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By : Xakana
  • From ANON - fallenangel7583~nsi on December 20, 2005
    wow. so, i should have gone to bed an hour and a half ago...but i kept seeing this fic on the web and finally was like, hey, i want to read something good. and good it is. you have a very well written story here; the sentence structure is well done and your characters are right on key. i have NEVER read about inuyasha ever doing anything as level as actually waiting until he was human to give Yukio a fair fight. honestly a great plot device. VERY well done!!!! i'm worried about how fast kagome dissapeared though. that's a little off...at least for now. but to be pregnant with her rapist's kid...that's harsh. i love how you haven't glorified the rape position. to many stories have i read that a girl has been raped and flees into another man's bed (namely inu's) to get over her 'trauma'. the being afraid and self hate...very well done. i want to pop miroku though for being all mopey...but it's understandable. damn. all together, VERY well done!!!!
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  • From ANON - pat on December 19, 2005
    Man this is very sad VERY sad i cant wait to hear some more so plz plz plz contine on with is deep dark storie
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  • From ANON - chanda on December 19, 2005
    LOL on the A/N how funny. Omg she having that bastards baby, poor girl, I know its not the kids fault, still that has to be hard a constent reminder. And now to be beaten by a slave driver, I loved how you tied Souta(sp) in. Question how did Kagome vanish?

    This story is amazing, it has really kept me on the edge of my seat. I always look everyday to see if you posted. LOL

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Amanda-chan on December 18, 2005
    *dies* omg... I cant wait to see what happens next. You planned this fic out well and I hope to see chapters just as good as the ones I have read so far!!!! I praise you my firned!! ~Amanda-chan
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  • From ANON - Evil Overlord on December 18, 2005
    **sighs** If I weren't married, I'd offer to have your babies. ^_^ Soutassister pointed me at this story, and *man* am I ever glad she did! *God*, but this story *rules*! All too often, rape in fics are handled....less than realistically. It's *so* nice to see a story where it *is*. The slow build-up was, I must say, well done. I just...heck, where do I start...LOL Inuyasha's reaction, before and after Kagome got raped, have been *so* spot-on. Kagome's reactions in general -- from starting to date Yukio to begin with, and going from there -- have been, too. Poor Miroku though, I just wanna hug the stuffings out of the poor guy. It has to hurt, that Kagome doesn't trust him anymore, and actually acts *afraid* of him. I think that Inuyasha is right though, that Kagome is skittish around Miroku because of his letcherous tendencies. I'm actually a bit surprised though, that Sango hasn't tried comforting Kagome after one of her nightmares. Although Sango probably doesnt' have a *clue* on how to go about doing such a thing. [trust me, I sure as heck didn't the time I went on a trip with a friend and *she* had nightmares about when she was attacked....] And when Inuyasha went after Yukio...and he tried stabbing Inu with the glass.....I'm afraid I chuckled a bit and said "he's had a hole punched through his stomach, boy, try again." That Inuyasha had the foresight to go after Yukio on his human night though....heh. It did surprise me a wee bit, but only because he kept a far more level head about it than I would have. I mean after all, had he gone as a hanyou, then there was the risk that his hat would have gotten knocked off, or he'd have gotten carried away and actually killed Yukio.... Better that he beat the sot up as a human. ^_^

    Although...evil *evil* cliffie!! Will *definatly* be looking forward to more!!
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  • From ANON - chubbers on December 18, 2005
    why cant i see the story?!?!?!
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  • From on December 17, 2005
    WOW im speechless this si really good i like it its just so awesome i actually cried throughout that whole story please update soon
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  • From ANON - pat on December 17, 2005
    ooooo the suspence its killing meeeeeee!!!!!
    o and can u plz hurry i love this storie plz plz plzupdate soon!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - chanda on December 17, 2005
    OH the cruelness...*pouting.* Still another wonderful chapter.

    I wonder what happened to Kagome? Please dont leave me hanging for long.


    Chanda

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  • From ANON - kristi on December 17, 2005
    omg dont leave me hanging like that!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - chubbers on December 14, 2005
    wow that took a looong time to update.... hopefully .the next chapter wont take as long, but im still glad your sticking with this stor. i get sooooo annoyed wen people give up in the middle of a story!!!! *grrrr*
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  • From ANON - wj on December 14, 2005
    I reviewed on mm.org but I just thought of something. The police have already seen Inuyasha. When Youkio describes the black-haired boy that attacked him, it will not match Inuyasha's hanyou appearance. Plus, hanyou Inuyasha will heal within a day or two and if the police do go see him again, he will not appear to have been in a fight or cut by glass on the face like Youkio will no doubt tell the police. You are very clever...very, very clever. ^_^
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  • From ANON - pat on December 13, 2005
    AWSOME HE KICKED HIS AS STRAIGHT AAAAAAA YA WOOH WOOH WOOH lol hell ya that kick ass he learn his lesson
    oooooo man im so happy right now o man ok plz come up with another chapter plz i need more to read
    P.S. THAT WAS AWSOME HAHA ok im done O GOD WAAAAAAAA HA HA HA HA LOL
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  • From ANON - chanda on December 13, 2005
    Wow, I 'm speechless, that chapter kicked ass, Go Inuyasha go...lol
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  • From ANON - InuyashaDreamGirl on December 13, 2005
    OMg! THat was good. Yukio diserved to be beatin like that he harmed Kagome 4 life! I think. Well if i ever got raped. I tell you now i would never forget it. Well, Update A.S.A.P!!!

    thanks

    ~Dream Girl
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