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Reviews for Initiation

By : Angels9191
  • From lara5170 on November 12, 2010
    thank you for finally updating it's a wonderful story but from the sound of it Inuyasha may no longer be alive & I'm not sure but was Sessh behind it & were they talking about Kagome
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  • From Vyper on November 12, 2010
    Sesshoumaru is indeed a very jealous man and very cold in this story. I love Sesshoumaru though so it is hard for me to see him act so evil. Hopefully something will change soon.
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  • From sutlesarcasm on November 12, 2010
    I switch between MediaMiner and Adult fan fiction in my reading. I really enjoy your stories, and hope you will post there too. It's worth a try, at least.

    www.mediaminer.org

    From what I understand, it can be a little frustrating to post there for the authors, but well worth the effort.
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  • From lara5170 on November 10, 2010
    please continue or if you've continued elsewhere let me know
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  • From lara5170 on November 01, 2010
    i just found your story tonite & read it & enjoyed it. If you don't post it here Where will you post it so those of us that enjoy it can read it???
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  • From katzeiason on October 26, 2010
    hey; i've been trying to get on here so i could leave you and some other people so reviews but you had to be a member first to do that.
    but i really love your story and the story line you have going here, feel so bad for sesshou son and that poor little girl.hope you keep up
    the great work you have going here for this story.
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  • From InuZutaraFan1031 on October 24, 2010
    CLIFFHANGER?!?!?! KYAAAAAAAAAA-.- ur cruel to us. But yes! I'm still alive and still reading this amazing story!!! Woot Woot! Mizuki's favorite color is purple!! Like mine!!! ^.^ Ahhh great chapter!!!! Update when you have the time!!!
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  • From KimIrvine on October 24, 2010
    I love this story!! I want them to be happy
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  • From FalaAmaris on September 27, 2010
    Good chapter! It's sad that she's so upset right now and is not trusting anyone anymore. She's lost all of what little progress she made with Kat-sama. He better work hard to build it up again!
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  • From Nesha85 on September 26, 2010
    I think you are progressing just fine with the story plot. I enjoyed reading the chapter. Update soon.
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  • From InuZutaraFan1031 on September 26, 2010
    OHHH I LOVE IT!!!!! I feel so bad for both Mizuki and Katsuro!!!! YES I am still a faithful reader!!!!!
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  • From midcat on September 12, 2010
    I have to say that I am truly surprised. You are barely a freshman in college and have such a wonderful dominion of the language and excellent spelling and diction!

    The story is very well crafted and original, and I can only say that I have read hundreds of stories and have seen people who even teach not able to craft a story as well done as you have! I admire you and the gift that you have, and can only hope you continue to cultivate it for it is a true gem!

    The characters have enough depth, the setting is really well done, the narrative was perfect and detailed enough to create a mental picture of everything going on, and to e honest, I can't find anything at all to indicate that you are such a young writer!

    I truly look forward to your next update, and hope you will be able to gift us with another chapter soon!!

    Thank you so much for writing and sharing with us! Keep up the excellent work, you really are an amazing writer!

    Best Wishes:

    MidCat
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  • From FalaAmaris on September 11, 2010
    Aww, poor Mizuki, poor Kat. I hope they get happiness eventually. It is a fun story to read though! I'm glad you updated, and congrats on getting into College!
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  • From Nesha85 on September 11, 2010
    No Niako has not stop reading. I have been checking to see if the story had been updated. Poor Kat! I hope everything works out for him and she understand that he had no choice.
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  • From midcat on August 18, 2010
    Great Chapter! Loved everything about it and I'm truly enjoying the interaction between the main characters! I would love to see a physical description of Katsuro from Mitzuki's point of view.

    I am very happy that you updated and look forward to the next chapter with anticipation. Please update soon and let us know what happens next!

    Thank you for writing and sharing!

    MidCat
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