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Reviews for A Rickety Bridge

By : stetsuntam
  • From ANON - m.plantz on November 03, 2006
    excelent i enjoyed it very much
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  • From ANON - anon on October 30, 2006
    whoa. that's just so deep, i actually felt that moment at the end. it was very touching. it's amazing how you managed to turn mirokou upside down like that after all preconceptions he had. please continue!
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  • From ANON - David on October 27, 2006
    Another great one. I like how this lemon was so classy. It actually served a purpose, instead of being mindless smut.
    I'll get to your other work tomorrow. Right now, I've got a few Death Note eps to watch.
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  • From cjflutterbye on October 27, 2006
    Wow! I went back and re-read the other chapters before reading 6 - Outstanding! I guess even Miroku misunderstands himself.... I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - lauren on October 27, 2006
    I was just looking at this maybe a week ago and wondering where you were. xD Good to hear you're back, thanks for the email!
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  • From ANON - fuschiafinn on October 27, 2006
    Yay the return of the you! And you come bearing a spectacular chapter! Poor Miroku getting the letter but not the spirit of what he was going for... I eagerly await the next installment!
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  • From ANON - Laurie Hall on October 27, 2006
    Wow!!!!! Sango stunned him for real!!! LOL! I loved this chapter! Lemony goodness. When a woman is tired, she is tired...and just like a man, he finally realizes that he really doesn't like a certain situation. Your story is excellent!!!
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  • From szaugg on October 27, 2006
    what a lovely Miroku and Sango romance! Man, I love them as a couple, just so fun. I am enjoying this so much. I can't wait to read more. The way it has ended so far was a great, believale change in Miroku's thinking. Thank you for that!

    I thought it was well written, and the characterization of Miroku is wonderful, so easy to see in one's head. The action sequences were very easy to figure out, without awkward phrasing or scenes that were difficult to visualize. And the lemons, woo hoo! The word choice was lovely and hot and a bit sweet, and what struck me about them was the pacing. The flow for the love scenes was just so smooth and at just the right rythm, it was really noticeable and made an impact.

    And the bits of humor, like Miroku sending Kagome off to find Mushin, were great and definitely added that little it of 'up' when everything was becoming more serious and/or sad. Thanks so much for writing this!!
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  • From ANON - Laurie Hall on October 25, 2006
    I LOVED YOUR STORY!!! I like how u included the episode in your fic. It was great. Update soon! Sango really sounds like she's tired of Miroku's shit! LOL! But they still are my favorite couple! ^_^
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  • From ANON - blossomed_star on October 13, 2006
    *gawk**gasp* finish the damn story already!!! i wanna finish reading it*says in a sad tone*
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  • From ANON - Ninnik on October 04, 2006
    Wow. I hadn't expected as good a story as this to pop up on this site. It's hard to find a real gem here, but THIS IS ONE. I don't think I've heard quite this characterization of Miroku before. I've seen the "misunderstood guy" angle before, you know, the "it's all just an act to protect myself from emotional pain" and the "he's just a perverted asshole" and a few others that are all pretty much to the extreme-- he's either a saint or a jerk. Yours is interesting in that he's neither. Okay, maybe more jerk than saint, hehe, but at least he's being honest about it. Just the way he thinks about Sango, the pros and cons of being hers, makes him feel real. Well-rounded and believable.
    And the last thing about why Sango feels like she can't be with him while those other girls can risk it because they have something to fall back on is a pretty good point. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Majia on July 15, 2006
    Your story is really good so far, there is actually a plot going on. Although, I'm trying to figure out what's going on with Kagome and Inuyasha right now....hmmm. I guess I'll have to wait till later^^ Ja ne till then.
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  • From ANON - Crystal Delphina on July 05, 2006
    I was very impressed by your story and feel that although it may be a different approach to understanding Miroku and Sango's dilemma, their motives and thoughts are still very believable. Your writing is very well done and the plot seems intriguing. I look forward to the next chapter and seeing where this stories leads.
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  • From ANON - christal_chan on June 19, 2006
    I love reading this!This has one of the best fic i have ever read. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Wheezambu on February 12, 2006
    I really enjoyed reading this. It's nice (and rare) to find a good Miroku/Sango fic like this one that keeps everyone in character. I think you're doing a wonderful job with Miroku, his personality is strong and believable. Sango's hesitancy combined with eagerness is dead-on too. And the smut is WONDERFUL too! Good job!!

    Wheez
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