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By : kimisan
  • From ANON - spacetyrant on November 01, 2005
    I think you should stick with your original plan of yus/kag. Yomi and Kagome s like seeing a middle aged man with a teenager, just wrong.
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  • From ANON - kougalover123 on November 01, 2005
    great chapters. i can't wait to find out how the group reacts to kagome, shippo and lydon being alive. i would like it to still be a yusuke/kagome. please update again soon.
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  • From DarkRainFiend on November 01, 2005
    That was an awesome chapter. I wonder if Yusuke and Kurama recognized Lydon's energy as well? And where was Shippou? I can't wait for the next chapter girl.
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  • From ANON - bella on November 01, 2005
    I really love this fic and I really hope that you keep it Yomi and Kagome. Wow that kinda rythmes
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2005
    love this story wow kags n yusukes son is pretty srong ^^ o would soo like to c this as a threesome kags/yomi/yusuke cause i dont c kags not havin yusuke in his sons life n i dont c yomi givin up on kags n i dont c kags givin up on yomi either awsome story i cant wait to c yusukes n the others faces when they find out that cloked figure is kags n that kids is his
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  • From ANON - Mizzy on November 01, 2005
    I was hoping for a Yusuke/Kagome story but after all this time Kagome and Yomi have set up a family unit that will be hard to break up. A threesome would be hard to pull off since Yusuke and Yomi are supposed to be enemies and rivals so I can't see them sharing a woman. There's a lot of testosterone between those two. Although, there's no reason Yusuke couldn't move to the Makai now and Kagome could spend time with each. Oh well, it's your story and I'll be reading to see how you solve this. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Obaasan on November 01, 2005
    This is getting interesting. I really would like to see the Yomi/Kags pairing over Y/K. That is if you are taking votes.
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  • From ANON - ME on November 01, 2005
    Yusuke/Kag doesn't quite work anymore. I mean you still could, but I think with the way its heading that Yomi/Kagome would work better. And Chapter one doesn't lose any of its punch because it was a possibility a road that could have been taken but Yusuke decided not to take it. It would make Yusuke and Kagome close even if it's not on a romantic level like she's close with Inuyasha though she doesn't love him anymore. Speaking of are those two going to be coming back anytime soon?

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  • From ANON - VB on November 01, 2005
    Now it has to stay a Yomi/Kag. They've got a family thing here. Besides Yusuke had his chance and Kagome moved on. Maybe their might be some lingering feelings for Yusuke after all he was her first just like Inuyasha was her first love, but she's been with Yomi over 4 years. Yomi's freakin happy damnit!
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  • From kogaluver on November 01, 2005
    You have to end this with Yusuke and Kag ending up together, that's how you started the story. I would be really disappointed to see her end up with Yomi, but it is your fic, do as you will. But if Yomi and Kag end up together, then at least allow Yusuke to have a relationship with his son. Afterall, his own father abandoned him and it would break his heart to not have a relationship with him. I'm all for lots and lots of angst, but I'm still and always will be a sucker for a happy ending for all. ^_^
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  • From ANON - kuramasgirl on November 01, 2005
    This story is so amazing. I wonder what Yusuke will do when he realizes that it was his son that did that? And what about Kurama? Is this going to be a Kag/Yomi or a Yusuke/ Kagome pairing? I think it can go both ways but I am leaning more towards her being with Yomi. I think that you give this story a great plot and you always leave it so that our toes curl. Please continue to update. I can't wait to read more of this. And by the way please do something with Keiko. I don't like her. She is a total bitch. She doesn't deserve a good man like Yusuke. Keep up the good work Love ya girl!
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on November 01, 2005
    Ahh and things become even more interesting. I don't think Yomi has any intentions of giving her up especially if she is carrying his child. Kurama had to have felt Lydons aura as well and now knows the truth that Yusuke's son and Kagome did not perish. I see a major confrontations coming up between the guys. As for final pairings honestly I'd go with a triangle here. Kags wouldnt leave Yomi when she is expecting his child and I think either Yomi or Yusuke would end up dying if they fought over her. Not to mention if one killed the other Kags is likely to resent the survivor. Good chapter, update soon please
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  • From ANON - Doodler5000 on November 01, 2005
    Your imagination and creativity continue to astound me. That you could so quickly take what I consider one of the best one shots I've ever read and turn it into an ongoing, complex and interesting story shows that you really have what it takes to be an author. I'm glad you plan on making this a Yusuke/Kagome fic, otherwise chapter one would lose it's punch. I do enjoy your fics. Keep up the good work and I'll look for your updates.
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  • From ANON - bluemoon_175 on November 01, 2005
    I think you should make it sound like a Kagome/Yusuke, but make it a Kagome/Yomi. But that's just me. But keep the updates comming.
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  • From ANON - ...... on November 01, 2005
    Yay! A Yomi/Kagome lemon! This made my day. =)

    It was a good chapter, including the convincing lie Yomi told Kurama. Though, why didn't Kurama say "Why didn't you tell us she was dead?" Instead of what he actually said? Something to do with the plot right? ... And if she was dead, wouldn't her soul go back to Kikyou or would it just go on to the Reikai? So confused...

    ANYWAY, please keep up the wonderful, wonderful work (especially with any future Yomi/Kagome scenes ^.~) and update soon please!
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