almost a year later. Well, I'll keep an eye out.
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  • From ANON - VII on July 08, 2006
    Awsome story! are you going to put the name of the new version in this story so we know what to look for???


    Thanks

    VII
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  • From ANON - acr on June 23, 2006
    Interesting chapter. Perhaps a touch wordy.
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  • From ANON - acr on June 23, 2006
    Interesting chapter. THough a bit rambling. Also, I think it's bizarre that Kouga would care so much about what happened to the lovers. I mean, he used to EAT humans! GRanted, he might be insulted or offended, but that level of outrage doesn't make sense.
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  • From ANON - acr on June 18, 2006
    Good start! Your english is quite good. Though in the first part, you said something about Kagome 'dawning on his pride'. I can't figure out what word you meant to use.

    After Inuyasha told Kagome she wasn't his master, I really wanted to see her reaction.
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  • From ANON - BS on June 01, 2006
    UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Sinead & Kry on May 26, 2006
    Sinead: YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!!!!!! YOU MUST! YOU MUST! YOU MUST! YOUR WRITING IS SOOOOO GOOD!! English may not be your first language but your writing is better than many of the people that do have that as a first language. Sorry if that's kinda a run on sentence, I'm not totally thinking correctly, your story ended! You must write more! It's too good to not write more! It's awsome, the plot is great! It got a little confusing after Sesshoumaru took InuYasha into his castle and stuff with the flashback, but once I thought about it, it made sense. Okay, I'm going to let Kry talk too.
    Kry: -_- Thanks, you took everything I was going to say, Ned. ANYWAY! I second the things Sinead said. It's true about the language, you're better than most English-speaking people. You absolutely must write more. We were freaking out when it came to an end. Please update soon. By the way, do you hate Kagome? If you do, ME TOO!!! Anyway, your writing is awesome and if you don't write anymore I'm going to................ ummm......let's see... possiblities.... ummmm...... DIE! YEAH, THAT'S IT! I'M GOING TO DIE! Do you want to have the knowledge of the death on your hands because you didn't finish a story? YOU MUST! YOU MUST!
    Both: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

    Sinead & Kry
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  • From ANON - Love that dog demon on January 08, 2006
    This story is amazing. Great plot and angst. I was wondering how you were going to hate on Kagome (nice choice). And I liked the "subtleness" of chapter three ;) But your cliffhangers are painful. Geez, pins and needles much.The edge of my seat is not a fun place to stay. I know you are looking for critical feedback, but I give 'props' or praise where it is due. And there is much for you. Please update soon, I hate waiting months for epics like this.
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  • From ANON - Rawben on December 25, 2005
    wow, another amazing chapter!! i love it!! inu'll fight with them wont he? ;) yey for a new enemy! and a new chapter! ;)
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  • From ANON - Kiara on December 24, 2005
    Honestly, I totally loved the last part of the conversation where Inuyasha was included, it was awesome. I love it how Inuyasha reacted towards Kouga and put Sesshoumaru down. It was so mature and brilliant. I specially liked the fact that Inuyasha displayed backbone. In most of the fiction, it's either too much which makes him cocky or too little, which is depressing, as it makes him submissive. I think you got his character perfectly! Overall, I also liked the whole chapter. So, please, update soon. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
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  • From ANON - chibi on December 24, 2005
    Hmm...I'll go straight to the point. I understand from the first chapter that you have a beta reader. However, after reading the fourth chapter, I'm afraid I'll have to suggest that you either get a second beta, or find a new beta altogether. The sentence strutures are all wonky, and there are a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes here and there.

    Just look at the very first part of the first paragraph: His speed continued rising as he kept his pace
    The sentence will flow more smoothly if you changed the phrase 'continued rising' to 'continued to rise'.
    And how on earth can your speed increase if you 'kept your pace'?

    On a lighter note, I love your plot so far. There are nice long chapters, the promise of a threesome among my favorite demons, and not much OOCness to deal with. Plus, you update pretty frequently. -yay- =)
    So, keep up the good work, and if possible, find a beta...

    Cheers,
    chibi
    P.S. Hope you're not offended by the rant...I really do love your fic...
    P.P.S Not sure if you've mentioned this or not, but is there going to be MPreg? Please please please say yes!!! XD
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  • From ANON - colette on December 24, 2005
    this is a very good story. i've been reading fanfiction for five years or so in many different fandoms and this is promising to be a good one. Please complete!!
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