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By : kimisan
  • From ANON - ash on October 28, 2005
    do another chapter this could be a good story
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  • From ANON - anon on October 28, 2005
    That was so awesome. That would be a great story. I think Keiko totally deserves what will happen. What about Inuyasha? Will he understand or bitch about it? I wish I could have sex like that.*starts to cry* Well keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - lilly on October 28, 2005
    Oh please please continue. This must be continued. I am begging vivian, I really am. This story was hot sexy and sweet. PLEASE continue I would love to read more.
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  • From CelticFantasy on October 28, 2005
    Wow. First off let me just tell you that I greatly enjoy reading ALL of your stories. This one is, by far the best story that you have written; so far. If you should decide to continue to on with this particular story, I will definately continue to read and review it. Personally I hope you do continue on with the story.
    ::Crosses fingers:: ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2005
    although the fic was hotttt i must say awwwww it was really sweet too yusuke n kagome finally found somone that can understand them but must stay apart its sooo sweet n i know u said its only a one shot but i';; be awsome if u can make a fic round their encounger on that one rainy nite love ur writing ^^
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  • From Aly on October 28, 2005
    Man, that story just too my breathe away. That was one of the most beautifully enchanted lemon I've ever read. You put so much detail in to it for the one-shot. I hope it will be more than a one-shot. I would like to see if there is anything after that. :) smiley
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  • From kogaluver on October 28, 2005
    Awesome! Perfectly written and not at all rushed for a one shot. I love the way you built up the mutual respect and trust between Yusuke and Kagome rather than just having them go at it like a couple of sluts, because they're not. Wonderfully detailed lemon. Just the way I like it. Thank you for a great read!
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  • From ANON - Master_of_the_mustard on October 28, 2005
    This was such a sweet fic! You kick Ass! Thank you for putting your wonderful fics on this site for our enjoyment!

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  • From ANON - Magdalen Millicent on October 28, 2005
    Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLease....please....please.......
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  • From ANON - xoulblade on October 28, 2005
    I know this is only a oneshot, but it has potential to be more than that ^_^ but as usual its and excellent story!!
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on October 28, 2005
    Lovely. Will the see each other again? Maybe in another one-shot? Very well done. It left me wanting more.
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  • From ANON - Diane on October 28, 2005
    Really enjoyed this & would love it if you decided to make it a chaptered fic sooner or later.
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  • From ANON - Ume on October 27, 2005
    OHMYGOD!!!!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!!! It has been so long since i have read an actually decent Yusuke and Kagome pairing! Please oh Please make this story longer than a one-shot. It was wonderful potential!!!!!!! And i'm dying to know what will happen between Kagome, Yusuke, and Keiko. I actually don't like Keiko! ...I kinda think she is a bitch! I really want Kagome and Yusuke to end up together and for Keiko to get burned *disturbing and evil grin appears*. But seriously, please update this story!
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  • From DarkRainFiend on October 27, 2005
    Damn girl! This is just amazing...I know you said it was smut...but I think you portrayed it far too beautifully to be titled as such. I loved it as a one-shot...but now I want to see more. Isn't that always the way?
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on October 27, 2005
    Wonderful one shot. The night they shared together was beautiful, I'm sure both of them will remember it for a very long time to come. This is perfect as a one shot, or if you ever decide to continue it. I look forward to reading more of your work. Great job!
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