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By : kimisan
  • From ANON - kougalover123 on October 29, 2005
    a couple of good chapters. i wonder what yusuke is going to do now that he knows. well update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Luvspanky on October 29, 2005
    I love it! Its hard finding good Kag/Yus fanfiction. Please update soon!
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  • From CelticFantasy on October 29, 2005
    I am so loving this story. It gets better and better with every chapter that you write. I am very glad that you decided to continue with this story. You are doing a great job. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Magdalen Millicent on October 29, 2005
    Please continue!!! ^^
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  • From ANON - vashta on October 29, 2005
    Ok, so Yusuke is jealous, what is he going to do? Please, he should have kicked Keiko to the curb and kept Kagome to begin with. You are doing great, you have a very good grasp of grammar and a good plot going, I am waiting for the talk.
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  • From ANON - lilly on October 29, 2005
    Thank you Vivian, Would it sound silly if I said I love you. Not like a Love as in relationship but love as in I am definitely a vivian peep. Ha Ha you got peeps!!! I love the new chapters! You Rock, Outloud!! Please continue and update soon. But I tell you I was really hoping you would make this longer and I am soooo happy you did.
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on October 29, 2005
    I gotta love how this is progressing. Seems Yusuke is already experiencing some jealousy, though it looks like he has some decisions to make. I don't think either woman is going to be willing to share him with the other. In the meantime perhaps spending some time with Kurama would be good for her. They both seem to carry an overwhelming about of... sadness? with them at times. God knows Kagome could use a friend right now. Good chapter, update soon please
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  • From ANON - Magdalen Millicent on October 29, 2005
    Awesome! Please contine!!!! I love it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 29, 2005
    omg awsome chap but damn now u left all ur poor readers with a cliffy!! but please please say that kuwa is nat gonna die he is and idiot at times but im sooo very lovable too ^^ please update soon n im soooo happy that ur makin ur amazing oneshot into a full fic ^^
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  • From ANON - DarkMe on October 29, 2005
    YAy your continuing it, ooooh Keiko is going to be a real bitch in this fic isn't she, i can see that though. UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - Master_of_the_mustard on October 28, 2005
    This is awesome! I love you! As soon as i am finished typing this, I am buliding a vivian shrine out of cheese puffs so i can worship! Huzzah for chapter 2!
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  • From ANON - VickyL on October 28, 2005
    intersing story, i hope u update soon. i love it very much
    i really hope u do update. i'm sorry if my review seem so
    little but don't be discourage. i like ur drammer also, A.
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  • From ANON - vashta on October 28, 2005
    Yes!!! I was hoping you would do this!!! I can't find a good Yus/Kag anywhere, please let this be long. It was such a well written one-shot I knew you could do it!!
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  • From ANON - swasdiva on October 28, 2005
    While I loved this story as a one-shot, I am beyond impressed and enamoured with the angle you've taken on the continuation. This second chapter is thrilling! There is so much DRAMA!!! Besides the obvious Reikai intervention, you have Kagome pregnant, Yusuke married, and Inuyasha, Shippo AND Kikyo living in the modern era!!!! Ho-ly CRAP!!! That's excitement for ya! And I must say, I'm very much enjoying your handling of Kikyo's character. Your description concerning her acceptance and the slow melting of her cold heart were dead on (no pun intended). I'm actually very eager to see her and Kagome become friends, but I'm even more excited to see how Yusuke and Inuyasha interact. Now, I could just be letting my imagination run away with me, but Yusuke always did remind me a little too much of Inuyasha...and since Inuyasha and Kikyo are together...and Kagome is Kikyo's reincarnation...does that hint at anything between Inu and Yusuke? Even if you think I'm from Mars and that assumption is just a big, fat 'no', I still think they'd make a formidable team. In a way they're both hanyou, right? Anyhoo, I ramble. Take it as a compliment, because if I'm rambling it means I'm thinking, and if I'm thinking that much about your fic then that just goes to show you how gripping your writing truly is. Great stuff!
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on October 28, 2005
    Oh evil Evil EVIL cliffy! Damn, I gotta know what is going to happen. Is Kikyo somehow going to erect a barrier around them or will Kagome come running out and be able to stop it somehow?? Somehow i think that captain's ass is toast once Kikyo turns her power loose on him for what he has done. Awesome chapter, I can't wait to see how Yusuke and Kagome react to each other once they see each other again. Update soon please!
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