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Reviews for Misconceptions Of A Hero

By : XxSangoxX
  • From ANON - InuYoukai on November 10, 2006
    Chapter 18 -- Aww that was so nice.. Good think about them having kids, that is great. But was the abnormality in Kagome's blood? Might have to reread the story to see.
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  • From ANON - Tokaia on October 08, 2006
    More, please! It's been so long since you updated! It's such a good story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 07, 2006
    good

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  • From XxSangoxX on September 29, 2006
    hmm.. raymond... thank you for the second part of your review.... as for the first... The way I am portraying Inuyasha SOBBING and overtly clearifying his feelings.... for future knowledge you should know that it will all fit in to the plot of the story... it's alright to go slightly OOC because if you really took a deeper look at the character that Takahashi, Rumiko created you will see that those weak points are there....I like to bring the characters slightly OOC to remind you that these are portrayals of real people, that the situations that they are faced with inquire a lot of emotion sometimes.. that is hard to really express for some people. To open up your views on these said 'people' ... it really will help you to understand what and why everything is happening... as for the japanese... I am simply trying to add the small acknowledgment that they are in fact not speaking in english... it is not meant to throw my readers off and i apologize if it has, but it is why i only use small words within the text... a little reminder. I am also aware that some of the chapters are not ubber long, sorry if that irks ya, it's just things go slow sometimes and though i do not intend to create an excuse for this I think it only right that you are aware of the circumstances. When you read a book, not all of the chapters are equal in length... Sincereley i apologize for the irritation.

    glad you enjoyed my ''sex scenes'' lol, those aren't easy to write when you are lacking in physical experience.
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  • From ANON - raymond on September 28, 2006
    ok first the bad jap points,stoping here and their to ad jap ,hai ,baka are anoying to read sorta kills the mood i constantly see you jump out of character inuyasha sobing to much and explaining his feelings to clearly and your wanabe villan is to full of herself and doesant make clear what she wants sort of a bad filler.your chapters are too small tini tiny i need more



    ok good notes great sex and you manage to capture all the emotions that usualy go on afterward .building the relationship foundation between selected characters is perfect and you dont neglect the seires in you stories you think like the characters and the decisions they would make CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP not the easy thing to do and your habit of using fonts and sizes was great



    sumary work harder remove jap text more sex maybe the mom toying with herself tone down our heros emotional broadcast and BIGGER BIGGGER CHAPTERS
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  • From ANON - InuYoukai on September 22, 2006
    Just read the story up to where they are in the hospital. What a wonderful story. Cannot wait to read about the "marriage" and hopefully they will be able to have children.

    Cannot wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Heather on September 21, 2006
    I really enjoyed the premise and plot to your story. It was well written, if a bit educationally wordy in the dialogue at times. I'm looking forward to seeing how you intend to continue to caress their burgeoning relationship and the interferance of their new enemy. I was iffy about Kagome's pregnancy at first, but I'm glad you later mentioned the fact that she hadn't really needed or thought of control methods. (She might need to pass some of the methods onto Sango. . .like Lemon juice dipped sponges inserted to the vaginal passage to help neutralize semin - probably started around this time and was used extensively, although in secret during the Regency Period). Good luck with the rest of your story. I'll be reading! :)
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  • From Rebeldedm on September 20, 2006
    Dam girl you on a roll aren't you ^-^ lol keep it up your doing great I can't wait to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - Tammy Lashbrooks on September 19, 2006
    Huge Congratulations!!! What a great story!!! I just got done reading all the chapters you have up so far!! I am anxiously waiting the updates!!
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  • From ANON - Crystal*Brite on September 06, 2006
    it was great! i bet inuyasha wants toget some!{wink!wink!}
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  • From Pucedragon on September 06, 2006
    I just got finished reading all the way thru to the last chapter. . . . .I love this story. . .very well-written, and you've done really good with keeping everyone in character. . .I like that. . .Only thing that bothers me is that it seems like poor little Shippou has been almost forgotten, I know that everyone has Kagome adopt him in their stories, but that's great cuz she's really become his surrogate mom in the series. . .and it would be kinda funny to think of Shippou calling Inu "dad", or "daddy" just to annoy him even more. . .Oh well, It's your story, take it where you want. . .But please keep the good stuff comin!
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  • From ANON - J on August 30, 2006
    A very interesting chapter, so little happening in this one....but more than you know is being revealed, leaving you waiting for the next one. so do us a favor and get ur next one on the site. i need good reading, and its hard to find. unless im reading your stories. ;)
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  • From ANON - Kagome18 on August 30, 2006
    Omg I think I still can't get my eyes of the computer screen my eyes were so attached lol. Your doing a great great job love the story. Serioslly wow this is like the best fu**** story I have ever read!!! Woot woot you go Heather!
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  • From ANON - Kagome18 on August 30, 2006
    Wow this story is great a torture to know I can't read more. Thanks for helping me beta my story Battle Cry. Omg I would write more but I have to go to sleep for school tommorow. Eeeek well at least in 2nd period I'm taking a nice nap since my pre-algebra teacher to dumb to notice. Lol aight talk to you later. Ass far as I know your story is Kick-Ass lol. Take care. Oh and people get your lazy fingers to type some motivation for this Smart writer come on just say Good story I love it i'll spell it for you G-o-o-d s-t-o-r-y L-u-v i-t. Now copy those letters but with out the dashes yawn night peoples.
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  • From TheRealHotaru on August 28, 2006
    I sooooooo luv you for the tip on the Inuyasha clips. Your my new best friend :)
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