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By : kimisan
  • From ANON - kuramasgirl on November 03, 2005
    That was awesome. I can't wait to see what Yomi soes to Kagome as punishment. He can do the same to me. * laughs* I like where this story is going. Please continue to update. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - reader00 on November 03, 2005
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!! and it comes with an added bonus! you update frequently!!!! here is my proposition, the more you update, the more i review. got it? deal? GOOD. well till the next update!
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  • From MysteryladyTx on November 03, 2005
    that was AWESOME GREAT chapter...can't wiat to see how everyone is going to react when they find out that that was Kagome...
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  • From ANON - azurephoenix on November 03, 2005
    Wow that was great...I wonder what Kagome's reaction will be when she is told that everyone thougth she was dead. Will she stay with Yomi?? Can't wait for your next update and thanks for updating so soon.
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  • From ANON - kougalover123 on November 03, 2005
    another great chapter. family problems. well please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on November 03, 2005
    LOL It sounds like Lydon is a bit of a handful. Glad that he gets along with Yusuke though. Also glad that Hiei did not get devoured. I would miss him terribly *Huggles Hiei ignoring his protests* Good chapter, update soon please
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  • From ANON - ...... on November 02, 2005
    Yomi and Kagome! I love how he cares for her! But who is the new dude? Mour-somether-or-other? Something to do with Naruku and/or a demon they met in the Feduel Era??? OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I can't wait for the next chapter. And thanks for Kagome having Yomi's kid, that is sooooooooooooooo cute. I hope she has Yomi'e eyes and Kagome's temper. ^^ Keep up the WONDERFUL (truely wonderful) work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - swasdiva on November 02, 2005
    Oh my freakin' crap, I love this fic. I think I begin every review like that now, don't I? How boring am I?? Just goes to show you why I take the time to read stories by people who really can write!! Oh man, this chapter had me so on edge I fell on my computer chair three times. Now I have a bruise on my bum to match the one on Kagome's eye. Good sweet Lord, can there *be* any more tension circling around these people?!?! I loved how you offset the anxiety with Yomi's tenderness towards Kagome. A random note, I had a feeling you were going to have her be pregnant with a girl, just because that family, as it is, is currently lacking some serious estrogen. I bet that little girl is going to be quite the cantankerous fighter, considering who she has as parents. Still, I'm anxious to see how the rest of the tournament pans out, how Yusuke is going to relate to Lydon, if they even get the chance, and who's going to come out on top. Oh, and if Kurama is given the valium he needs. Granted, he has a right to be miffed, but jeez, man, you need a 'zen' moment or something! Peace...tranquility...and more chapters! Great, fabulous, enthralling stuff, as usual. Please keep it up!
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  • From ANON - anne on November 02, 2005
    i think the paring should be yusuke/kagome/yomi just because its never been done before
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  • From ANON - lily on November 02, 2005
    Please Please listen okay, I think you should either go for the threesome Kagome/Yomi/Yusuke or let it be Kagome/Yomi. That is my opinion and hope that you do the the threesome. I love your threesomes they are awesome. I love 90% of your stories. My fav is the one with Karasu/Kagome that was soooo H O T!!! And I was hoping that Touya was going to get in on the action or Hiei for that matter. Do whatever feels right Your stories are Great and I love most of them there are a few that were a little out there but Like I said most of your stories are awesome and I love them. Please continue and update ASAP!!!!!!!! We Love You ViVian!!!!!!
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  • From DarkRainFiend on November 02, 2005
    Another amazing chapter you have here. I wonder how well Hiei will take to being removed from his match? Can't wait to find out.
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  • From ANON - Sayuri-chan on November 02, 2005
    It's an awesome story so far, and I can't wait to read more! It's so unique and the tension and emotion in this story is really great. I can't wait for your update! :)
    Sayuri-chan~
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  • From ANON - kuramasgirl on November 02, 2005
    Boy, the shit has hit the fan now. You always know how to keep your readers wanting more. But please don't let Hiei get hurt. What is going to happen between Kags/Yomi/Yusuke? Is Lydon going to accept Yusuke as his father? Girl you have to keep typing. I can't take it anymore. I have to know what is going to happen. Please keep it as a Kagome/ Yomi pairing. They are so sweet together. Just go ahead and have Yusuke kick Keiko to the curb and be done with it. I would. * evil grin* I can't wait to read more so please update soon.
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  • From ANON - kougalover123 on November 02, 2005
    good chapter. well the secrets out i hope that lydon can accept yusuke. please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2005
    omg u sure like leavin ur readers wit a cliffy i love this fic wow an enemy from her passed lol just when she thought it was over lol will the inu cast be makin an appearance i really wanna c sesshy in some fics that rnt centred around just him n kags ..btw please please say that this mite turn out to b a threesome wit kag/yus/yomi?? i cant wait till u update please update soon
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