Reviews for Heart of pain, Heart of Ice. The sequel.By : Strawberries |
I hope you are doing well during these times. You are so very talented and I hope you can update soon :)
Here i was having a good time reading and then i find out theres no next chap?!
Why??????
seriously, whens the next chap please? Pretty , pretty please with an icing-on top?.
Truly wonderful story; please continue it!
So, so amazing. Been with this for about 10 years! Please come back and finish it. 😊
This story is very addicting and it is really good. Please keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter of the story! Thank you for writing this.
Eu fiquei completamente apaixonada pela história! Ela é totalmente diferente de todas as histórias do Sesshoumaru e Rin que eu já li. Mas este é um capítulo para um mega gostinho de mais.
Espero de coração que esse não seja o último capítulo da história por que eu quero ver o desenvolvimento do relacionamento dos dois!
Parabéns pela historia!
This can't be the end can it?!?!?!
omg!!! I swear this is much much much better than the prequel!!! I can't stand naraku raping Rin dammit! It's good this sequel doesn't have!! (:
Wow! Am I glad I decided to check my favorite pairing category! Had to find the first part before I read this, but I am completely and utterly hooked on this fanfic. Please update again soon!
I'm gonna DIE if you don't update. :P
I'm really glad you're qriting again though! I checked for updates for literally years on this fic. Keep up the good work!
Beautiful just beautiful!!! T^T
I really enjoyed reading this and the prequel. I did have some tears at some point without even realising when I read Naraku abuse. I was really hard and thank god not very explicit but you did show how she was in pain, hurt, humiliated and broken. I enjoyed reading Sessmoura as a caring character.
i like the fact that you are not rushing into the sexual mating between Rin and Sesshoumaru. It is more believable that way. I love the fact that she did not like been mated to him, did not want to be near him and she is now slowly accepting it and him. In so many stories once marked the female instantly fall for the demon and cannot resist him and his touch so hard. Even when they have been raped by say demon.
This stories ( prequel and this one) are unique and I could not stop myself from reading them all in 2 days. So well done.
kagura want of Sesshoumaru feels like he is a object. I really feel for Rin, to not be able to have children. How will she takes it when and if she finds out. She has suffered so much. Inu no taisho want so much a heir from Sesshoumaru. Why the urgency? I did laugh whenSesshoumaru told him to them ask Inuyasha for it. I guess it is a must for him. My heart broke at Sesshoumaru reaction to the news that Rin may be barren. I like the that you put a necklace like the one on the manga as a seal on Sesshoumaru if he ever try to hurt her. Nice one. I do wonder what his grand father's fang will do since he did not turn it into weapon.
Sesshoumaru is now trying to know her better and Rin is slowly appreciating his company? I like the fact that she is still innocent . It was sad when she looked at the wedding rings and i thought that she will never be loved.i hope Sesshoumaru will not just give her a wedding Rin without knowing what it really means. It will be funny if he does though. Finally they kissed and it was at the right moment, very sweet and not predictable at all. I really look forward to the next update and more chapter. You are a talented writer and tell your story very well. Not a single part was boring. I hope to read you soon.
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