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Reviews for A Rickety Bridge

By : stetsuntam
  • From ANON - mirsanforever on December 23, 2005
    DAMMIT ALL TO HELL! ugh. why,why coudn't he have just lost control,and why couldn't she sumbit to him!!? por que!!!!!!!(why) u are sooooo frikken evil! how could u leave us at a cliffie!!!(ok, just so u know, this isn't a flame,this is just pure frustration) can u please make the next chapter where he saves her life from a demon and the next chapt where she repays him back?
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  • From ANON - lemon_ice on December 22, 2005
    lol, i love the last line that she thinks "she was in trouble" LOL! great!
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  • From ANON - chibi_sanoku105 on December 22, 2005
    WOAH!! That was totallly hot!!
    I can't believe all Miroku had to do to get into bed with her was kiss her!!! What if Shippou or Kirara walked in???
    I really loved this chapter!!! So umexpected!!~ First oral sex, and then what's next?? Maybe Sango will give him a hand job?? To be honest, I never actually read the hand job idea. *hint hint*. But whatever. I m sure whatever you come up with will be good!!

    I absolutely adored this chapter for obvious reasons!!
    Updatesoon please!!
    UGH!! I can't wait!!
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  • From ANON - Rawben on December 22, 2005
    wow! great chapter! and lol, poor miro, he's left wanting... ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2005
    write more please!
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  • From ANON - SkittleSama on December 21, 2005
    Sorry, Rienna-
    Another (very) late review from me.

    Still, it makes me happy that you portray Miroku and Sango's relationship the way that you do. There's a lot more to Miroku than just groping and harassing women. His thoughts are (mostly) calculated and planned. Which is funny, because I love watching him struggle with his inner demons about his obvious attraction to Sango. To see him deal with it in a way that would have him assist her with a 'wet dream in progress', is an interesting piece of plot.

    It was having Inuyasha catch him after the deed was done that made me love this chapter.
    (Miroku wank is love.)

    Looking forward to the next chapter!
    -SkittleSama
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2005
    i definatley want to read more
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  • From ANON - C'Asia on December 19, 2005
    keep going with the story i would like to see what happens
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  • From ANON - Kera Sheden on December 18, 2005
    Wooow. This fic is so good! It really makes me see the strugles a player like Miroku goes though when it comes to that special someone. Update soon, 'kay?
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  • From ANON - Rawben on December 16, 2005
    lol!! i love it! and inu caught him! ha! and great last line ;) i'm excited for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - shiko-chan on December 15, 2005
    this was surprisingly good (and wonderfully steamy), in the sense that we don't tend to get stuff this good on affnet. fantastic. i really hope you'll be updating soon, and getting the sexual tension (not all of which, thanks to your great writing, is strictly IN the story itself) resolved.

    also, brilliant work on the characterization. i especially appreciate how you've portrayed Miroku. admittedly i haven't been watching/reading IY long, but you're laying out details of this sexy, roguish houshi-sama few, if any, other fanfics have ever explored, and with excellent style too. great stuff!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2005
    Oh my god. More soon. Please?
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  • From ANON - Mia on December 09, 2005
    Awesome job! Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Sadie on December 08, 2005
    I think my favorite line in that whole story was the last one ! hahahaha! You did an awsome job and I cant wait for the next chapter! Hopefully Sango and miroku will be able to work it out for there most needed peace. And Miroku didnt consider that even if he dose make her his he can still grope her! hehehe! she'll still hit him but he'll know she likes it!lol.
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  • From ANON - David on December 08, 2005
    Huh. That was unexpected. Let me know when you update.
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