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Reviews for A Rickety Bridge

By : stetsuntam
  • From citrusbaby on April 02, 2007
    o.m.g. this is seriously one of my all time favorite fics. i love your characterization and the way you're able to illustrate emotions so clearly. love this chapter so much! haha, poor miroku, if he were only able to figure out what the hell he wanted. i didn't know that he was so suspicious. the chapters before all had him believing that he was the villain, but now he's acting as though sango is the one playing with his feelings. thanks so much for sending me an email about your update.

    looking forward to your next chapter
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  • From quirkyslayer on April 02, 2007
    Guh, what a romantic and hot chapter, and it was so tense at the end. Thank you for notifying me about your update. It was an enjoyable read and this is definitely one of the last of my favorite ongoing fics in the Inuyasha fandom. You do a wonderful job with Miroku/Sango, and I can't wait to see your next update. Splendid job.
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  • From kylkiluu on February 25, 2007
    Wow, awesome story! I love it. Definitely my favorite MirokuxSango!
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  • From ANON - citrus baby on January 12, 2007
    Omg omg. I LOVE this fic. I always hated it when authors portrayed Miroku not sexually experienced, that his pervertedness was just a cover up, and that he was without a doubt going to do anything for Sango, and blah blah. The last chapter, the last LINE, did it for me. I'm leaving my email address. If you ever make a mailing list, please add my address to the link! I'd love to know when you update.
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  • From ANON - Anita on January 11, 2007
    Eeeeee! Yay! That was like, women's lib and sexiness and just amazingness all rolled into one. I'm so excited for Miroku and Sango. I can't wait until he either demands she call him by name (imagine how he'd do that... ^.~) or she finally slips up/gives in. I can't wait for the next chapter. Great job.
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  • From ANON - pickle on January 11, 2007
    That last chapter (6) was terribly beautiful. I love how you've fleshed out Miroku, you have a great insight into the character.

    I'm really looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Jill on January 08, 2007
    I do hope this isn't the last chapter! I think you're protraying Miroku in a VERY realistic way which is awesome, but I want a happier/sappier ending! XP
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  • From ANON - Mmoirai on January 08, 2007
    Nicely written! I remember seeing your story nominated a while ago and meant to read it, but somehow lost track of it. I'm glad to have come across it tonight. I love your first six chapters and am eagerly awaiting your next! You have the characterizations down perfectly! Bravo!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2007
    THIS STORY IS SO CUTE PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - quirkyslayer on January 05, 2007
    OH! What a great chapter. The ending was a bit heartbreaking, but I'm confident you'll get them through it. I'm so glad you updated again. I was going through Miroku/Sango withdrawal, and this has to be my favorite continuation story of them. Beautiful job as always! And thanks so much for the update email. It took me awhile, but I managed to read it and I am not disappointed! *huggles*
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  • From ANON - Jess340 on December 31, 2006
    I really wish you would update this story, because it's so damn good! I keep checking back in hopes that you may have updated it. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Ninnik on December 30, 2006
    Again, I have to say it's poetry. The way you've expressed Sango and especially Miroku's feelings, and especially in the last scene of chapter six, is so perfect and so well-written; it just flows so well, I don't know what to say. I'm glad it made the houshi think. You've also managed to avoid clichèes somehow, so kudos to you. It's one of the most if not THE most refreshing Inuyasha story I've read, not to mention Sango/Miroku story.
    I wrote a better and more detailed review than this last month, but AdultFanfiction swallowed it up because it got to be too long. Apparently I shouldn't have used up all that space quoting my favourite part of chapter six. :)

    Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Ninnik on December 01, 2006
    "He’d thought foolishly that Sango’s coming to him, giving herself to him meant that she saw him as something more than himself. Always he’d seen an idealized version of himself in the reflection of her eyes. But that was a fanciful delusion on his part. Sango saw him with perfect clarity: not the man he wanted to be, but the man he was. And she’d just proved it. It was one thing to point out his very decadence in daily life, it was another after making love. Clearly the barriers were very much still between them. Even when he was in her he was “houshi-sama”. That bothered him so much he could scarcely swallow."


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  • From ANON - Amy on November 29, 2006
    That was probably the best Miroku/Sango Fanfic I have EVER read!!!!! GOOD JOB!!!!!!

    ~Amy~
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  • From ANON - Sarah on November 25, 2006
    I love this story so much... please update soon :)

    You are great writer... finally, a Sango Miroku lemon with a real plot. I'm amazed.
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